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标题: TPO05的 Independent Writing [打印本页]

作者: jeremyxd 时间: 2011-10-20 08:56:32 标题: TPO05的 Independent Writing

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Writing Based on Knowledge and Experience

Essay Topic

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment--doing things they like to do--rather than doing things they should do.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

With the development of social economy, the entertainment industry getting more and more variety as well .People under the high working pressure always willing to release themselves from the hard work. A number of amuse programs become their first choice.

People often spend spare time in their personal enjoyment, such as playing computer games, watching movies, go shopping and so on. It is known that the enjoyment must be established on spending money. People who want to entertain themselves have to sacrifice money for what they want. The computer game players have to pay for the game and then they have right to play it but whenever the game needs to upgrade they may need to pay it again. Some people run after the latest movies, they often watch movies until midnight and they neither wake up on time nor attend to work regularly. A great many of girls or young ladies spend most of their salary shopping just for fun and few of them realize that most of the goods they bought are useless.

Moreover spending too much time on the enjoyment, people pay less attention on their works or studies. Children and youth always focus on the computer games even when they are at school they talk about the games with their friends, hence they cannot put attention on what their teacher is teaching. Some employees release their pressure by drinking. With the effect of alcohol, drinkers could not awake on time, and a vicious circle has been produced. Unlike their purpose they are not able to reduce pressure from their jobs, what worse is they may be published by their boss. In addition those people definitely careless about his or her family when they become a drunkard. It is so easy to get lost when people only chase their enjoyment.

In a short, people should have the ability to control themselves about doing their entertainments. And they should always clear about which is the main duty and responsibility of them.

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