7月16日作业 V2/12/2010 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In a cooperation of team, the people who cannot accept criticize couldn’t be successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.1 N* o$ |- l& d, O: `7 b 都快写一个小时了>< 下次要掐时间!0 D$ D% A# Y; W, N( t( f3 R ! H6 l# x" G2 B9 x As the old saying goes “failure is mother of success”, success is always accompanied with criticize. When I am enrolled in a group work, I am always expecting and accepting any criticize, because criticism can improve my behavior.! Y/ F e& X9 E/ u/ ` n6 n Those people who never adopt advices from other people may be confidence(confident) that they can perform well on the task and do not need any revise. Follow this notion, what they should do is following their correct experiences in the past and take(taking) their own way. However, can we say that is this life style narrows one’s scope and barricades one’s step? However, criticizes and advices from other people, especially from members of cooperation team, are pretty useful that can point out a promising way when in difficulty. As a fable demonstrates, a bird, a crab and a dog want to move a big rock together. Even though they spare no effort to drag the rock, the rock cannot move even a little bit. The reason why the rock cannot move is that the bird drags the rock upward, the dog drags it forward, and the crab drags the rock to its left. They are not work in the same direction. A criticize and correction is needed in this critical moment to recommend them (to)move the rock in one direction. This philosophy is applicable to team work in reality too. Accept(Accepting) advice humbly can help people work more efficient and successful./ L( l$ ^, T7 m; ?: |5 Z3 A% G9 v7 A; v Moreover, Accepting(accepting) criticize means that people are blessed with a golden opportunity to expand the horizon of knowledge, develop the potential and cultivate the logical thinking. Suppose, one is forever work in one format, one will never know what else he or she can do, thus making it impossible for him or her to develop his or her potential. Besides, other people’s advice gives one an opportunity to try whatever he or she is fond of. Criticism is sometimes unpleasant and unacceptable, yet it is this that forces people to make wiser judgment and acquire more knowledge to adapt them to this ever-accelerated society. In this way, people’s view is expanded and their logical thinking can be cultivated.5 H. H9 t/ }2 M; [ As discussed previously, although criticism for some people is unacceptable, it is an important attitude and skill when work in a cooperate group. |
56# Jenius
我看了一下,你独立写作的分组应该是“超级猴子/Jenius/kagomerw”啊,不应该是改我的呀>< 不过没有关系啦,谢谢你。我一会也去改你的!
冰雪蜂鸟 发表于 2011-7-23 21:03
改好了。优点是很流畅,读起来很顺。但是语法错误不少,特别是词性变化方面。
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