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3.29  110304NA   Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime.
  
   
Thousands years of human history being through reflect the trail, from our ancestors to we generation,从句前面加插入语 that how we revolutionized and addressed numerous difficulties especially those toughest and crucial objects recurring every period. That is to say, the most essential issues defined in societal and natural aspects facing us nowadays won’t be genuinely handled across our life span. Here’s my performance.
      Variety of emergent but unsettled societal phenomenon---- that is, starvations, inferior sanitary conditions, unrighteousness wars, even terrorisms又是一个插入语, are all continuously disturbing our society and minimizing our living quality both mentally and physically. Even though the endeavors have been making主动变被动, the issues of starvation and terrible sanitary facilities in impoverished高级词汇 spheres and regions such as South Africa, where always necessitate常用词性形容词但使用动词 substantial international rescuing foods and medical treatments, seem eternal and permanent. Further, one 1930’s sentence just flashed back into my mind引用名言:” Even I had said it already, to all the mothers and fathers here, I shall say it again and again and again, your boys would never been sent into any foreign war---FDR”, which is itself so ridiculous whenever you read it since unrighteousness wars would never stop its steps as long as the interests exist. By the same token出于同样原因, terrorisms boom and bust for the sake of its benefits and, therefore, make a vicious circle.
      
     Apart from human community affairs, environmental circumstances we confronted with are equally unbearable. As a student majoring in Environmental Science, it’s sorrowful to be bombarded with severe topics whose spectra are from over output greenhouse gases as carbon dioxide resulting in global warming and extreme climates to sources of drinking water contaminated by reckless emissions of effluent with hazardous elements leading to human and fauna diseases. Doesn’t the international community acknowledge the very situation? Sarcastically, it does.自问自答 Interests being the core of the world determine that, no matter what we will pay in return, the development of economy and arms are the priority thereby topping at the peak and leading other countries. Thus, who cares so much about the result of irreversible deterioration of environment?
      Granted, we are informed that battles are taken for going green and peace, as the Copenhagen UN Climate Change Conference 2009 and the coming Nuclear Security Summit 2012. Yet, disappointed obviously, the Copenhagen one genuinely was a failure only reaching meaningless framework agreement. In contrast, let us censor whether the Nuclear Security Summit can be a consolation. "
    Without saying, only if we humanity reach a consensus of the sustainable methodology in settling these unavoidable problems and with our great intellects, endeavors, perseverance, and integrity, can we minimize, but not solve thoroughly, the adverse side of these issues within our life span.

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同练!写好发这个帖子上么?

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