综合写作 EVA

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tpo1 Integrated Writing
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9-1综合改

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The lecture successfully casts doubt on theadvantages of salvage logging mentioned in the passage and raises the issuethat salvage logging may result in severe environmental damage.

To begin with, the speaker contradicts theopinion in the reading removing the dead tree will help forest to recover fromthe disaster. She points out that clean up the forest may destroy the rightcondition for the tree’s growth, since the dead tree can rich the solid. Andthe removing process may lead to the consequence that the tree lacking for thenecessary nutrition.

Second, the professor also questions theinfluence of insects lived in the dead tree. The reading says decaying wood isa highly suitable habitat for insects such as spruce bark beetle, which candamage live. However, the professor argues that this insect would not harmfulto forest using the evidence that it lives in forest for hundreds' year andstill not cause any huge damage. The speaker also postulates that the decayingwood might be good for the long term health of forest, for it is also a habitatof important beneficial insects.

Third, although salvage logging haseconomic benefits more or less as mentioned in the paragraph, the benefitsappear to be temporary and relatively small. The lecture indicts that in orderto cope with usable wood after a disaster, one should use some expensive vehicles.And the increasing working opportunities only last for a short time. And theadditional jobs usually are taken up by the outsider instead of the residents.

In conclusion, the lecture completely refutesthe idea demonstrated by the passage that salvage logging is benefit both theenvironment and economics.

jjooyyUID：2704028

为什么是TPO12？昨天的作业是TPO13啊。。

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The lecture reinforces that professionalpainting's subject is not Jane Austen using three evidences. Simultaneously,the speaker completely refutes the passage by demonstrating that the evidencesin the reading material largely result from ignorance or prejudice and are notat all convincing.

First of all, the speaker points out thatalthough Austen family has endorsed the claim that the girl in the portrait isJane Austen, the painting is published at 1882 almost seventy years afterJane's death, which means no family member has seen Jane Austen himself orherself. This point directly contradicts what the passage says.

Second, the professor mentions there ispossibility that someone in the Jane's family resembles Jane Austen. SinceAusten's family is large, she has lots of similar-age kinship or even same-agekinship. Comparing with the reading's saying that the face in the portraitresembles Jane Austen, the lecture indicts there are some one in Austen'sfamily resemble Jane.

Third, the passage's conclusion that OziaHumpherey is the painter of the painting based on its style is no convincing.And the lecture also point out new evidence about the canvass of the painting.The canvass is sold by Williom, who did not sale canvasses until Jane isgrow-up. This point indicts that the painting is finished when Jane is mucholder than a teenage.

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给你改好啦……

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18# makeithappen
改好了

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15# makeithappen

This lecture refutes the passage in three aspects to illustrate that United States companies do the same这样写对吗 in order to receive ecocertification.# [, \) t' P. i/ v

-First of all, the speaker mentions theAmerican consumers do not treat every advertising at the same level. They paymore attention to the label which established by the independent agency, suchas the international organization issuing certifications to wood companies.Therefore, the "ecocertified" wood is favorable and the organizationis trust worth（is trustworthy）.8 k0 t5 J2 U& i& S$ Y9 M3 |- }
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Second, although consumers, in fact, careabout the price as mentioned in the passage, the price only have an obvious effect when one products much higher or lower than the other one. However, thelecture points out that the price variation due to the certification is lessthan fifty(five) percent. So the consumer will consider other factors instead最好换个词 ofprice. The buyer might consider the environment and buy the friend toenvironment语法不对 product. As a result more people will prefer to buy the productwith the certification.  N( u, C& g; R* S& y$ i( b
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Finally, the speaker expresses thatAmerican wood businesses consider the foreign market too. Instead of only cares(caring) about the market in the United States, the American wood companies pay aattention in foreign competition. Since if the foreign wood companies have abetter sales and lower costs, it might probate catch up with the Americancompanies or even win the United Sates market.是讲domesticate market的事 我听到的是这样的，这段是不是主题都错了？
放完了 不好意思。。

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The lecture successfully contradicts thefuture of hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine by pointing out its three weaknesses.Simultaneously, the speaker completely refutes the passage by demonstratingthat the evidences of supporting hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine in the readingmaterial largely result from the ignorance and prejudice.

To begin with, the lecture mentions thehydrogen-based fuel-cell engine is not easily available recently. In order tomake the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine, the engineer must transform thehydrogen into liquid state. And this process requires advanced cold technologywhich is not easily to utilize now. Although hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine isrenewable resources as the passage says, lacking of sufficient technology makeshydrogen-based fuel-cell engine hard to become popular.

Secondly, the factories of hydrogen-basedfuel-cell engine produce large pollution. Comparing with the passage indictingthat hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine create nothing harmful in the process ofpowering the car, the speaker points out that the producing process requiresbursting oil and some other resources, which definitely increases the pollutionproblems. This directly jeopardizes what the passage says.

Thirdly, the hydrogen-based fuel-cellengine might not necessary economic, since the manufactory for fuel-cell engineis very expensive. No cheaper alternatives can lead the fuel-cell engine intoelectricity. Thus although the fuel-cell engine is more effective thaninternal-combustion, it will not save money for sure.

In a nutshell, the speaker raises a issuethat the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine has a great deal of disadvantages.This point contradicts with the statement that Fuel-cell engines will probablysoon replace the internal-combustion demonstrated by the passage.



超时了……而且最后一点都没怎么听懂。。囧。。看大家的吧。。

greenegeUID：2886404

同上！LZ我也是跟你一个组的但是找不到你的独立作文

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lz，我824独立写作和你是一组的，请问你的独立写作的链接？

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This lecture refutes the passage in threeaspects to illustrate that United States companies do the same in order toreceive ecocertification.


First of all, the speaker mentions theAmerican consumers do not treat every advertising at the same level. They paymore attention to the label which established by the independent agency, suchas the international organization issuing certifications to wood companies.Therefore, the "ecocertified" wood is favorable and the organizationis trust worth.


Second, although consumers, in fact, careabout the price as mentioned in the passage, the price only have an obviouseffect when one products much higher or lower than the other one. However, thelecture points out that the price variation due to the certification is lessthan fifty percent. So the consumer will consider other factors instead ofprice. The buyer might consider the environment and buy the friend toenvironment product. As a result more people will prefer to buy the productwith the certification.


Finally, the speaker expresses thatAmerican wood businesses consider the foreign market too. Instead only caresabout the market in the United States, the American wood companies pay aattention in foreign competition. Since if the foreign wood companies have abetter sales and lower costs, it might probate catch up with the Americancompanies or even win the United Sates market.

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已发呵呵

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没法粘贴附件，改好了，怎么传给你？
newyork2010 发表于 2010-8-24 13:51

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