作文互改战队——D组日报

if_lotusUID：175616

why 144？说说原因。

144"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."

armstrongUID：204256

D 组的朋友们， 我能加入到你们的战队吗， 游兵散勇力量有限牙！

fhxyweiUID：157384

我写了一篇issue64,大家看看

leo_chenUID：206840

Originally posted by if_lotus at 2005-7-6 07:52
why 144？说说原因。

144"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."

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if_lotusUID：175616

如果大家对D组选题有什么建议的话,可以说一下对题目的理解和自己列的提纲,拿上来跟大家讨论讨论.

7月1日开考后,原则上不强行统一D组的同主题.写了新的文章,就直接把链接贴上来吧,互改.强烈建议在发文章的同时列提纲!

另外,GTER也在组织新的同主题了,大家根据个人情况,可以跟着写.

Originally posted by fhxywei at 2005-7-6 09:34
我写了一篇issue64,大家看看

issue64"Many people know how to attain success, but few know how to make the
best use of it."
链接如下:https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2



armstrong：
欢迎欢迎！
你也是版里的活跃分子~
一起加油吧

[ Last edited by if_lotus on 2005-7-6 at 13:11 ]

fhxyweiUID：157384

关于大家定好了的issue152我写好了，战友们，来讨论讨论吧！
Issue152:
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

下篇写Issue144吗？定好没？？

if_lotusUID：175616

速度好快……

你可以先贴argu37阿，有兴趣的话，同主题写作，有高人指点呢，嘻嘻

只可惜我argu还没开始复习呢~

忙，最近！没时间看作文阿~

leo_chenUID：206840

argument37
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D102

fhxyweiUID：157384

我argument，题库还只看了一点点，也急啊！

linxiao1983UID：203095

刚刚发的同题目写作第一篇，大家也来拍啊：）

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=296384

linxiao1983UID：203095

是写issue144吗?是这个月的机井题啊，我写好了，请D组的xd们很拍！！
拍过后，留下你的连接，必回拍！！

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=296590

misspaulUID：2105096

我是新加入的，呵呵，以后大家一起互改作文吧^_^
恩，我是7。28号在上海考

misspaulUID：2105096

这是我的第一篇issue~~~issue7,呵呵

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=297256

if_lotusUID：175616

欢迎加入！

互改互改！

建议大家优先选同主题写作的题目写，集思广益，取长补短。

liulin12369UID：2112878

没有人认识我？我好像看fhxywei有点眼熟的说，是不是以前给你改过文章？（可能记错），我迟到的ISSUE10，不知道赶得上给我看看吗？

10,Government must ensure that their major cities recieve the financial support they need in order to thrive ,because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
      Nation's cultural traditions,broadly defined as the entire spiritual wealth of  a certain nation,has a long history to come  into being.In the ancient time,man cannot stand  the natural disaster or the wild animals alone,they get together and lately,they build their own country in which people have their exclusive culture.It is the cultrure that shared by all the people of a nation,and this kind of culture almost generated and preservesd in the major cities ,for it is without doubt that the major cities always have a long history and the most important historical events often involve them.So I agree with the assertion above for three reasons.
        Firstly ,the major cities have an advantage in concentration of geography beyond the dispersive  local places.Consider the fact that the major cities always  lie in the main vein of the national traffic,so it is quite convenient to reach the remains of the culture.In the contrary, in China ,one of the Chinese 56 races named Zang settled in the tableland on which even the air is not sufficient for general people to breathe,and the railway could send a person there for several days from the major citis.Meanwhile, there are so many places with a suffering condition and a hard-reaching location.If a country intend to take action to support all of  them,it is a all-consuming and almost impossible task indeed.
       Secondly,the major cities'culture is definitely the mainstream culrture,and the  most people could cognize it   ,be proud of it and inclined to strengthen it.For instance,in the Peking city,there are the Great wall which was build in the Qing Dynasty thousands of years ago,the Forbidden city which may be regarded as a  witness of  Chinese modern times,the Gate of Heavenly Peace where  the new  country was born.In the other countries,for example,Egypt,the most fantastic building ------the Pyramid which attract lots of scientists to study in it also lie in the major city. All of  this prove  that  the core memory of the motherland  in the people's mind and the most valuable remains of history are the major city culture.
       Thirdly,only if  the major cities  received the goverment's offer,could they protect and  develop the culture.First of all,this project I have illustrated  often need a large sum of money ,and the individuals cannot afford such a astronomical figure.on the contrary,local cluture could come down just in daily life.For example,in some area in China,mother is the leader of the whole family,and the man should move to his wife's house ,and the woman decide the main thing of this race.They have thier own words called Woman Race Word,and the mother hand it down to her daughter in order to  preserve this culture.Second,it is not save to let the common mass to achieve this goal,for some of this remains is very precious,and it calls for a legal and formal approach .Government maybe the fittest role to do this.
       In conclusion,gcvernment should support the major cities in financial facet for the culture reasons.