南智六次作业

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IssueNo.60"The media—and society in general—mistakenly expect an individual to speak for a particular group, whether or not that individual truly represents the views of the entire group."
Syllabus:
Position:  Elect an individual to represent a group he or she belongs to is an effective way which can avoid the waste of time, money and energy to assimilate the ideas from that group of people. on the other hand different people have different views therefore even in a democratic society, the representatives chosen by a particular group through free elections may not be represent all the ideas of that group.
1, With the development of hi-tech and human society, the quantity of information and news available becomes more and more immense. It is reasonable that to assume that his or her views can only represent the group he or she belongs. Despite the individuals may be hard to represent all the views of his or her group, surveys are effective ways of getting people's views in this sea of information.
2, However It cannot be ignore that different individuals in a certain group may not share the same views sometimes those views may contradict each other, representative ideas may not conclude all the different ideas.
3, As a consequence, there is an important lesson for both the media and the public, do not confuse with the group he or she is meant to represent. It is still very important for society to remain sensitive to the limitations of representatives to represent the public and to hear the voices of forgotten majority.  


IssueNo.74 "The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."
Syllabus:
Position: Languages and images both have advantages that the most effective way of communication is to combine the use of them together.
1, Image provides a more vivid and easier means of large group of audience to assimilate and comprehend the information. However, the use of images runs risk of distorting the intended meanings, mages tend to cause ambiguities.( Leonardo da Vinci and Mona Lisa)
2, language can become more forceful and persuasive and provide a simple and and accessible way to express ideas.
3, The most effective way of communicating is by combining the use of images and languages. The efficiency of communication can be greatly enhanced if it is supported by image.

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IssueNo.60"The media—and society in general—mistakenly expect an individual to speak for a particular group, whether or not that individual truly represents the views of the entire group."
Syllabus:Position: Elect (Electing//To elect) an individual to represent a group he or she belongs to is an effective way which can avoid the waste of time, money and energy to assimilate the ideas from that group of people. On the other hand different people have different views, therefore even in a democratic society, the representatives chosen by a particular group through free elections may not be (删) represent all the ideas of that group. (这段表明了你的两个立场，但是最好在开头或是结尾有个总结的，将两者联系起来，你看呢？)
1, With the development of hi-tech and human society, the quantity of information and news available becomes more and more immense. It is reasonable that to assume that his or her views can only represent the group he or she belongs. Despite the individuals may be hard to represent all the views of his or her group, surveys are effective ways of getting people's views in this sea of information.

2, However, It cannot be ignore (ignored) that different individuals in a certain group may not share the same views sometimes (with) those views may contradict each other (those whose views contradict to theirs) (, after all, )representative ideas may not conclude (cover/ include) all the different ideas.
3, As a consequence, there is an important lesson for both the media and the public, do not confuse with the group he or she is meant to represent.(???句子的表达，不明白~) It is still very important for society to remain sensitive to the limitations of representatives to represent the public and to hear the voices of forgotten majority.  


表达的结构不是很明朗：最好能直接亮出观点，当然只是一个建议~
1、个人观点具有代表性；
2、有些时候不具代表性；
3、应该关注大众观点。
建议：Admittedly---However---In addition
其次，句子的表达~

IssueNo.74 "The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."
Syllabus:
Position: Languages and images both have advantages that the most effective way of communication is to combine the use of them together.（句子最好能分开，别老凑在一起讲，Languages and images both have their separate advantages, that<while> the most effective way of communication is to combine the use of them together<the combination of them>句子用抽象名词较有说服力.）

1, Image provides a more vivid and easier means of large group of audience to assimilate and comprehend the information. However, the use of images runs risk of distorting the intended meanings, mages tend to cause ambiguities.( Leonardo da Vinci and Mona Lisa)（别赞扬它又批它，当然可以小小提下不足）

2, language can become more forceful and persuasive and provide a simple and accessible way to express ideas. (Language has become increasingly forceful due to its simple and accessible way to express ideas.)

3, The most effective way of communicating (to communicate/ of communication) is by combining the use of images and languages (句子最好不要重复~). The efficiency of communication can be greatly enhanced if it is supported by image.

逻辑结构~
1、Image的好，while language 比不上的
2、但仅仅依赖于Image会有什么样的缺点~
3、language的好
总结，两者结合~

最好能突出两者之间的差别，即各自的优缺点~
加油！