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[i习作temp] issue7 [OB小组]第23次作业-stonescj-vedio&written records [复制链接]

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发表于 2007-8-4 19:34:11 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
7.The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.

Nowadays video camera has taken the absolute advantages over written records and people could attain more information from video camera. Nevertheless, the video camera could not take the place of the traditional written records, it is necessary to make a balance between them.

On the one hand, no one can deny that the video camera has changed our life into a more vivid and convenient mode. Overwhelming influenced by soaring proceeding of the science and technology, the forms of recording and representing our daily lives has become more and more diversified, and the video camera is one of the production of advanced science. Compared with written records, video camera has plenty of advantages, such as accuracy, authenticity, integrity and so forth. For instance, the video camera could record the actual event and then exhibit it to the audience. For instance, when people watching the video documentary of 911 event, the tragedy as if revived in people's head. It is convenient to record a totally integrated process of a wedding, and a family could put down every detail as sincerely as possible of their baby and record the growing process for future reference. Besides, the video camera is used as a powerful instrument to record the experimental phenomena in science domain. Therefore, video camera possesses a mass of advantages and have played an important role in people's daily lives.

Howbeit, it is arbitrary to say that the video camera has already won over traditional written documents and become the new dominant of documentation field since video records is limited in several aspects. That is to say, only use video camera could not reach to extensive and profound level, since video camera could not give voice to abstract concept and psychological sentiment. There are still many fields that video cannot be used as powerful methods or recording. For example, when report a current social problem, the video could only provide with a series of pictures or video records, however, video camera could not introduce the background of this issue  and give impartial criticism, all of those disadvantages should be fetched up by written records. In addition, written records could not only describe the inner sensation of people but also summarize the common identities of different events. Through written records, people could understand the essential of many affairs more extensive and profound.

Furthermore, according to the advantages of two forms of documents, it is necessary to utilize their advantages hand make a balance between them. We cannot say whether video camera or the written document is more important than other in that each one has its irreplaceable merits and values. Video camera offers the accurate and convincing method of recording which can revive life happend before while traditional written records can provide a more detailed and rational record in lower cost. So the best way is to combine the two record forms together, take newspaper for example, report extensive and convincing criticism go with vivid pictures, which could make people read it comfortable. Only in this way could make use of their severally predominance adequately.

As what mentioned above, it is easy to come to the conclusion that both the video camera and written records are significant in our daily life, we should utilize their own advantages reasonably and establish a balance between them.
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发表于 2007-8-4 20:47:20 |只看该作者
Nowadays video camera has taken the absolute advantages over written records and people could attain more information from video camera. Nevertheless, the video camera could not take the place of the traditional written records, it is necessary to make a balance between them.

On the one hand, no one can deny that the video camera has changed our life into a more vivid and convenient mode. Overwhelming influenced by soaring proceeding of the science and technology, the forms of recording and representing our daily lives has become more and more diversified, and the video camera is one of the production of advanced science. Compared with written records, video camera has plenty of advantages, such as accuracy, authenticity, integrity and so forth. For instance, the video camera could record the actual event and then exhibit it to the audience. For instance, when people watching the video documentary of 911 event, the tragedy as if revived in people's head我也想写911,编了半天没有编出来-_-. It is convenient to record a totally integrated process of a wedding, and a family could put down every detail as sincerely as possible of their baby and record the growing process for future reference. Besides, the video camera is used as a powerful instrument to record the experimental phenomena in science domain. Therefore, video camera possesses a mass of advantages and have played an important role in people's daily lives.

Howbeit, it is arbitrary to say that the video camera has already won over traditional written documents and become the new dominant of documentation field since video records is limited in several aspects. That is to say, only use video camera could not reach to extensive and profound level, since video camera could not give voice to abstract concept and psychological sentiment地道的感觉. There are still many fields that video cannot be used as powerful methods or recording. For example, when reporting a current social problem, the video could only provide with a series of pictures or video records, however, video camera could not introduce the background of this issue  and give impartial criticism, all of those disadvantages should be fetched up by written records. In addition, written records could not only describe the inner sensation of people but also summarize the common identities of different events. Through written records, people could understand the essential of many affairs more extensive and profound.//比较的好,有个比较的动作更切题。

Furthermore, according to the advantages of two forms of documents, it is necessary to utilize their advantages hand?好像有点怪 make a balance between them. We cannot say whether video camera or the written document is more important than other in that each one has its irreplaceable merits and values. Video camera offers the accurate and convincing method of recording which can revive life happend before while traditional written records can provide a more detailed and rational record in lower cost. So the best way is to combine the two record forms together, take newspaper for example, report extensive and convincing criticism go with vivid pictures, which could make people read it comfortable. Only in this way could make use of their severally predominance adequately.(觉得说的太绝对反而有点不妥。不如说 是best way to)

As what mentioned above, it is easy to come to the conclusion that both the video camera and written records are significant in our daily life, we should utilize their own advantages reasonably and establish a balance between them.
比前几次的感觉更好了呢  我现在苦于写不出道理了,只好长篇的例子呜呜

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