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7.27Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

Faced with the viewpoint that advertising is more essential than any other determinants, some people make the view that some food on the advertisement looks so delicious which can easily catch consumers' eyes. From my perspective, a large amount of other aspects should be taken on the table, such as pressure in daily life, and the economic development.

To begin with, worker-class in big cities, especially in metropolis, have more pressure than people in the town. Some surveys on newspapers documented that almost eighty percent of workers have unhealthy eating habits. A vast majority of them prefer to eat fast food rather than some nutritious supper by the reason that, the reporter said, they cannot squeeze much time on eating from the tough work, while eating fast food is an appropriate way for them. Day by day, the physically detrimental habit has been fostered. Even though on weekends, most workers are customary to eating unhealthy food.

Furthermore, as the economy develops, the number of delicate food in diverse type which faced to modern people is on the rise. Most children, including myself, have more interest to eat fried food, so called junk food. Although they are delicious, eating too much can cause negative effect on health. As for vegetable, fruits such organic food are being ignored. Back to the mid of last century, most people in China were always in hunger and poverty, but few people have unhealthy habits. How it happened? The answer is evitable, food in that time was not polluted. More importantly, people had less money in the past than in today; therefore as long as the food they can afford, they would catch it. In other words, they got more different nutrition than us.

Admittedly, advertising plays an important role in people's bad eating habit. For example, last week, my parents didn't decide to eat in the restaurant. But when they saw the big range of discount in one restaurant which is revealed by a newspaper, they determined to eat. However, to their disappointment, most food in discount were not fresh, even some was boiled twice. Undeniably they were so regret being attracted by the advertisement.

In conclusion, although advertising can cause people's unhealthy eating habits, it is not the only reason. In my opinion, most bad habits are cultivated by us. Since we cannot control our mouth, we gradually have the unhealthy habits; since we cannot resist the lure of feast, a lot of illness happens. Therefore, I don't think advertising is the most significant cause of unhealthy habits.

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7.29作业
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

Faced with the situation that whether young people should take several different kinds of job before they take a career in a long term or not, some old people, who accumulate much experience argue that possessing a stable job is of less risk than people who do not. From my perspective, taking a variety of jobs can follow the latest development in the world today.

To begin with, interest is more important than any other things, especially for young people in the modern society. For instance, one of my mom's colleagues was a manager in a bank, but now she is teaching for small children in a less-developed countryside. I was so doubtful that why she gave up an attempting job desired by a great people including myself, and then chose to live in a poor and remote place where the buildings are dilapidated. To my surprise, mom told me that because she has an obsession on teaching, besides, people in countryside are so simple; she made a viewpoint that interest was more essential than money.

Furthermore, an individual’s dreams have a tendency to change over the years. Even though one inspired his absolute passion at the early stage of his life, he could regret in his later years and wonder what had made him addicted. Here comes my personal example. When I was a little girl, I was desired to be an officer like my father, because in my impression this was a job without any efforts, just sitting in the office and using computer freely. But since I saw my dad virtually need to face tedious work and same people every day, I changed my perspective. Being a reporter is more meaningful, by the reason that it enables me to communicate with different people every day. Therefore, because I further informed about my personality, I could not confine a single job.

More importantly, people who taking a variety of jobs can acquire more chances to follow the latest development in the world than those fixing in one job. For instance, in1992, many Chinese work-class like teachers, workers and officers resigned their stable jobs and started own enterprise; most of them even build up from nothing. However, it was their courage that leads them to success; it was keeping in step with the times that make them benefit from the era of reform and opening-up. While those who did not dare to cater the requirement of the new society could only admire others’ achievement.


In conclusion, although some people prefer to deserve a comfortable life that is of no risk, in my opinion, young people are supposed to pursue a more colorful life not only for a stable payroll. As my favorite host, Oprah Winfrey, once said that “You know you are on the road to success if you would do your job, and not be paid for it.” Therefore, I claim that the advantages of trying several different jobs outweigh the shortcomings.

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5# crystal5841    标在哪里？

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7# Editors4Writers 楼上义务帮我改额。可是你的结构我写不出来

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9# Editors4Writers 如果是打广告那就算了

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12# linran0108 多回复几个帖子升级到寄托新兵就可以上传了。我就是这么干滴

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7月31日作业:
(09.02.21 NA) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country.

In the modern society, learning about a foreign country is no longer a dream. There comes a great many vehicles; some people claim that newspapers and magazines are the best ways, while in my perspective, travelling, television can also open a door for us to step into another land.

To begin with, travelling is a most valuable way which can let us experience a bland-new place in person. For example, I take delight in searching some photographs about scenery all around the world. Every time I try to imagine how the culture is, what the people like, and even what the cuisine is behind these pictures. Fortunately, last year, my parents took me to Japan. Besides roaming in the modern shopping heaven in Tokyo, the street which as clean as a glass also gives me a visually incredible impact. Some local residents were so enthusiastic that they even walked with me for company as a guide when I got lost. Undeniably, without that travelling, I cannot acquire a distinct impression about Japan, containing polite residents, fashionable and first-class environmental hygiene.

Moreover, we can also regard television as a telescope to amplify the corner throughout the world into the viewers’ eyes. For example, in the countryside, few farmers have capacity to go outside the mountains, no mention the foreign countries. However, since the televisions prevail in almost every family, people all around the world are no longer distant and isolated from each other; the most distant countries and the strangest customs are brought right to one’s sitting room. A lot of television programs introduce people to things in other continents they never thought of before and never heard of before. More importantly, compared with dull feel from the radio or some paper, everything on television is more lifelike, vivid and real. Therefore, television is a more convenient and dramatic source of foreign information.

Admittedly, newspapers and magazines are also beneficial for us to inform about some current events in foreign world. Sometimes, we have no more time to watch television, or do not accumulate enough money to take a trip. In these cases, reading newspapers and magazines is another alternative which is comparatively cheap. For example, I am accustomed to reading newspaper during the breakfast; isn’t it so comfortable to nibble at a piece of bread and scan some headlines of international news or some gossips about a foreign star at the same time?

In conclusion, although newspapers and magazines do have merit to demonstrate us a little corner of a foreign country, the advantages of television and traveling in excess of the former form. With the development of economic and technologic globalization, the growing number of modern vehicles has been approaching us. If we still confine our international perspectives to some paper, isn’t it out of step of times?

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15# sosodiu 先谢谢啊。1.应该是brand new，你是对滴2.旅行那段的点评很精辟，确实应该突出一下主题3.no mention to..更不用说（我忘加to了）4.paper是可数的吗？5.television is a more convenient and dramatic source of foreign information. 这句话的主干是television is a source.所以不是television is information 6.reading newspapers and magazines is another alternative which (that) is comparatively cheap. 为什么which不行？7.out of step of times这个我查过的。是固定用法。跟不上时代步伐


你的破题方式不是不行，就是感觉会比较难写。其实我这样不容易写散啊。你只要反驳A不是best，那随便举B,C也好就OK了，所以A不是best.至于让步段。我听戴云的网络课堂。他说可以第二段也可以第四段。放在第二段确实结构比较清晰，但他说在考试的时候万一来不及了，让步段可以不写，所以放在第四段更容易删改。

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8月3日交
09.02.27NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A jobwith more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a highsalary but less vacation time.

Faced with the position that the advantages of a job withmore vacation time but a low salary outweigh a job with a high salary but lessvacation time, some people make a viewpoint that more vacation time enablesthem to enjoy life rather than confine to a working condition. In myperspective, a job with a high salary suits my own taste.

To begin with, a high salary job gives a possibility forthose who dream to lead a superior life by accumulating more capital. Forinstance, my parents decided to possess a big house in my childhood. Therefore,they has been sacrificed so much vacation time and spent time earning money asmuch as they could during these years. Through their tough efforts, our whole familyachieved the dream eventually. If my parents took advantage of most of theirmoney and time to have a vacation, how can I live so comfortable in a hugehouse now which gives me a sense of satisfaction about the high quality oflife?


Furthermore, a job with less vacation time represents apositive life attitude. This view can easily be explained. In the long run, toomuch rest time will reduce one's enthusiasm of working. Because under normalcircumstances, these people have been accustomed to the lifestyle and environmentwithout any competition or pursuit of promotion. As time passes, even theirpersonality may be transferred, because too much joy sometimes like a slowpoison, which will make people addict to it and cultivate a negative attitudetowards life. While a job with less vacation but a high salary can stimulatepeople to maintain a state of excitement; everyday is brand new for thosepeople to challenge.

Admittedly, a job with more vacation can take people to afantastic world without any pressure, only happiness and relaxation. Especiallywhen one has trouble physically or mentally, the best way for him to reduce pressureis abandoning all things unpleasant and working less time. Although it meanslow salary, more vacation can give him assistance to back to an orbit of healthylife. The beautiful scenery likes sea, the fresh air in the forest, or the hospitalityof local residents is prone to help a person forget all worries in worktemporarily.

In conclusion, although a job with more vacation time ismore comfortable, the disadvantages are evitable. While a job with a highsalary but less vacation time can avoid these defects. Because besides satisfyingpeople's fundamental need for money, less vacation can stimulate people paymore attention to work instead of playing. Isn't it a more positive attitudetowards life?

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20# ellishu 1.under normal circumstances=generally speaking一般来说2.the best way for him to reduce pressures （这里加is,漏了）abandoning all things unpleasant and working less time
3.Because besides satisfying people's fundamental need for money, （同样错误，句子不完整）less vacation can stimulate people pay more attention to work instead of playing.
这句完整了呀。besides.doing B,A.do C..=A not only do B but also do C

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22# ellishu 谢谢！

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24# kila1002 先是非常感谢。改得很有水平
1.undermine这个词很赞，我记住了
2.under normal circumstences=generally speaking,一般来说。（我新学到的短语）
3.In conclusion, although ajob with more vacation time is more comfortable, the disadvantages areevitable. While a job with a high salary but less vacation time can avoid thesedefects.
我的意思是放假多虽然好，缺点不可避免，而放假少能够避免前面放假多的缺点。
4. 不是打字的问题。从word文档复制上来就粘一起了。

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8月5日交
09.05.30NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.

Faced with the position that younger children should study art and music in school, some people make a viewpoint that the major courses like math, science and so on have caused pressure to children, so they cannot pay more attention to side courses. However, in my perspective, studying art and music essentially is a significant way to relieve stress and recharge instead of a burden.

To begin with, as I mention before, art and music can make one relaxed and relieve the mental burden in study. For example,my small brother is only eight years old; a period I thought is full of delight and without any pressure. However, as a matter of fact, his math homework is so difficult for an elementary school student. Besides, even on the weekends, he is required to learn many courses such as chess, painting which so called to cultivate a child's comprehensive ability. So when I asked him what course isyour favorite, he said music without any hesitation. He told me that every time he listens to the music, the beautiful melody and comfortable atmosphere can let him forget all things unpleasant including the study pressure. Therefore, studying music likes an efficient medicine which can let children regain energy and pleasure.

Furthermore, studying art and music can help people foster a positive mental attitude, which is essential especially for younger children. Because at the age of five to ten, children are in the stage that growing up physically in a rapid speed. Simultaneously, their spiritual world is becoming bigger too. Therefore, an appropriate guide issignificant. Music and art are like patient teachers who picture a large amountof beauty for children. By appreciating this distinguished work, children can gradually possess an ability to confront difficulties without agitation.Because a vast majority of art and music can not only calm people down but also give them a meditation. Isn't it a fantastic way to develop a child's positive attitudes towards anything?

Admittedly, as a student, fundamental studyshould not be ignored. Math, science, history and language are some crucial courses should be mastered. Especially for younger children, whether they can obtain academically preeminent accomplishment depends on whether they laid a solid foundation in childhood. Therefore, major courses should also be attached weight on by younger children.

In conclusion, although major courses play an important role in children's development, we have to admit that art and music are considerably indispensable. Because without this vehicle, children cannot ease their pressure in study; without this beauty, children will lose a wonderful chance to cultivate an attitude with optimism.

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29# zinccopper 谢谢

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8.7作文Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement:University students should take part-time jobs.

Faced with the contention that university students should take part-timejobs, some people make a viewpoint that universitystudents should focus on their study. I hold on the idea that besides studyingin university, taking part-time jobs is a superb choice for students to exposeto the society and undeniably it is more meaningful than playing computer gamesor shopping.

To begin with, from the part-time job,university students can accumulate valuable work experience and cultivate somesocial skills, such as communication and cooperation. For example,
when I am in school, I spend all my time with myteachers and classmates; so familiar are they to me that I know everyone's disposition.However, when I step in the society, such as worked for KFC last summer,various people from leaders to employees come to my eyes, and everyone seemsbrand-strange for me. I could not accustomed to this change at first, but Ididn't give up and try my best to communicate with others. Day by day, mysocial skills improved, and it also gave me valuable work experience which canraise my confidence in future.

Furthermore, students can better understandthe value of money and the hardship of their parents; hence, it will promotethem to devote more to their study. The situation is not isolated; it istypical of dozens I have encountered. My sister is in Germany now,although her parents have enough money to afford her to study abroad, she stilltook part-time jobs on weekends, she told me that," at first, the job wasinviting due to I can not only earn money but also learn the culture. However, afterengaging in the job, I realized that it is not easy to earn money by myself. Thisexperience was of considerable value which can stimulate me to cherish themoney parents gave me.”

However, we see both as a boon to takingpart-time jobs and as a downside which is time-consuming. If we take amount of timeon part-time jobs, more meaningful things like doing exercises, reading, andtraveling will easily be ignored. Like the saying goes:” every coin has twosides." As far as I am concerned, the campus life is the most gorgeoustime in their life. As the hours wear on, they will have few chances to absorbin studies as well as exchange views with classmates. I cannot convince myselfthat they can manage to do both fascinating communication and part-time jobs.

In conclusion, although it has shortcomingslike wasting time, all the analysis confirms that university students shouldtake part-time jobs. Because, the merits of better understanding the value oflife as well as study carry more weight than the defect.