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amater 发表于 2014-9-20 22:36
版主,我的914也没被改

你们之间自己催催他们~

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ddddori 发表于 2014-9-13 20:45
好难写

你还没改118L 小菜的作业喔!

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Grenzenlos 发表于 2014-9-17 09:52
版主你没有把我分配进去啊... 在126楼


SORRY ~~~已经改好!

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iMinus 发表于 2014-9-16 22:17
虽然还没分配,但是大家可以改一下前面的人的作文吧~?

已经分配了!

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Grenzenlos 发表于 2014-9-16 22:57
同意楼上观点。。。这都已经好几天了

sorry~已经更新了!同志们继续努力!

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amater 发表于 2014-9-15 13:24
交作业,9 14 amater
版主这次在有问题告诉我一声,新手小白

你14号的作业怎么交了2次!144L和134L都有?!

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amater 发表于 2014-9-13 20:28
我也想加入版主


你直接上传作业,注明作业日期就可以!不明白的请看新手帖:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1629443-1-1.html

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程序猿 发表于 2014-9-11 20:29
对不起版主,我憋了快一个小时连第一段都写不好,很难受啊,原谅我从大一结束到现在没有碰过英语,四六级都 ...

ok~木有排你的~

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拨拉丽丝 发表于 2014-9-3 13:46

参加小组要互改啊~请修改16L的作业啊!

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喵呜~ 发表于 2014-9-5 20:58
ok  改好啦~学习啦~~

亲爱的。改好了怎么木有把东西传上来啊

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喵呜~ 发表于 2014-9-3 08:02
那个   我也想加入  觉得自己水平太烂了    应该多学点

不过没有考试压力  老是拖延  求监督。。

吼吼吼~我会监督你滴。。。。嘻嘻嘻~催你交作业

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Tangola 发表于 2014-9-2 21:19
第一次,晚了17分钟,版主帮我安排下吧

没有晚啊~~~~明天分组

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喵呜~ 发表于 2014-9-1 13:32
其实你们现在不用每个月开新帖了哈   你可以一直在这个帖子里面发作业   
之前每个月都发新帖是因为当时是 ...

明白了。那以后10月11月......就在这里接下去咯。。。。。。

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1 Today, more and more people choose to marry and have children later in life. What are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

2 In many countries, average life expectancy has been increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society as a whole? Suggest some solutions.

3 Some people believe that all students should learn a foreign language. Others, however, argue that a student should not be required to learn a foreign language if he or she does not have talent for it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

4 Schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ future career success. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

5 Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that universities should make it easier for them to access higher education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

6 The Internet will replace books as the main source of information. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

7 Some people think that newspapers are the best source of news. Others, however, believe that news is presented better on television or the Internet. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

8 The way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

9 Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

10 Some people think that employers should be required to employ equal numbers of men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

11 Research suggests that many prisoners commit crimes again after being released from prison. What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions.

12 International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Some people think that the problems caused by international tourism outweigh the benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

13 Developing countries need international organisations’ help. Some people think that financial aid should be provided, while others think that practical aid and advice would be better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

14 Health is a basic human need. Some people believe that health care should not be provided by private, profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

15 Governments should spend money on the repairs and maintenance of old buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

16 Foreign visitors to museums and art galleries should pay more than local visitors. Do you agree or disagree?

17 A long-distance flight consumes the same amount of fuel and causes the same amount of pollution as a car does in several years' time. Some people think that to reduce environmental problems, we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist air travel, instead of limiting the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

18 Today, people often buy food transported from other countries. Do you think the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?

19 In many countries, fossil fuels, such as coal, natural gas and oil,are the main sources of energy. However, in some other countries, the use of alternative sources of energy,such as wind power and solar energy,is increasingly encouraged. To what extent do you think this is a positive development?

20 Little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time. Why have people done so little about it? How can we solve this problem?

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