to vivian小太阳同学: 《十天搞定托福作文》上p15上说-the last sentence of each paragraph should be a concluding sentence. 这样也许到下段的过渡更自然些吧,anyway,你的文章遣词和句型上很不错,整体很好的;NC3的句型用得很娴熟哈.
>>>哦,随便也 to c老师,我看了《十天搞定托福作文》的第一章,就是没看懂练习中的essay 2讲bicycle的那篇怎么就圆满了:confused:.
to jessie同学: 我觉得你的三个排比开头问句能对应住下边另三个例子段的话,效果会更好.因为同学给我看的一写作书上这样说开头段-a well-written thesis statement not only pinpoints the main idea or topic,but also indicates the major subdivisions of the topic. in other words, it tells both the writer and the reader what the essay is driving home,and what major points are planned to help.
to 扁舟子001同学:看完你的第一个例子段,我突然意识到我们有一共同缺点,即举出的例子总很抽象不是细节的充分展开,在那段中你似乎花了大半的篇幅,使用同意的不同的语句表达,来说adult ceremonies如何举行的,而非how the adult ceremonies make a person an adult., 对比看vivian小太阳同学第一个例子段中have many rights如何写的,我们真的是在牛皮轧牛皮哈.:lol:lol
也请教三个语法题.tankx.
1.Almost ( every A) the hereditary (material B) of (an individual C) organism
resides (in the D) chromosomes.
答案为A 但改为什么? 且语法题中B material 不是常为复数吗?
2.搞不清T中有没考 which were all 与which all were 区别的考点.
3.Guitarlike instruments have exist(>> existed) since ancient times, but the first written mention of the guitar itself is from the fourteenth century.
想问此句中itself在句中做何成分, 独立主格?
:)