COMEON-----作文小组

ammyanaUID：2529083

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大家一起改啊！！！我只剩一个月考T了，作文还是很垃圾！！
狠拍狠拍！！！

19811010316UID：2220703

最近大家都很卖力阿。
我搞听力消失了一段时间。
快考了，还得再练练。
哈哈。
我把我总结的所有机警和分类题库放在附件里吧。
楼主有空更新到主页吧。
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=874328&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1771996304

namejoeUID：2373013

31号作业
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最后一个月,拼了.
辛苦T友了~

tclrjtclrjUID：2517750

8月31日作业

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macross_36UID：2306285

8.31作业
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devilkinelevenUID：2442869

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-874354-1-1.html

tclrjtclrjUID：2517750

喝，楼下的 怎么没给我改作文

yuanhu124UID：2444317

今天的作文没考虑时间，差不多超了20分钟，主要多注意了结构和词语，也参考了几个模板，还查了词典。我想，我还是慢慢来，先要质量，在要速度！希望下面修改的战友多多指点。
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-874435-1-1.html

PS：好像咱这个小组里有很多人是还有一个月考试。我也是！9月28号考！准确说，没有一个月了。唉~~我的口语啊！最担心了，不知从何下手。

[ 本帖最后由 yuanhu124 于 2008-9-1 11:47 编辑 ]

woaichixiguaUID：2450470

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赶上交作业了~~

楼上的,我也跟你差不多时间考
同超时
你不担心听力么?

chineseladyUID：2403976

8月31日

新能源（sun, wind, water）will be soon replace 旧能源fossil fuels (oil, gas)， agree or disagree? 2006 年10 月28日技术进步类

改作业的人辛苦了！一起加油！！:handshake
At present, the international community and our nation are focusing on the environment around our lives. People and related organizations would discuss this issue firstly when they need to chose which city or country should have an international conference, where the delegates from each nation will appear. Therefore, I definitely agree that the new energy will replace the old ones for the reason that it will not bring the pollution as the old energy did.

In the first place, fossil fuels led to industrial and atmosphere pollution. At the beginning of the developing industry, coal and fossil fuels played a key role in running the machines and produce electricity. It resulted in both air and water pollution, though, people got progress in industry. At that time, the sky of some industrial areas was dark or red. This situation starts to change when some developed countries adopted new energy, like solar energy. From then on, people use solar energy when take shower instead of electricity or fossil fuels, because it will not make any dirt to the air.

Meanwhile, the water power—hydroelectric power does not bring pollution. In many counties, such power plants are used to produce electricity. The falling water is pushing the turbines to run every machine for families and factories.

At the same time, some developed countries could be examples to developing nations when they utilize the new energy to reduce the pollution and to enhance national ability. At present, environmental protection is one of the main issues people are interested and care about. Development and pollution became a controversial topic in society. The old energy has brought a lot waste and the phenomenon of oil leakage made plants and animals died, which broke biological circle. Those developed countries realized that the serious consequence while developed their industry. They may have better methods to ameliorate it. For instance, the solar energy and hydroelectric dam are adopted in developed nations first.

In conclusion, the new power will replace the situation of the old ones soon, because of the limited old energy and the pollution they brought. Meanwhile, people need to utilize the new energy better to improve the living condition.

chineseladyUID：2403976

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=874458&extra=page%3D1 我的作业，楼下的辛苦了！！昨天我的被改好多啊 紧张死了都

chineseladyUID：2403976

不好意思啊！我怎么把作业贴在这里啦！！下面的帖子也是我的 里面有我的作业连接，不好意思了见笑了！我有时候很糊涂！:(

macross_36UID：2306285

Sorry,这两天事情多，给你补上了。

kturyUID：2274868

COMEON作文小组------ktury 9月1日作业

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=874463&extra=

辛苦筒子们了,欢迎猛拍,有拍必回!!

qawsedUID：2359935

交作业啦 我最后了吧，这篇文章很容易跑题啊，那个soon,写的好累~
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=874464&extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 qawsed 于 2008-9-1 13:57 编辑 ]