Jason.K 发表于 2015-3-23 14:26 static/image/common/back.gif
Take a seat - 0323
交作业洛~23号小作文
vbox2014 发表于 2015-3-25 08:58 static/image/common/back.gif
问了一下，which 和that的问题。
Both of statements work but more commonly you would say:
哎呀，我脑塞了，是定语从句。
狮子的后巷 发表于 2015-3-24 15:42 static/image/common/back.gif
嗯，賓語從句的引導詞是that
问了一下，which 和that的问题。
Both of statements work but more commonly you would say:
"In summary, salary and job security are both important factors influencing our choice of jobs"
狮子的后巷 发表于 2015-3-24 15:42 static/image/common/back.gif
嗯，賓語從句的引導詞是that
我怎么觉得这是定语从句，用which和that都行？
本帖最后由 sundi2916 于 2015-3-25 08:19 编辑
谢谢大家修改
carborn 发表于 2015-3-24 17:43 static/image/common/back.gif
谢啦，感觉有自信了{:t_0003:}
sundi2916 发表于 2015-3-23 13:19 static/image/common/back.gif
0318的作业还没有人修改我的啊。。
vbox2014 发表于 2015-3-24 09:48 static/image/common/back.gif
这一句
In summary, the salary and the job security are really important factors which influence o ...
嗯，賓語從句的引導詞是that
0324 task1
狮子的后巷 发表于 2015-3-23 23:14 static/image/common/back.gif
對了，發現裡面有幾個地方有疏漏，第3和第4個注解我錯手按的，第12個注解是a different point of view is ...
这一句
In summary, the salary and the job security are really important factors which influence our job choosing.
你说的意思是改成
In summary, the salary and the job security are really important factors that influence our job choosing.
vbox2014 发表于 2015-3-23 15:16 static/image/common/back.gif
楼主，介意有时间出个G类的task1吗？
G类比较少人参加哎~下期继续弄大作文
sundi2916 发表于 2015-3-23 13:19 static/image/common/back.gif
0318的作业还没有人修改我的啊。。
carborn(750)改你的 找他去
vbox2014 发表于 2015-3-23 21:42 static/image/common/back.gif
改得真仔细，我得花时间仔细看看
對了，發現裡面有幾個地方有疏漏，第3和第4個注解我錯手按的，第12個注解是a different point of view is that...,我把它改成一個表語從句，你看是否好些。加油！
狮子的后巷 发表于 2015-3-23 15:17 static/image/common/back.gif
剛改好，互相學習～
改得真仔细，我得花时间仔细看看
vbox2014 发表于 2015-3-23 15:15 static/image/common/back.gif
水平有限，见谅。
别忘了，看看我的。
看到你的修改，謝謝～我會再根據你的建議斟酌修改的，大家一起加油！！