“No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
In this society, things are composed by many different elements .When we study one field ,we should apply different fields of knowledge to the field which we learn.Borrowing experiences and knowledge from other fields of study has indeed brought great progress in many subjects. biochemistry,molecular biology and so on are undoubtedly the hybirds of subjects originally thought far distant from another.
BUt such phenomenon by no means indicates that only through sharing academic light of outsiders ,can an area of study make its frog-leap. In fact ,truly revolutionary advancement in some fields of study ,Newton's Law of Gravitation and Einstein's Theory of Relativity,for instance, are utterly genius ' flash of wisdom,little of which is borowed from other subjects.
As for factors contributing to an academic subjects' signicant growth, they include many apart from sharing the outsiders' intelligence ,such as the long-term academic accumulation ,the appropriate social and economic support,the good-timing birth of geniuses and so on.
BEN评:
同学,你要好好梳理下你的习作。首段中心论点--分论点各段(理由+例子)--结尾段。
需要补的基本功:从网上下载The Elements of Style这本写作小书,重点看句子和段落的写作。