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本帖最后由 zhouyu123031 于 2013-4-13 10:02 编辑

作文题目： Argu 4

The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend.

Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

要求：
1. 本次为5月组成员第十次作文assignment，限时40分钟，字数要求：min 400 words；
2. 写作时不可以上网，写作过程中不可以使用google 或 wikipedia 等搜索写作素材；
3. 写完后请用word文档保存，将自己的名字写在文档题目中。在本贴中回复，发附件上传；
4. 请提交之前更改好拼写错误和语法错误，用红字在后面标出
5. 不检查就盲目提交的第一次警告处理，如果第二次再犯将踢出小组

参加本次作文成员：Compe, Queo1993, wstfw, pandazhao, foamfly, shimeng0316, jie_lanfeng, lyb342

互改分组为：
Compe和wstfw
Queo1993和pandazhao
foamfly和jie_lanfeng
shimeng0316和lby342

Deadline：April,14,2013. 22:00
Revise Deadline：April,15,2013. 22:00

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shimeng0316	+ 1	赞一个! 谢谢神猫！
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沙发

发表于 2013-4-14 13:33:26 |只看该作者

40min写完了就304字，改了之后有411字。还差的远呐
猴哥！：

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板凳

发表于 2013-4-14 17:17:00 |只看该作者

超时两分钟。464字。结尾很仓促。觉得我读题似乎读太久了……

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发表于 2013-4-14 22:22:25 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 shimeng0316 于 2013-4-15 17:34 编辑

:dizzy:延缓一天吧，今天小组讨论~~

这次没有列提纲，看了一遍题后开始计时写；选好题目后定睛看2分多钟，铅笔写下3个要点后就开始敲字了。
40min写235word，后面加30min后一共写了435词。
感觉英语表达来得很慢，边写还边想用英语怎么说呢，忘了想不出，词到用时方恨少啊！

70min完成阿狗，修改20min，主要改语法错误和拼写。true,true true,我看你再拼错的！！

4.15Argument4 by shimeng0316.doc

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Argu 4-lyb342-4.14 revised by shimeng0316.docx

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