5.20
Task1
1. “junior middle school”没有这个表达。“初中”是:junior high school/ middle school 不可以拼到一起哈~
2. "she'll give some desserted cat..." she说成He啦。a cup of milk,cup的音连得有点长,听起来有点像a couple of milk
3. 我觉得楼主的语调挺好的(可能是带点平时说话的口音所以Robin觉得怪,但我觉得挺好的^_^),发音也很准,内容和连贯性也不错。没什么大问题~尽量减少下录音的遍数吧,强迫自己最多两次说好
Task2
1. casual发音不准 work 说的有点像“walk” wear像“well” ,需要正下音~
2. 分散注意力应该是distract other people's "attention" 不用mind
3. 内容方面都没什么问题~
【7.9】
Task 1
"the air is dark" soundss strange. better be: the air looks dirty because of it contains particles that are bad for people's health. The trees planted around the city can help block out all the harmful dirt and...
其他都OK
Task 2
very good example and explanation.这题没问题
Task 3
第二个理由讲对了,但说的不是特别清楚。because other universities also have students work in those companies, there may not be enough position for all students after their graduation
Task 4
这题最好把establishing shot的作用:providing background and mood for the movie,放在解释概念的部分答。有个地方:it turns out to be detective story just as the prof. has expected 这个没答到,其他OK,答得挺好的
Task 5
small hotel是near campus, not on compus
此外没问题,答得很好,时间控制的也很好
Task 6
这题剩余10s是因为你没有解释topic(how plants can defense them from insect attacks),以及两个defense的名称(physical&chemical)。这题建议再看下robin那个口语高分的帖子。
虽然题目是要求讲how p plant and potato plants defense themselves blah blah,但lecture的主题、两个defense的名称还是要答出来,不可以直接答例子。
后面可以替换说法,比如:so you see that the establishing shot already tells the professor what kind of story he is going to see and the atmosphere of the movie blahblah...
paraphrase it!
【7.15】
Task 1
"the professor treat me and other undergraduate students as one of his graduate students" 这句啥意思?是说像对待他的研究生一样对待你们?
laboratory读的不准
此外OK
Task 2
这里的reaction是指化学反应?better illustrate what kind of project you were talking about, so that the rater can understand you
Task 3
1. hot/cold breakfast就可以了,不必说breadfast fook
2. plan不用讲的这么详细,比如health conscious students blah blah那个太细节了就不用讲,直接说it is considered healthier blah blah
3. 两个理由概括的很好!
Task 4
dissonance重音在d
此外OK
Task 5
这题答得很好!
鸡蛋里挑个骨头,although和but不要出现在一个句子中
Task 6
1.第一个例子讲的不太对,every time the car stops and picks up a person, a message shows up...it says...when the message is repeated again and again, blah blah
2.第二个例子里明确给出celebrity是个racing car runner,这个身份最好答出来