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Views vary with regard whether newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign. As far as I am concerned, I disagree that newspapers and magazines are entitled as the best way to learn about a foreign, even though those have certain information that we can be accessed. Alternatively, I strong agree that oversea traveling is the best way to familiar with a foreign country. The following are my reasons.

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It is undoubted that newspapers and magazines play an important role on(in) introduction of a foreign country. For the(去掉) one thing, there are many exotic foods and resorts reported on the newspapers or magazines every day. Thus, by reading these columns, we can learn some information about a foreign country. Furthermore, there are some events happened in a foreign that we can acquire through reading everyday newspapers or magazines. Thus（与前面重复，建议改为and therefore）
we can know more about not only headline events happened in a foreign but also its culture. However, newspapers or magazines can simply offer some basic information, though those are the simplest ways to approach foreign. Therefore, in order to acquire more detail information about a foreign country, we should take some times to travel to a foreign country. 这段有点啰嗦，可以简略写，重点在下面。而且最好把让步的一段放在倒数第二段写，另外，避免使用there be 的句式。

To begin with, by traveling a foreign country, we have great opportunities to approach the authentic foreign environment. For example, once upon the time, I was very interested in the America cultural life since I was young. Therefore, I traveled the United States last year; fortunately, I could truly experience the foreign life. Besides, there are many detail things we cannot learn just by reading newspapers or magazines but by traveling aboard. While traveling a foreign country, we can know more about its history by visiting the local museums or landmarks where stand for a window for us to see the foreign world.

Second, by traveling a foreign country, we have
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For the above reasons, even though newspapers or magazines give us some basic information about foreign, I think the best avenue to approach truly foreign is traveling aboard.
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