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贴上我的第二篇练习,我16号考,打算四月份一天练一篇,大家觉得能有提高吗??
TOPIC: ISSUE48 - "The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."
WORDS: 485 TIME: 00:45:00 DATE: 2009-4-2 10:01:03
Looking through the history of human being development, every step of our technological advancements and social changes are record by historians as guidance to off-springs.From the invetion of wheel to the discovery of electricity. From the innovation in digital world to the propose of the structure of DNA. When we looked back such significant events which brought benefits to every corner of our daily life. In most of case, people only could remeber some famous scientists or political leader. While the mass groups of populaces were rarely mentioned.
It is universually aknowledged that studying history can provide us numrous lessons about the businesses we deal with every day. To great extent, history serve as a motivating force for individual development. Analyzing the history of one's nation may utimately risen the patriotism and the passion to devote contribution to his or her country. Remebering the nagetive effect of wars in the past could help us avaid repetting the same mistake.
On the superfacial view, it really seems that the individuals such as the inventors, founders, or leaders who scratch the road map of human developments. When we mentioned the American civil war, Abramham Lincoln could be easily remebered for his contribution to lead the union break the unfair laws ,won the independant war and emancipated the black people. In the realm of scientific reserch, the Nobel prize ownners will be forever recorded in the human history because their famous theories or discoveries which exerted vital influence in technology progress. The name of Albert Einstein, Tomas Adison, Wotson and click are widespread to all of the world.
Every nation might have its own hero, who once played a significant role to change the histories of its country. The example to this point involved American George Washington, South African Mandela and Chinese Chinaman Mao, those who receive great reverence from their populace. In the business world, Bill Gates, the founder of Mircosoft corperation was considered as the role model on the morden concept of success, because he epedite the development of PC industry and push people into the wonderful information age. All the hot figures did do tremedous work to impetus the progress of our society. However, we definitely cannot ingore the power of great pubilc people.
Without the support of populace, the famous few could hardly succeeded in their feilds. Needlss to say exerting influence on the history. many of world maricles,like Great wall, Pymides were constructed by groups of people. The American civil war would never succeeded if the black people did not help the union. Without the endeavor of numerous ancenstor to explore the aknowledge and experience, the breakthough in scientific research will never come ture.
In sum, even if the famous few help the paly a vital role in helping our society improved in every aspects. But the support of groups of people is the main force to change histories and exert forever influence.
TOPIC: ARGUMENT19 - The following appeared in a letter from the manager of a rock band named Double Rice.
"One year ago, tickets for Double Rice's concerts in stadiums around the country took, on average, at least 24 hours to sell out, if they sold out at all. But the band has been enjoying a surge in nationwide popularity among 14 to 25 year olds, and the 30,000 tickets for a recent concert in Megalopolis sold out in 12 minutes. Clearly the ticket sales in Megalopolis are a result both of the band's increased popularity and of the advertising campaign run in Megalopolis by the Ad Lib advertising agency. Thus, in order to ensure that the band's success in Megalopolis is repeated across the country, the band should hire Ad Lib to duplicate the Megalopolis ad campaign on a nationwide scale."
WORDS: 361 TIME: 00:30:00 DATE: 2009-4-2 10:01:03
The author claimed that the band should hire Ad Lib to duplicate the megalopolis ad campaign all over the country to ensure the band's success in Megalopolis. The reason the support this claim is that recently the band was quite popular among 14 to 25 years olds and the tickets were immediately sold out compared before. The argument appears to be sound, however, careful examination of the supporting evidences reveals several facets which may be overlooked.
The precondition of the conclusion is advertising campaign did help the band to succeed. But there is no specific information to show it. The author fail to discribe any plans about their advertisment, how did they procede it? by which mean they attract audiences? and what the response from the public. It is entirely possible that the success in Megalopolis was only due to the popularity of band. Perhaps there are more youngster who are among 14 to 25 year olds in this place, or perhaps the local people ocassionally are more fond of this band.
Similarily, the author also failed to consider the total number of the tickets in Megalopolis. If the total number of tickets this time was far less than one year ago, it is naturly sold out faster. Beside, the another important thing is wether the band are really enjoying the nationwide popularity. without any stastic data to confirm it, I simple can not take the prediction seriously.
Further more, it is difficult to just copy the success in one area to the other or to the all nation. If the public like the Couble Rice band depend on many factors, such as the population age, their vocation, the percentage of youngster. Without any analysis on the nationwide market, only repying on the advertising campaign could hardly ensure the success on nationwide scale.
In sum, the author is too hasty to draw the conclusion only based on one phenomena in one area. To make a reasonable suggestion, he should futher reserch the national polularity of this band, the attitude from public towards the advertising campaign and how to arrange the whole process of the concert differently according to the specific conditons. |
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