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本帖最后由 yhwz 于 2009-4-21 20:52 编辑
这里有个问题,
1社会化和教育并不是并列的,所以你不能说:社会化只是孩子适应社会发展的一个必要环节,教育则是影响社会为来的重要因素。教育可以教孩子社会化,也可以教孩子不社会化。你应该说教育孩子怎么样才 ...
comorain 发表于 2009-4-20 09:28
谢谢楼主
关于130,确实不是并列
但是如果这么细分的话,那么教育孩子社会化也可以分两种情况
1教育朝好的方向社会化,比如学校教育
2“教育”朝坏的方向社会化 比如黑社会团体
当然这是我强词夺理了
我只是为了避开说社会化我笼统的说了教育,实际上是知识等的教育去并列社会化,可以吗?
也就是body2中的另一方面——知识和创造力——这是我要强调的重要因素。(其中教育的一方面只是为联系下社会化随便说了下)
而社会化与否已被我用部落小孩融入群体的反例否定了,所以教育的例子也不再强调社会化
而只是教育>知识、创新>生产力(工业革命 信息技术革命)>社会改变
如果改为按教育孩子怎样社会化,则与我的原始部落小孩有点相背(当然这样也无跑题之忧了)
恩看到那个issue88的主动改被动,主题词更换
我知道我是在牵强了。我的提纲要换,花了很多功夫问跑题不如重想个。恩
关于31,B2应该为当结果存在争议时,money spent on research可能不好。确实 我内容是这样写的,TS弄错了 额。。
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TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
In the thesis, there are two claims: one is about relationship between of socialization and the destiny of society; and the other is whether we have learned how to raise children. As far as I am concerned, I do not agree with the speaker, because the future of society is not determined by how children are socialized but influenced by knowledge and innovation passed down in education. And in fact, we have learned well how to raise children now.
To begin with, I concede that socialization, defined as a process of gradually learning to communicate and cooperate with patterns, distinguished from keeping nature character forever is indispensable, especially in today's society which likes a new assembly line plant. In order to let children keep with the trend for the future society, bringing up children to socialize is necessary. However, to socialize cannot determine the future of society. A opposite example is about the children in tribes. Admittedly, they can be well adapted to their societies, and keep their customs from one generation to another, without problems on communication and cooperation. However, they still live under the line of poverty. Therefore, we can understand that the factor which can determine the destiny of society does not lie in socialization of children.
So, what is the essential factor? In my perspective, it is education that have great influence on the future of society. For one thing, it provides an environment for children to contact with elementary society as forms of family, kindergartens, and primary schools. For another thing, the knowledge and innovation passed down and cultivated in education changes the whole world. For example, James Watt, enlightened by family education and cultivated his interests on experiments, finally created stream engine with the knowledge of dynamic of stream. This invention led to Industrial Revolution in 19th century. Another example which also can illustrate this point, is that John Von Neuman, who got well education in school, create the first electronic computer, making use of binary notation and the thought of programme saved. This creation also result in the jump of society. These examples share on common character that education in knowledge and innovation, no matter come from school or families, is important. Let's look at those tribes. Just because of the absence of education, these tribes still stagnate in the status of primitive without any development. Therefore, what can influenced the future of society is education, in my view.
Then, whether have we learned how to raise and educate children, so that they can be benefit for society? My answer is certainly yes. From Secreter to Plato, and to Aristoteles, the mentor relationship were shared among three giants. This proves that people had learned how to educate children thousands of years ago. The productivity is advancing, and this just introduced by the knowledge of science and technologies which descended from education. The appearance of inventors and scientists who enlightened by education, as talked above, are well explained that people have learned how to instruct children in cognizance of objects. Besides, in emotion, many merits of characters such as tolerance and mercy, gratefulness and humanity etc. are continueing, through education no matter from families or schools. For example, parents sometimes will tell children to care little animals, to be mercy to the weak, and to respect and revere life in all over the world. Thus, no matter in reason and in emotion, we can find that people have learned how to raise the children today. So the speaker's worry is dispensable.
All in all, as the talked above, the key factor which can greatly influence the destiny of society is education, rather than socialization of children. And the result of education for thousands of years have demonstrated that people have learned how to raise their children.
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