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sorry,I am late.
That the successful people should take new or familiar things has been the hot issue discussed and debated for a decade. A fair portion of people insist that they should avoid the risks, so that they could enjoy the success they have achieved. Others argue that taking something new is a better choice, in order to get more successes. As far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter perspective./ O. I* `2 O4 g3 }/ q4 U
First and foremost, the new things mean not only risks but also opportunities.(that is,有一些逻辑词连接起来更好) Rejecting the new things equals to rejecting chances as well. At the beginning of the reform and open policy, Zhejiang province was very poor for it has few resources and arable fields. However, the people there were brave enough to take risks and good at grasping chances (which hardly depend on their disadvantage on resources,更specific 一些). Now it is one of the richest parts in China.
Furthermore, the first decade of the 21th century has witnessed the dramatic changes in China and all around the world. One of the most obvious happened in the IT industrial. The Microsoft is still the biggest company in this field, but now it is confronting the tense competition with Google, which has a history (要加介词,of)no more than 10 years but with more advantages. And what is more, the fasting growth of Facebook, founded in2004, threatens both of them. In sum the innovation, now, is so important that could make you successful or fail immediately. As a result, it is necessary for the successful people to spare no effect to take new things. : Y& R; H+ c# a* L
Additionally, in my opinion, big success means more abilities, more contributions. And doing the things that you have already done well once more will give you nothing but a dull process. However doing something new, even you fail to do it well, you will gain new knowledge and experience, and the whole society will know more about the new thing. And thus, you will be more successful. Take my research project for example. If I do the same experiments several times, I will get more familiar, tired and one same result. On the other hand, if I try something new, I may be excited by one or two new results out, or get disappointment by doing the experiments like this will get failure. However, only through the latter way can the science get improvements.
With the reasons rendered above, we can safely draw the conclusion that the successful people should take new things and take risks. So that they could keep successful, achieve more, and do more contributions to the world.
跟上次一样的感觉,行文很流畅,举例也很得当,赞哦~ |
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