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tesolchina 发表于 2014-10-18 13:00
我不知道你的英语水平大概是怎么样的,我的感觉是你可能平时作文写得并不多,尤其是阅读的比较少。因此,你 ...
好吧,我这里再麻烦您一下。还有一篇文章请您看一看,是不是也是语言表达的问题很大?
题目是:
2. To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
文章:
Mentioning the major cities, there is a vivid picture in many people’s mind that our major cities are full of cars on the streets but in a shipshape order and with neon light at night people enjoy the delicious dinner with family members or enter a cinema to enjoy a wonderful film and so forth. To the contrast, other places like rural area, people are more likely to just work leisurely in the daytime on the farm or small companies and have homely activities at night. It seems that we can dig the most important characteristic of a society from the great prosperity of the major cities. However, are all these ostensibly prosperous scenery can represent the most important characteristic? In my view, what we can not deny is that the major cities indeed are highly developed with the most advanced ideas and a sum of talented people. But I contend that we should wait to rethink before we conclude this result.
As far as the economy is concerned, our major cities lie more on industry and service industry, that meant, could create more fortune than the single mode of agriculture in rural area. The biggest stock trading hall, the offices of big company and so on are in the major city. For the major cities own more fortune, people in the major cities have the strongest consuming power compared with other place. So the biggest shopping mall, the most fantastic cinema, the amusement park as well is in the major city.
Furthermore, as for the scientific and cultural field, the most successful people also gather in major cities. Because of the advanced equipments, the scientist can have a better condition to do the research. As there is more access for art, such as museums and galleries, the artists can have a better development space which provides them more excellent resources to learn from. Also, most of politicians work in major cities.
All these above are the results of the high concentration of resources in major city for the density of population is higher in major cities. But the major cities are still only a part of the whole society, sometimes even a very small part.
Nevertheless, if a certain area is most covered by the rural area and if the characteristic can not be presented in the most coverage area, it is unreasonable to regard it as the most important characteristic of a society.
Additionally,if we turn our observation to the past time, we will notice that though the capital of a country was so prosperous, the rest area which consisted actually the most coverage of a country was plain. This phenomenon was common in the past time for the mechanism of regulation resembled centralization. Therefore, the statement is not applicable for such circumstance yet the statement presents an absolute attitude with the word”must”.
In sum, due to the advanced development level of the major cities, it is true that most advanced characteristic of a society can be discovered in major cities. But to remember the most advanced, in a large sense, are not equivalent to the most important character.
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