【独立写作】cmj提纲奋斗篇。每天10个。启航。

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不知道大家怎么觉得，我老觉得写T的这些“生活琐事”提不起劲。。因为找不到喜欢的内容来填充。也就是随便凑凑，反正凑出来也不会差。就是我自己看着恶心。。
      虽然大家说T的写作内容要求不高，写些大众化的东西即可。但是，额，也可能我对自己要求比较变态。。总希望搞点新意搞点创意，不要让考官一眼扫到几个关键词就联想到之前看过的某某某某某某某某某某某某篇文章。。。。。

      在此开个贴。主要是怕我自己偷懒。也顺便练习短时间提纲组织能力。更顺便熟悉题目。
      当然也欢迎大家来讨论~或者跟偶一起练习·~~

      总之我是一天十个题的提纲，杠上了。

      目前题目来自草木斑&glamoursky斑整理的JJ。在此感谢两位大人~

    now FIGHTING!

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佩服LZ毅力

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这个贴是什么？

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【1】people spend more time on personal enjoyment rather than what they shuold do
这题。。啥是what they should do?。。纠结
不会！！

【2】因为环境复杂问题，所以个人没有什么可以做。
这个题目是说环保的么。。？中文题目真是歧义。。
显然no（去年地球日的口号就是从身边做起）
1.donate to org.
2.reuse waste
3.buy less plastic
写不出文邹邹的就举例子。。这是这两天看范文的体会。。

【3】it is more important to use land for human need than to save land for endangered animals.
no
1.gene diversity/food chain balance
2.technology helps with a lot of things,but cannot help animals.


【4】it is more important to have the rules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to work and shool
no
authority is to have these rules to confine staff's attention to work.however they miss several points about it
1.boring the atmosphere in the office.  black suit ,no inspiration...
2.prevent them from stading out.the leader will go further from the right without the objectives.
3.freedom..

【5】如果每年上课11个月以上，学生会得到更有效的教育。
否
1.children，玩的年龄，to get understanding of real world and not aware of abstract things,thus the lessons increased will make them fill confused
2.middle school,初中经历。。not effective,because, only limited contents set for the period.
3.Univ. time to learn how to live with one own.
Text book is not their entire life.They need more source from reall life to learn about.

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昨天熄灯了- -
【1】grades encourage student to learn
cooperation and competition is always the everlasting topic for some debates. schools, an institution offer both by classes and grades, take it as granted to follow the principles while students at times get crazy about these rules, especially about the rules of grades. The opinion I hold is that grades are necessary for most of time for the following reasons.
1.grades reflects some of the defects of students' learning process. a warning for them to correct in time. A scale that balance the studying time.
2.although some time bad grades may result in stress or other negtive sides, which, on the other hand, should be handled by them, competition between friends do spur one's learning.
In sum, take the view of grades in the right way...

【2】technology make people's lives simpler in turn to make people's lives more complicated.
yes   这种题。最省事儿就是举三个例子。
1.automobile  go---walked----learn how to drive
2.computer    info---go library/newspaper--purchase facilities and sometimes even get some Trojan virus.
3.cells       communicate----pay visit/ mail-----buy cells/ change cells/ music when receiving or calling/ fees.......

【3】renwable resources of energy will soon replace fossils fuels such as gases, oil and coal.
Fossils fuels, from the first day they were brought up, has always be the hot topic of every nation. With it associated with everyone's daily life so tightly, it is hard for me to follow the tone of its replacement by renewable resources.
发现俺现在改写法了。。已经过了刚开始的愤青自由式写法，开始走回模板式开头了。。不知是好是坏哇。应为曾经有同学提说我的开头不像开头- -  。。默哀，明儿记得问问。。
1.cars burns fossil fuel can not be renewed soon.
2.price of renewal and facilities to use the energy are still too high
3.reserves are still enough

【4】to solve problems present and future, it is necessary to understand the past.
history course..
1.past is the cuase of future results.geology. sediments.
2,repeated in history.

【5】the best way to travel is in a group les by a tour guide.
no
1.not free, not enough time at the place I love.
2.force to enter expensive stores
prepare well before going,hard and soft vision,

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【1】聪明朋友比幽默朋友重要
If I was a bird, friend for me is just like the gentle wind, couraging me and giving me power to sail off. With so many friends around, I am so content that hardly have I examined whether they are humorous or intelligent. Having thought over about it, I found my referrence towards who are more of the kind of intelligence.
1 problem solving. their advice is always the cure.
2 considerable.sad, close to each other, understand the slung between us quickly.
3 also intelligence do have sth to do with the sence of humor.

【2】should government focus more on the preserving natural environment and less on economic development.
Civilians, who live under the canopy of government, usally have some words about it, both the good and evil. Recently, some people asserts that the government should pay more attention to the environment problem due to the warning sounds of, say, global warming. But As far as I am concerned, it is still too late for government to change the key point.
1.government is the center of economy. regulation, deal with ressesions.
2.environment problem is not serious enough compared to economy that affects civilian's eating and wearing. River--pollute--money---improve.

【3】it is better for students at university of in college to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades.
no
1.stress---even suicide.already burden of job/ grades.
2.erase interests. students at this level have learned to seek for more difficult material

【4】富有挑战性的工作比简单工作更让人觉得快乐。
no
同上。。

【5】To give the same grade to all the members who do the same project together. What do u think of the way of evaluation.
no
1. unfair for one that works hardest in a lazy group
2. destroy the atomsphere of a group if is low-graded.

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资料那边差不多了，回归，基于上课and草木组重任在先~缩水至5 per day。。

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16# lintelle


吓。。22.。。。。惧。。。。
看来继续奋斗了!目标27左右~
40天攻坚了。。together with G.....

vivian也加油哇~嘿嘿~

不会太久vivianUID：2592395

草莓酱好棒～ 加油～:)～～

lintelleUID：2297267

还是挺不错的嘛。这样上场保底是个２２分。就按自己的程序练下去吧～

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话说我从来都是两点呃 因为字太多了 说三点就要500+了 时间不允许

ddcmj519UID：176326

承蒙楼上滴老大抬爱嘞~
这仨是小组作业，俺都掐着时间写的。考场上的话估计就是会出现些个拼写错误。。其他我觉得都还行的。
不过现在弱项是学生、老师话题。找不到例子- -！所以这两天跑去看资料了。。
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=911528&extra=
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=913132&extra=
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举2理由未必是弱点。版上有些结构有特色的习作，点击版头上的精华自己看。至于对你自己的水准而言是否是弱点，还是要看看你的习作才能判断。能否自己挑一篇习作，找你人为你在考场上能写出来的水准。

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感谢两位大人的支持哇~
俺继续努力哇~

俺滴资料储备帖建立~
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监督你哈