issue66

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66"As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate."


大家多给点意见啊！！（560words）

Nowadays, the technology develops so fast that no one can reject it, with which made people who believed that it can solve most of problems of our daily life more and more depend on, and the independent thinking capability of people will vanish someday. Actually, in my opinion, the technology mounts up progress of independent thinking rather than deteriorate it.

There is no doubt that certain ability of us had been weaken of some new technology. For instance, the ability of reckoning of school students has been crippled since the making use of calculator become more and more ordinary, and some more. But, we can not assert that all these are because of the technology, after all, this is just the angle of floeberg, and we must admit that the more the technology brings us is good than harm to our capability of independent thinking.

First, the technology assists people to think which is assistant and additional. Here is an example, recent years the speed of computer technology development which changes our lives marvelous and can do most people does are so fast that the market changed day by day, and the computer had played an important part in our life and mostly used in many occasions. But can we say that it had controlled us, or even our thinking? Actually not, you can see that in most cases, thee computer’s job is to help people to think, not to replace people’s thinking. Not only computer does, but also other technology equipment, like automat, autocar, and so on do, which we can say that the technology reinforce our independent thinking capability and make our conclusion improved.

In the second hand, technology is the development and affirmation of people’s thinking ability, and not to degenerate our independent thinking ability, but to strengthen it. Just as the famous germen Philosopher F.W.Niezsche said : “If you want to go up high, then use your own legs. Do not let yourselves carried aloft; do not seat yourselves on other’s people’s backs and heads.” Only independent thinking makes he/she,they or even whole society go forward, and the symbol of human being’s society’s progress is no doubt the technology’s progress which is thinking’s ultimateness, evolution and extend. In short, the technology always vegetates under people’s independent thinking.

Thirdly, and the most important one reason is the problems technology has brought us which we have to deal with.Noting is real good and perfect,anything has its bad side.This shows that the technology does not come along, but with many other problems.What we should do? How can we handle it? Many questions comes out.Due to the productive industry, the water pollution has been concerned. Due to the car industry, the air pollution also has been concerned. Due to the global weapon competition, the safety problem has been debated heatedly. Because of these, we must find ways to solve all these problems and questions;otherwise, our society and world would become worse and worse. The important mission to do so depends on our independent thinking ability and we must trust ourselves who can surely think out ways by our fresh ideas and carefulness thought.

Anyway, technology does negative effects on some certain ability of us, but what technology does more to us is to facilitate our independent thinking capability, which can’t be deteriorated when people rely more and more on technology to solve problems.

megcityUID：124421

我写的这个没有限定时间的，所以写得多了点，要是限定时间，肯定写不了这么多，还有就是我打字速度不行，中文还行，英文就，哎..........

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哈哈，是啊，more and more 是多了点啊，还有，谢谢paisley，被你说对了，我有好多都是心里想中文，然后用英文翻译出来，哎，现在好象还做不到用英文来思维啊，语法错误嘛，是多了点，我会再修改修改。谢谢指点，我怕我帮别人改作文的能力还没吧，但是提点结构和想法还是可以的。嘿嘿，我会加油的！

megcityUID：124421

对了，paisley，你说的“虽然有一个感觉并不恰当”这是什么意思？什么感觉？o_#

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Thirdly, and the most important  reason is  the problems which we have to deal with that the technology has brought us .
  这句话有语法错误吗？

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虽然有一个感觉并不恰当”

我是说，有一个论点，感觉上不太恰当. 我在文中给你指出了,为什么不恰当.

Thirdly, and the most important reason is the problems which we have to deal with that the technology has brought us .

严格来说没有语法错误，但是搭配非常奇怪，同时很费解. 感觉有又点罗嗦，又有点绕.

    paisley，我当时写的时候也觉得，中文的意思就是第三个，也是最重要的一个理由是科技发展带给我们的问题。你帮我想想这句话用英文怎么写比较好啊？还有就是现在有些自己想的不一定能用英文表达出来啊，郁闷，怎么办？背文章有用吗？

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这样啊，对啊，我开始怎么那么写啊？真是...第一次只想着快写完，有想着G的作文要写得奇怪点，哎......谢谢blooming_lee姐姐的提示，“姐姐”你几岁啊？应该比我大吧！不知道，随便吧
还是谢谢你啊！~