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第二十五次作业:
writing(Time):
Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
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第二十四次作业:
writing(Television):
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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第二十三次作业:
writing(Technology):
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
2. There are many goals in one's life, describe one of yours.
1. Do you like teaching on the internet or traditional teaching?
小马->harrietann->holding->小马
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第二十二次作业:
writing(Teacher):
Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. How do you relax yourself?
2. Which do you prefer, indoor teaching or teaching outside?
10->14->15->6->16->10
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第二十一次作业:
writing(Media):
How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Describe a job or a career you like to pursue.
2. Which do you prefer, long vacation or short vacation?
6->15->14->10->6
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第二十次作业:
writing(Government):
Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Talk about some characteristics of friends
2. If you have some extra money, do you want to spend it out or save it?
3->15->10->3, 6->16->14->6
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第十九次作业:
writing(food):
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Talk about a memerial activity that you attended before.
2. Which do you prefer, indoor activities or outdoor activities?
6->10->15->6, 7->14->16->7
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第十八次作业:
writing(dormitory):
Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Describe a popular activity in your country.
2. Which one do you think is better to help doing research, internet or academic books?
16->14->7->16, 15->10->6->15
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第十七次作业:
writing(communication):
When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Describe some characteristics of friends.
2. Which do you prefer if there are two positons for you, leader or follower?
6->14->16->7->15->6
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第十六次作业:
writing(child):
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Talk about one of the most important inventions in the past 100 years.
2. Is it more likely for someone who attend college to achieve success than the one do not attend college? why?
6->7->10->15->16->6
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第十五次作业:
writing(Humanity vs. science):
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Talk about the most efficient transportation in your country.
2. Is musical education important to the students?
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第十四次作业:
writing(Advertisement):
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Describe a book that you think is interesting.
2. Should parents make some restriction about the programmes that their children watch, or allow their children watching whatever programmes?
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第十三次作业:
writing(Neighborhood):
It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Talk about the characters of a person who you admire?
2. Should University be opened to all the people or to certain kind of students?
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第十二次作业:
writing(Personal Philosophy):
Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. What characters is needed to be a good teacher?
2. Which do you prefer, working at home or at office?
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第十一次作业:
writing(Computer):
In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Which place in the city where you live you like best, why?
2. Do you like to study in big city or small city, why?
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第十次作业:
writing(Game):
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经): (根据中文自己翻译的，错了别见怪:loveliness: )
1. Where will you go when you are with your friends, why?
2. Which do you prefer, eating at home or at restaurants, why?
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第九次作业:
writing(Class):
Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.
speaking(X月XX号机经): (根据中文自己翻译的，错了别见怪:loveliness: )
1. Describe a social or political celebration event in your culture.
2. Should governments finance the construction of museum and theater?
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第八次作业:
writing(Personal philosophy):
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经): (根据中文自己翻译的，错了别见怪:loveliness: )
1. Describe a moment or celebration that impressed you.
2. Media (tv, internet...) and people (friends, parents, classmates...), Do you think from which part you can learn more?
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第七次作业:
writing(Social problem):
Should a city try to perserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern building? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
speaking(X月XX号机经): (根据中文自己翻译的，错了别见怪:loveliness: )
1. How do you use your spare time?
2. Should cellphones be prohibited in certain plances?
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第六次作业:
writing(Friendship):
Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Describe the most important decision that you made in your life.
2. Do you think the high scholl should teach music and art as other basic science?
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第五次作业:
writing(Celebrities):
If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Which book do you think is most useful to you, why?
2. Do you think TV has positive or negative effects to modern society? choose one and explain why.
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第四次作业:
writing(Characteristics & qualities):
What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.
speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. If your friends from other country are going to visit your country, where do you suggest them to go? And state your reasons.
2. 有的人旅游时喜欢直奔目的地，有的人喜欢兼顾游览沿途景观，你prefer？
没交作业的有：3,4,6,8,9
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第三次作业：
writing(Build):
It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
speaking(1月19号机经):
1. Describe a place you have never been to but like to go some day.
2. Do you agree that childhood is the happiest (or precious) time in life?
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第二次作业：
writing(A or B)(Money):
Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
speaking(1月6号机经):
1.Which kind of magzine do you prefer to read, novels, poetrys, or......
2.Do you prefer to live with roomates or you prefer to live by youself?
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第一次作业：
writing(A or B)(Decision):
Most people like other people to make decision for them. But other not.which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
speaking:
Do you agree or disagree: Students should wear uniform in school?
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