detail_yyy 发表于 2004-7-27 19:35:26

Issue41 非主流科学,占星算命-[color=#c800ff]欢迎提意见[/color]

  Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science.

超过一个小时了, :( 两天没写issue了,觉得语言都退化了 :mad:

b1 非主流科学存在的原因
b2 非主流科学不能真正的满足需要,真正的还需要主流科学
b3 让步 在解决未知问题中可以暂时起作用

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Although the science and technology have developed rapidly since the Industries Revolution, some nonmainstream areas of inquiry such as astrology, fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuits still exist as a great part of our society. However, opposite to what the speaker have stated, in my opinion, these nonmainstream areas play little role in society because they could not satisfy human need that are not addressed by mainstream science.

There are some reasons that could explain why these nonmainstream areas exist. At the first place, many people have little knowledge of the mainstream science. However, they need some theories to help them explain some phenomenon of the nature and human society, thus to give some suggestions to their activity and puzzle. Instead of asking for the mainstream science, they present their queries in another way to the astrology, fortune-telling and the like. At the second place, some people are equipped with modern science but know little about how these nonmainstream science works and just curious about these nonmainstream science. Furthermore, sometimes when people are facing a dilemma, they could not grasp what their future will be like and appeal to the nonmainstream science to get some advice and search for some confidence about themselves. These persons also contribute to the existence of nonmainstream science.

The existence of nonmainstream science seems satisfy some people's needs surfacely, however, these needs are not indeed satisfied base on these wrong theories.  Those who without much knowledge of modern science but want suggestions about their problems and activities could get some advice or suggestion from the astrology, fortune-telling or the like at last. But the advice or suggestion are useless in solving their problems even enlarger the severity of the problems because these advice and suggestion are not generalize from the facts and could not direct our activity.  Moreover, the results of nonmainstream science often are subjective and could not be repeated anymore. One could obtain two distinguishing results at different time. To those who are curious about the nonmainstream science, it is easy to dispel their curiosity by uncovering the truth of how these "science" developed and how they can get the results. In fact, almost all the nonmainstream science appears mysterious to the public, thus to attract people's attentions. When those who facing the dilemma, the advice from the nonmainstream science is perhaps only soothing to their choice and what they need to analysis the problems and themselves relying on the methods of mainstream science to make a rational choice. In sum, the little usage of the nonmainstream science could not be helpful to people’s requirement, and it is the mainstream science that could really satisfying human needs. What’s more, if the needs are not addressed by mainstream science, the only reason is that people are not adept to employ the modern science to every need of human beings.

Admittedly, some phenomenon could not be explained well by the modern science; in this case, people probably would seek for the answers by the nonmainstream science. As for this situation, only development of mainstream science could take place of the nonmainstream science. Some needs that could not addressed by mainstream science don’t mean that they could not forever. Time will prove that the answers made by nonmainstream science are wrong ones

To conclude, the nonmainstream science is not efficient to satisfy human needs really and truly. They can only satisfy some curiosity about the unknown things and serve as balms sometimes if they have any usage. But what they act in the society, as a whole, is very little.

夏天 发表于 2004-7-28 00:14:25

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Although the science and technology have developed rapidly since the Industries Revolution, some nonmainstream areas of inquiry such as astrology, fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuits still exist as a great part of our society. However, opposite to what the speaker have stated, in my opinion, these nonmainstream areas play little role in society because they could not satisfy human need needst hat are not addressed by mainstream science.

There are some reasons that could explain why these nonmainstream areas exist. At the first place, many people have little knowledge of the mainstream science. However, they need some theories to help them explain some phenomenon of the nature and human society, thus to give some suggestions to their activity and puzzle. Instead of asking for the mainstream science, they present their queries in another way to the astrology, fortune-telling and the like. At the second place, some people are equipped with modern science but know little about how these nonmainstream science works and just curious about these nonmainstream science. Furthermore, sometimes when people are facing a dilemma, they could not grasp what their future will be like and appeal to the nonmainstream science to get some advice and search for some confidence about themselves. These persons also contribute to the existence of nonmainstream science.

The existence of nonmainstream science seems satisfy some people's needs surfacely, however, these needs are not indeed satisfied base on these wrong theories. Those who without much knowledge of modern science but want suggestions about their problems and activities could get some advice or suggestion from the astrology, fortune-telling or the like at last. But the advice or suggestion are useless in solving their problems even enlarger the severity of the problems because these advice and suggestion are not generalize from the facts and could not direct our activity. Moreover, the results of nonmainstream science often are subjective and could not be repeated anymore. One could obtain two distinguishing results at different time. To those who are curious about the nonmainstream science, it is easy to dispel their curiosity by uncovering the truth of how these "science" developed and how they can get the results. In fact, almost all the nonmainstream science appears mysterious to the public, thus to attract people's attentions. When those who facing the dilemma, the advice from the nonmainstream science is perhaps only soothing to their choice and what they need to analysis the problems and themselves relying on the methods of mainstream science to make a rational choice. In sum, the little usage of the nonmainstream science could not be helpful to people’s requirement, and it is the mainstream science that could really satisfying human needs. What’s more, if the needs are not addressed by mainstream science, the only reason is that people are not adept to employ the modern science to every need of human beings.

Admittedly, some phenomenon could not be explained well by the modern science; in this case, people probably would seek for the answers by the nonmainstream science. As for this situation, only development of mainstream science could take place of the nonmainstream science. Some needs that could not addressed by mainstream science don’t mean that they could not forever. Time will prove that the answers made by nonmainstream science are wrong ones

To conclude, the nonmainstream science is not efficient to satisfy human needs really and truly. They can only satisfy some curiosity about the unknown things and serve as balms sometimes if they have any usage. But what they act in the society, as a whole, is very little.

  满足精神也是有用,为什么说毫无用处呢?
注意单复数
文章有点抽象,说理太多。可以稍加一些事例,我也暂时想不出好的,哈哈哈

六翼小宇 发表于 2004-7-28 00:32:20

我感决题目本身就是个让步,强调的是非主流科学满足的是主流科学满足不了的东西

我要是写,就这么写

主流科学决绝nature问题,但是不能决绝心理问题,非主流科学, fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuits解决的是心理问题,社会问题

b1 非主流科学存在的原因
b2 非主流科学不能真正的满足需要,真正的还需要主流科学
b3 让步 在解决未知问题中可以暂时起作用

-----正文------
Although the science and technology have developed rapidly since the Industries Revolution, some nonmainstream areas of inquiry such as astrology, fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuits still exist as a great part of our society. However, opposite to what the speaker have stated, in my opinion, these nonmainstream areas play little role in society because they could not satisfy human need that are not addressed by mainstream science.

There are some reasons that could explain why these nonmainstream areas exist. At the first place, many people have little knowledge of the mainstream science.【这个论点有点absurd了吧,用的是many,还没有给出论据。要知道美国60%以上的人上过大学】 However, they need some theories to help them explain some phenomenon of the nature and human society, thus to give some suggestions to their activity and puzzle. Instead of asking for the mainstream science, they present their queries in another way to the astrology, fortune-telling and the like. At the second place, some people are equipped with modern science but know little about how these nonmainstream science works and just curious about these nonmainstream science. Furthermore, sometimes when people are facing a dilemma, they could not grasp what their future will be like and appeal to the nonmainstream science to get some advice and search for some confidence about themselves. These persons also contribute to the existence of nonmainstream science.

The existence of nonmainstream science seems satisfy some people's needs surfacelysuperficially, however, these needs are not indeed satisfied base on these wrong theories. Those who without much knowledge of modern science but want suggestions about their problems and activities could get some advice or suggestion from the astrology, fortune-telling or the like at last. But the advice or suggestion are useless in solving their problems even enlarger the severity of the problems because these advice and suggestion are not generalize from the facts and could not direct our activity. Moreover, the results of nonmainstream science often are subjective and could not be repeated anymore. One could obtain two distinguishing results at different time. 题目只是说满足human的needs,结果不同又如何,比如很多小女生看星座测试性格什么的,很多版本都不一样,她们不还是很高兴么To those who are curious about the nonmainstream science, it is easy to dispel their curiosity by uncovering the truth of how these "science" developed and how they can get the results. In fact, almost all the nonmainstream science appears mysterious to the public, thus to attract people's attentions. When those who facing the dilemma, the advice from the nonmainstream science is perhaps only soothing to their choice and what they need to analysis the problems and themselves relying on the methods of mainstream science to make a rational choice. In sum, the little usage of the nonmainstream science could not be helpful to people’s requirement, and it is the mainstream science that could really satisfying human needs. What’s more, if the needs are not addressed by mainstream science, the only reason is that people are not adept to employ the modern science to every need of human beings. 这段论证有点乱

Admittedly, some phenomenon could have not be explained well by the modern science yet,要对科学有信心啊; in this case, people probably would seek for the answers by the nonmainstream science. As for this situation, only development of mainstream science could take place of the nonmainstream science. Some needs that could not addressed by mainstream science don’t mean that they could not forever. Time will prove that the answers made by nonmainstream science are wrong ones

To conclude, the nonmainstream science is not efficient to satisfy human needs really and truly. They can only satisfy some curiosity about the unknown things and serve as balms sometimes if they have any usage. But what they act in the society, as a whole, is very little.

kklove 发表于 2004-7-28 01:19:55

ding yi xia

detail_yyy 发表于 2004-7-28 08:07:52

谢谢楼上几位!

to 夏天

我想表达的是不能play a vital role ,不过用词不太恰当,最后总结说几乎没有什么作用了,汗。。

例子我实在想不出 :(

六翼小宇 发表于 2004-7-28 09:24:44

占的座位补上了

detail_yyy 发表于 2004-7-28 11:16:21

最初由 六翼小宇 发布
我感决题目本身就是个让步,强调的是非主流科学满足的是主流科学满足不了的东西

我要是写,就这么写

主流科学决绝nature问题,但是不能决绝心理问题,非?.

以下省略......

谢谢小宇的修改!
我觉得心理问题可以由心理学来解决,社会问题有社会学,我还是觉得它不能play a vital role。

不过你的修改给了我不少启发,我想我可以从心理学方面具体化,文章确实太抽象了

六翼小宇 发表于 2004-7-28 13:42:48

最初由 detail_yyy 发布
最初由 六翼小宇 发布
我感决题目本身就是个让步,强调的是非主流科学满足的是主流科学满足不了的东西

我要是写,就这么写

主流科学决..

以下省略......

我是这么理解题目的,非主流科学满足的是主流科学满足不了的东西,属于感情心理问题,涉及人类本身~~~~~~~~~

lakeqian 发表于 2004-8-1 00:52:27

B1与其说many people have little knowledge of the mainstream science不如说主流科学不够发达没法解释。
小宇说:主流科学决绝nature问题,但是不能决绝心理问题,非主流科学, fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuits解决的是心理问题,社会问题。
绝对了点把?个人认为最终还是要由科学的主流科学来解释一切,但没有绝对真理的时候只能由非主流科学暂时安慰:
when mainstream science failed to quench the thirst of huamn curiosity, nonmainstream one is invented to assauge our imagination for the time being.
如何?

naiba369 发表于 2004-8-1 01:11:34

没时间看了,发个图,是我的思路

detail_yyy 发表于 2004-8-1 12:21:52

lakeqian

谢谢你的建议,和我的想法是一致的,多讨论思路明确了不少:)
写的时候,还是模模糊糊的

detail_yyy 发表于 2004-8-1 12:24:08

naiba369

这张图片真不错,弄成这个形式却是很清楚。

及得原来pooh好像发过一个类似的,不过相当复杂,没能看懂 :(
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