【我心飞翔】五月组Assignment - 4.13
本帖最后由 zhouyu123031 于 2013-4-13 10:02 编辑作文题目： Argu 4
The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend.
Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
要求：
1. 本次为5月组成员第十次作文assignment，限时40分钟，字数要求：min 400 words；
2. 写作时不可以上网，写作过程中不可以使用google 或 wikipedia 等搜索写作素材；
3. 写完后请用word文档保存，将自己的名字写在文档题目中。在本贴中回复，发附件上传；
4. 请提交之前更改好拼写错误和语法错误，用红字在后面标出
5. 不检查就盲目提交的第一次警告处理，如果第二次再犯将踢出小组
参加本次作文成员：Compe, Queo1993, wstfw, pandazhao, foamfly, shimeng0316, jie_lanfeng, lyb342
互改分组为：
Compe和wstfw
Queo1993和pandazhao
foamfly和jie_lanfeng
shimeng0316和lby342
Deadline：April,14,2013. 22:00
Revise Deadline：April,15,2013. 22:00
40min写完了就304字，改了之后有411字。还差的远呐
猴哥！： 超时两分钟。464字。结尾很仓促。觉得我读题似乎读太久了…… 本帖最后由 shimeng0316 于 2013-4-15 17:34 编辑
:dizzy:延缓一天吧，今天小组讨论~~
这次没有列提纲，看了一遍题后开始计时写；选好题目后定睛看2分多钟，铅笔写下3个要点后就开始敲字了。
40min写235word，后面加30min后一共写了435词。
感觉英语表达来得很慢，边写还边想用英语怎么说呢，忘了想不出，词到用时方恨少啊！
70min完成阿狗，修改20min，主要改语法错误和拼写。true,true true,我看你再拼错的！！ 本帖最后由 queo1993 于 2013-4-15 12:29 编辑
下午写了，还需要修改。明天中午来更新上传
搞定，有点晚啦~Sorry！
shimeng0316加油哈，提交了记得私信我一下！【这样我就能看到提醒了】 本帖最后由 shimeng0316 于 2013-4-15 17:35 编辑
lyb342 发表于 2013-4-15 00:43 static/image/common/back.gif
搞定，有点晚啦~Sorry！
shimeng0316加油哈，提交了记得私信我一下！【这样我就能看到提醒了】
谢谢lyb批改！{:1_1:} 你的已经改好，存在一严重问题，请回看我楼~欢迎讨论！！ 不到500字，这次快很多，40来分钟 这两天没联网，刚看见··· 我尽快弄 shimeng0316 发表于 2013-4-15 17:04 static/image/common/back.gif
谢谢lyb批改！ 你的已经改好，存在一严重问题，请回看我楼~欢迎讨论！！
Hi，shimeng，改好啦，记得查收，提了几点建议~
你批改的作文我看啦~
我第一段写的有点冗长，不严谨，要改正一下！
第三个论证段论点是有点扯...不知道当时怎么想出来的，嘿嘿，那我第三段就调整为论证agents number了，向你学习！
foamfly 发表于 2013-4-14 17:17 static/image/common/back.gif
超时两分钟。464字。结尾很仓促。觉得我读题似乎读太久了……
wstfw 发表于 2013-4-14 13:33 static/image/common/back.gif
40min写完了就304字，改了之后有411字。还差的远呐
猴哥！：
小P，查收 compe 发表于 2013-4-15 22:25 static/image/common/back.gif
小P，查收
昨天没上成网，今儿补起！ 本帖最后由 pandazhao 于 2013-4-18 23:57 编辑
1hr...have not been writing argumet for too long
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