issue74 G-89-互助社-8月9日同主题写作 请拍

jason0926UID: 200697

74"The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."
1.语言表达能力有限，图片形象；（语言可以分为：speaking, listening, reading, writing.）
不形象：如对世界的描述，不如给他一幅地图；
某些抽象思维，可能用文字难于表达：现代艺术画，
统计型的东西：如股票交易图

2.语言也有它的优势：
联系紧密，更适用与较复杂的思想结构：
1)speaking, listening, reading, writing.世界上绝大部分信息都是通过这四种方式传递的。
2)图片间的联系比较松散，文字更容易描绘较复杂的思想结构；
例证：世界上的著作，特别是哲学都是用language写的。

3.应该看到更合适的方式是综合运用：
一本教科书：容易的地方描述，较难的地方配以图，缺少了任何一方都难以想象；
更复杂的信息，还有其他方式，如电影动画，记录一件历史事件。


I strongly disagree the author's claim that the most effective way to communicate ideas or values is through images not language. Because both images and language are important to people's communication and studying, we can not know the world better without language and image.

In the first place, the expression ability of language is limited by some aspects while the image is visual. For example, if you want to introduce to other people about the figure of the world, it is better for giving him or her a map rather than presenting word by word. To deal with some abstract objects, such as abstractionism, it can not be introduced well by language since it is subjective and any individual idea maybe different with others. Moreover, some statistical objects or conceptions, such as picture of stock business, also are understood easily by image rather than language. So if we want to solve these problems or comprehend them better, we can utilize the image instead of language.

In the second place, language has its own advantages. First, language, including speaking, listening, reading, writing, is fit for complicated ideology and thoughts. Because of its relation being close, most of the information in the world are communicated by these four ways. Second, the relations of the images are incompact and uncertain while the language such as words is easily to describe complex configuration of thoughts and conceptions. For instance, all literatures, in the world, are wrote or created by language not images, we can more easily understand some useful information about history or culture. And images can not make us comprehend some giants and history expediently and roundly.

In the third place, the best method to resolve the communication of people and receive knowledge is to mix up language and image. For example, a text book, including different contents--easy or difficult, can use this method that we can describe easy and pellucid contents by words and illustrate the deep matters through images, we do not imagine if a text without words or images, it will be too difficult to understand. Furthermore we also utilize the method to dispose more perplexing problems such as movie cartoon and documentary of history or giants. Therefore, we should use these two ways--image and language--rightly in order to make our communication more convenient and understand knowledge more easily.

In sum, from what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that language is as important as image and is not replaced. Absenting any of them, we can not know the world conveniently and thoroughly and human history, doubtless, can not exist too long.

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I strongly disagree with the author's claim that the most effective way to communicate ideas or values is through images not language. Because both images and language are important to people's communication and studying, we can not know the world better without language and image.

In the first place, the expressive ability of language is limited to some extent / in some aspect, while the image is comparatively more visual. For example, if you want to introduce to other people about the figure of the world, it is better to give him or her map rather than explain it word by word. When dealing with some abstract concept, such as abstractionism, it's difficult to introduce it well by language since it is subjective and any individual understanding maybe different from others'（也许这句句子可以改成and every individual can have different interpretation，强调每个人可以有不同的理解，而原来的句子给人的感觉是容易引起分歧）. Moreover, some statistical data, such as pictures of stock business汗，我不知道股票的走势图怎么说，但是这里看起来总有些奇怪，不确定的话最好换个例子, are also understood easily by image rather than language. 比如换成Moreover, some statistical data are also represented by images, such as bar chart and pie chart.So if we want to solve these problems or comprehend them better, we can utilize the image instead of language.

In the second place, language has its own advantages. First, language, including speaking, listening, reading, writing, is fit for complicated ideology and thoughts. Because of its relation being close,(这句话的意思没看懂) most of the information in the world is communicated by these four ways. Second, the relations (两次用到relation这个词，但是都看不懂)of the images are incompact and uncertain while it is easy to use language, such as words, to describe complex configuration of （似乎是多余的词）thoughts and conceptions.我觉得这里的first和second说的完全是一回事啊，我想如果再要加一点可以说语言给人更大的想象空间，比如小说等。 For instance, all literatures(这个例子有点奇怪，看楼主的提纲应该是philosophy?但是后面说得的又是历史，但是不管怎样，literature总是不妥的，因为文学本来就是用文字的，不可能用图画) in the world, are written or created by language not images. By using language, we learn useful information about history or culture more easily. On the contrary, images can not make us comprehend some giants and history expediently and roundly.

In the third place, the best method to communicate with people and receive knowledge is to mix up language and image. For example, a text book, including different contents--easy or difficult, can use the method of describing easy and pellucid contents by words and illustrating the deep concepts through images. We can not imagine a textbook without words or images, because it is too difficult for people to understand without either of them. Furthermore we also utilize the method, such as movie cartoon and documentary of history or giants, to dispose more perplexing problems. Therefore, we should use these two ways--image and language--rightly in order to make our communication more convenient and to understand knowledge more easily.

In sum, from what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that language is as important as image and cannot be replaced. Lacking either of them, we can not know the world conveniently and thoroughly and no doubt that human civilization would not exist too long.

从提纲和思路上来说是可以的，但是楼主还应该在文字上多花些功夫，有很多语法错误，有些句子本不该是一句却被硬凑成一句，形成很奇怪的结构。某些用词还应再斟酌。另外字数在多些可能更好。