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Nowadays,there are a number of persistent social problems need to be soled,such as continuous wars,environmental problems, ethnicity and so on.So that some people recommend to support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process to handle these problems.In my opinion,although they are terribly required to be solved,the idea of all nations support a global university is infeasible.
表达观点 有迫切需要解决的问题 不过global university 不行
It is true that the world are facing many difficult troubles,and some of them can not be solved completely without all nations' research. Continuous wars have made local people lost home,global warming have caused the number of icebergs decrease是不是用dissove, environmental pollutions have led to the unusual climate.If all above problems cannot get better,the people all around the world would suffer from more serious disasters. Some historical experience have justified it is the best and fastest way to solve the global questions.什么方法 For example,the human genome project has finished by six countries' cooperation of only 13 years.So global experts should discuss together, and then raise a uniform method to handle persistent global problems.
However,the suggestion of supporting a global university to engage students to solve the social problems seems not to be viable. First of all,each nation's economic level is(each 用单数把) so different that the investments to the university have distinctions. The distinctions easily cause financial dispute,even the discrimination from different countries.At the same time,this university will become no longer equality and democracy. Moreover, the global university includes a lot of differences from ethnicity, religionary faith,life style and moral standard. 你是想说大学里本身就有问题吗?For instance,it is impossible that Israeli and Palestinian talk about wars together as well as the people of black and white analysis the social questions together. Admittedly,some persistent social problems would be brought into the school by all kinds of national people instead of be solved.Therefore,the assertor ignores some passive factors of building a global university. 这个例子前面还好后面似乎不妥当
Secondly,facing to the persistent social problems,even the best experts always have no idea to solve,what about the university students. Maybe the assertor overrate the strength of students too much.The majority of students now prefer learning from their professors to studying independent,so I do not believe they have enough knowledge to beyond their professors and solve some persistent social problems at all.The foundation of a global university does not mean many talented students could be cultivated.Therefore,a global university is unuseful to these social problems.
Thirdly, considering the useless effect to social problems,all nations should revalue about whether they should provide large numbers of money and teaching resources to the global university, because it is obvious a wrong investment. Instead of having a waste ,these resources should be supplied to their own university and scientific research,even to the education of where suffering from poverty.
To sum up, compareing the advantages with disadvantages of supposing a global university to solves the persistent social problems, I suggest the proposal is better to be set aside.And all nations had better to think out other ideas to deal with those problems.
文章的结构完整 正反说得很清楚
过度不太恰当 Thirdly这段应该再详细
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