andyesem 发表于 2014-8-16 22:30
8.14
楼主发音语调还不错 有几点注意哈
provide necessary oxygen in summer 这些说法欠妥吧 undergrou ...
yl499235070 发表于 2014-8-18 00:22
8.18
T1will meet不是be met
后面几个都是try to do什么什么的并列短语吧?拉太长太复杂了,想办法简化一 ...
andyesem 发表于 2014-8-19 00:22
8.17
T1 happened had not reunited 这些时态多注意啊 另外感觉这个例子讲special day 不够充分
T2 car ...
cherylljyan 发表于 2014-8-23 00:13
8 21 互评
T1楼主的粒子举得好,逻辑也清楚,但最后in his cure process我觉得改成for his recovery更好一 ...
Hitchock7 发表于 2014-9-13 19:45
楼主,我们9.11是一组滴,你还没有评我的呢附上链接https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1768918-1-1.html
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