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发表于 2003-6-30 05:38:18 |显示全部楼层 |倒序浏览
there is so much competition nowaday,full of all the fields and all of one's life.Nobody can
reject competition and also nobody can underestimate the benefit of the competition to society.

Competition,which is easy to understand,is a type of match between persons or groups or even nations,which finally produce the winner and the loser. According to Darwing's theory about the survival principle during the process of nature selection,the winner will survive and the loser will eliminate.it may seem terrible for a person but it is so beneficial to society.

First,it would be much more efficient for our society when the losser eliminate in the competition.In the nature history,there were so many species which had disappeared because their disability in the nature competition,and the remain are much stronger or have the special ability for their survivial.It is equal in the human society.The engagement of a company will be a good example for it.When people invite applications for job,they must show their abilities and adaptions to the position.And always the more capable one will be engaged.It is so cruel for the reject,but for the company,it will get much more benefit from choosing the more capable one rather than the reject,who will do better in his job and then give the company to have more chance to make more profit.and this will also benefit the society.The capability of the working people determine the development of a society. therefor, the society put away the discompetent people just like to put away the cumbrance of the development.

On the other hand,because nobody want to be the forsaken of the society,competition give people so much motivity to enhence their faculty and reinforce their power.To win in the Olympics Games stimulate the athlete to gain so tough training.And it is easy to understand why the world-record of the hectometre race of human has been reduced only to less than 9 sec.The record show that nowaday people can run faster and jump higher even than they do ten years ago.In school,competition make students to work much harder ,and also when they are members of a group,they will improve their team spirits when compete with other groups.In another field,such as economy,the competition between two companies may cause the improve of the quality of their product or their service.Even when the companies fall in the tragic of depreciation just to defeat their rivals, the public can share their depreciation and get benefit from it.

howerver,it can't be agreed to the people who defeate their rivals in illegimate way: the athlete take the incitant; Some people defame others just to win the position of the goverment;the Nation invade anothers just for the nature resource,and so on.All these can do nothing beneficial but only harmful to others.the pivot of competition is to improve ourselvs ,not to undermine others.

In conclusion,competition ,conducted in proper way, can stimulate people to make great efforts to enhence their power and throw off the nebbish of the society,accordingly,promote the development of the society.hence,it is beneficial and profitable to encourage competition in any fields.
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发表于 2003-6-30 06:29:31 |显示全部楼层
忘记报题目了:
2 "Competition is ultimately more beneficial than detrimental to society."

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发表于 2003-6-30 20:04:14 |显示全部楼层
paisley,太感谢你了。。。。我一定要努力了。。。。。

有一个问题想请教一下:关于那个the remain,我原来以为可以像the young 这种用法呢,不对吗?

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发表于 2003-6-30 20:55:22 |显示全部楼层
哦。。。对阿,忘记这个了。。。。谢谢。。。。

如果使用the remained有没有错呢?

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发表于 2003-7-1 00:02:10 |显示全部楼层
哦,不好意思,我的意思没说清楚:
我是指不在其中加one,也就是不用the one remained,而是沿用the young这种结构,用remained做为类似形容词,the remained代表留下的那一部分人,这样可以吗?

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发表于 2003-7-1 03:43:48 |显示全部楼层
对于这种the+adj的用法不是很清楚,大家能给点意见吗?

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发表于 2003-7-1 16:19:13 |显示全部楼层
谢谢paisley.....................:)

你的发贴数很惊人哦......

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