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LZ好人啊。我平时自己练的时候就有录音，过两天上传上来求点评。

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权限不够，传不了大附件。

话说我的才800多K而已啊

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调整了录音设置，终于控制在256K之内了。

TPO20的 Task3。麻烦楼主给建议。

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souris-emon 发表于 2012-8-7 14:26
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有几个that发音挺别扭的，你自己听一下，挺明显的，还有一个usually，因为整体的基调是发 ...

谢谢楼主点评。 你能具体说一下that和usually是怎么个奇怪。
我最近在练习改语音，所以整个发音系统有点混乱，自己听不太出来。

有一本书 American Accent Training，我觉得特别有用。我自己在练第三遍了。能纠正很多外国人发英语的误区，尤其是语调这个部分。推荐一下。

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igrowing 发表于 2012-8-7 23:14
你的语音语调好赞啊~请问你是肿么练的哇？

有一本书 American Accent Training，我觉得特别有用。我自己在练第三遍了。能纠正很多外国人发英语的误区，尤其是语调这个部分。有足够时间的话，可以考虑练一下。

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mresc 发表于 2012-8-9 23:35
我觉得你语音语调太过紧张了，来外一般不会这么说的除了电台播音。舒缓一点比较好，个人感觉

多谢建议，有别的口语老师也这么说过我。

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mresc 发表于 2012-8-9 17:57
楼主MM你好！非常钦佩你的热心！如果有空的话，可否指点一下我的口语呢？叙述的展开方式方面我还不太熟悉导 ...

(I am just forcing myself to write more english. Excuse me for that)
I have listened to the your answer uploaded by Qiuyu.

1. You have a quite sound accent. Your intonation makes your very easy to understand, for most cases. However, you seem to put improper emphasis on some words occasionally.  ex. You should have raised your tone at the word "hard", which is the most crucial information in the sentence, in your first sentence in answer 2. Honestly, I didn't catch this word until I played it back the third time.

2. As you said yourself, you seem to be not good at organizing your thoughts. I suggest you try the 口语真经, which have sample answers for all questions. In addition, you may also try to write your answers down and review them like writings. Then, you probably can see why it is not well organized and how you can improve on that.