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xizzhuUID：2195156

topic: Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

Dormitory, which means the place that some college students live in when they stay at school , plays an important part of school life .In a way ,the qualities of one’s roommate seem to be crucial to a student. For my part, (I would like to outline some of the good features in the following parts.)-----> I think that "honesty, neatness, and generosity" are important qualities of a good roommate.

The most important character of all is the honesty of one’s roommate. Only one trust the other can they share the same room, same tools (what did you mean?) and the same key, which is most likely to lead one be afraid of . Once one can find a reliable roommate, undoubtly it is a good one that is qualified one’s basic recognition. (no example to support "honesty")

A good roommate should have an organized life schedule and neat dormitory. Living with such roommate with numbers of bad habits, one may get frenzy and fury with his roommate. For instance, in my dormitory in senior high school, my roommate, who always get up, before 4:00 in the morning with his so-called “regular schedule”, made me disorganized with my biologic clock and deteriorate my efficiency in study at day time. It is true to say that having an organized and neat roommate will let you feel comfortable in your school life.

Furthermore, generosity(好象叫good- heart or care person更好把, from your examples) is necessarily needed. Far from your parents, while facing difficulties, one’s roommate might be the best helper to him. Once one get sick, his roommate could take care of him;once one feel unconfident in making success, his roommate could spur him; As far as I am concerned, living with that kind of roommate will make one’s life much smoother.

To conclude, honesty, typically speaking, organized and neat life and generosity (for me) are the main qualities of a good roommate. maybe others consider different qualities of a good roommate. i believer that "honesty" is a must and a common quality for all of us.  we all want to get alone with our roommate and enjoy our college life..



here is my opinions about this topic:

The topic is kind of "definition", what are some of the important qualities of a good roommate when Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university.

my outline would be:
Introduction: "qualities of a good roommate" are A, B, and C.
Bodies:  paragraph 1, developing A
              Paragraph 2, developing B
              .............  3, .............. C
Conclusion:  meationing A, B and C in another way.

[ 本帖最后由 xizzhu 于 2006-4-9 14:38 编辑 ]

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

原帖由 whereismyfuture 于 2006-4-9 13:45 发表
Is it possible to add one more person to your group?
i'm 100% serious.

you are admitted :)

philixcasterliuUID：2182659

thanks for your outline and revision~!can u give me an approximate score~?

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

原帖由 philixcasterliu 于 2006-4-9 13:57 发表
o~听力感觉好多mp3资料 音质都很差 大家都这样吗？那怎么办呢？~~怎么才能让语法从错4个左右到不错呢？~~~~阅读经常出一些理解性的问题 单词题还行~主要把红宝书背完的缘故~~作文是很愁人的 没大有时间写 另外没有 ...

为什么没有磁带呢？　磁带最原始最好用了。语法这个问题要有运气成分的，你尽量现在控制在２个，　考试应该会满分。　阅读理解的时候要抓种中心思想，要抓住文章的线索，　你可以使用排除法。　作文我前面已经说了很多了，　你可以回去看看，时间是人自己争取出来的，　作文３０分钟每天足够了。３０分钟应该能够调整出来吧。

philixcasterliuUID：2182659

谢谢~加油去了~

xizzhuUID：2195156

原帖由 philixcasterliu 于 2006-4-9 14:17 发表
thanks for your outline and revision~!can u give me an approximate score~?

in my eyes:  4,  even i didn't correct your some sentences.

nostrumUID：2124189

斑斑都好负责噢:):):)
赞赞赞~~~

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

原帖由 xizzhu 于 2006-4-9 14:34 发表


in my eyes:  4,  even i didn't correct your some sentences.

辛苦了。。。。:)

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

我要去吃东西了， 坚持不住了，大家好好遵守秩序发帖子哦：-）回来再为大家解答：）

xiaobian731UID：2140176

(0208)Each of (functions) of the body, even thinking, requires the expenditure of energy.

Key：A
分析：考点是名词的单复数。Each（adj.）+ 名词单数  或 each (pron. ) of + 名词单数
改正：of functions  of function
参考译文：人体的任何作用，甚至思考都会消耗能量。

(0205)Bacteria and similar one-celled organisms reproduce by cell division, each of the
                 
daughter( cell) then beginning a new life as a distinct organism.
      
Key：B
分析：考点是名词单复数。each of表示“什么中的一个”，后面必须接复数。
类似的one of，anyone of 后面也是要加复数名词的。
改正：cell à cells
参考译文：细菌及类似的单细胞生物通过细胞分裂繁殖，之后每一个子细胞作为一个独立的生物体开始新的生命。


问题:这两个解释怎么~~~相互矛盾呀~

QuincySMUID：2162088

总结之后下午作了0210  听力4（我觉得方法很受用啊）语法2 阅读4
在这里学到的听力技巧很不错啊~~Oooooh

xiaobian731UID：2140176

QuincySMUID：2162088

xiaobian731：
关于你问的语法题：
Each正确的用法：1）each+单 后面动词用单  2）each of the+复  后面动词用单