1.task 1的语速还不错,task 2的稍稍有点快
2.有个别词发音有点问题,kind,带有v的单词,heavy,everyone
3.有些地方没有听清,比如task 1的Firstly, they have to face a lot of pressure both from themselves and the patients后面那句They're like a bunch of liars and ???
4.虽然说语法并不是考察的重点,但是太明显的语法错误还是要避免,比如face to pressure——face pressure,My grandpa has got cancer at four years ago——My grandpa has got cancer four years ago
5.内容例子挺好的,没什么可挑剔
6.18
1.语速合适
2.表意明确。注意不要犯太明显的语法错误,比如biography can't give me anything help,he want to succeed by his work hard
3.内容上,注意一下时间的分配,你的第二个论点都没有怎么展开
task 1的第二点没有听清
还有感觉是内容有点空,建议例子再具体一些