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ivy0408UID: 143244

117"The depth of knowledge to be gained from books is richer and broader than what can be learned from direct experience."
Do we get a richer and broader knowledge from books than from direct experience? The above statement asserts so. As a matter of fact, the issue of whether the knowledge gained from books or from the direct experience is deeper is a complex one, different people hold different views due to their distinct backgrounds. In my point of view, I strongly agree with the speaker's view, yet we cannot neglect the value of the direct experience.

To begin with, the first and foremost reason in support of my view is that books can give us the experiences of others, thereby helping us to get different perspective of life and the world. When human beings learn to write, they begin to write the things they met, the events in their daily lives, thus, we can learn the experiences of them and even learn their perspective of the world and attitude to life. A good case can be found in this respect is the literature. No matter it is a novel or an autobiography, the writer always describes the things happen in daily life, the thoughts and so forth. From the novel pr the autobiography, we can learn the experiences of others, which show a different world and a different perspective of the world. With the knowledge we get from the books, the famous novel "Root", for example, maybe we can earn the life of the African-American; learn their attitude towards life and other races. Thus we can know all human beings are essentially the same, thereby eliminating the racial prejudice. Under this condition, we can conclude that the knowledge from books give us a broader world.

Another reason for me to agree with the author's view is that book can give us a whole sense of the experiences, helping us form a system of the knowledge. The books are usually written with a aim of telling something or proving something, therefore, they usually have logical reasoning and a systematic knowledge. People who read the books can get a system of the knowledge. For instance, when we read a history book, we can get the whole sense of the historical knowledge written in the book, and know the relationship between different historical events, as a result, we can get a system of the knowledge of history in this book. Therefore, the knowledge we get from the books are more thorough, and books can help us acquire the whole sense of the knowledge.

Admittedly, direct experience can give us a precise meaning of what we learn from books. Only stopping at the knowledge from books is far from the way of acquiring true knowledge. Without direct experience, one can hardly determine whether the knowledge written in the books is right or not. With a direct experience, we can understand more thoroughly about the knowledge from the books. For example, when we know the fact that human beings evolved from other forms, maybe we are confused at the knowledge, but if we have a experience of observing the animals which are greatly like human beings, the confusion may disappear, and we can understand deeply about the knowledge. Thus, we cannot neglect the importance of direct experience.

In summary, books can give us a broader and richer experience of others, show us the diversity of the world, and help us get a whole sense of the experience, thereby helping us acquiring the knowledge more thoroughly. Yet the direct experience can give us a precise meaning of the knowledge we get from books, thus, we can understand the knowledge deeply.

yellowchildrenUID: 134407

看动物进化理解人的进化？？觉得这个例子不恰当，我们好像也没有办法观察到动物进化啊。。。

觉得第三段不错，其实感觉每段观点都挺好。。。

masqueradeUID: 141389

最后一天了，别紧张，一定把心情放轻松，要对自己有信心，这样才会好。

upstudioUID: 124777

最后一天我感觉不用追求太细致吧,看看题目\提纲可能更好

稍微轻松点,睡个好觉

bobozeroUID: 130435

写得不错，我觉得你应该在看看题目和提纲，不用再练手了。
不要紧张，祝明天考好，BLESS!

zyxUID: 137435

你的语言不错 比较流畅 观点也比较明确
考前看看以前写的提纲和题目就可以了

imongUID: 140258

今天既然都写完了，就可以了，扔一边吧
好好静一下，明天精神百倍上考场
加油！

豌豆UID: 144569

写的蛮清爽的，不拖沓，也挺扣题的。最后一天了，不用再写了拉，看看以前自己写过的文章，我虽然还没考，但现在的感觉是重新看自己的文章蛮重要的。
祝你好运哦！
你的语言很流畅，模板做的也不错
就是那个动物的进化例子不太好
理论运用到实践的例子很多呀，任何实践性的 课程都可以说明
我第一次评别人的文章
说的不好^_^