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发表于 2005-8-23 09:42:40 |显示全部楼层
按照我们的讨论情况,给出第一天挑战题目:)

(希望大家发自己的作文前参读一下斑竹们给的发文规则!!)

issue 每日给出3个,argu 2个,大家按自己的能力改文,不过要保证数量哦

每天22:00点为限,过期贴出的文章可能被改的几率很小:(


罗索了半天,下面给出题目
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发表于 2005-8-23 09:51:01 |显示全部楼层
issue (flealda 提供)


43    to be an effective leader ,a public official must maintain the highest ethical and
       moral standards

195   the goal of politics should not be the pursuit of an ideal, but rather the search
        for common ground and reasonable consensus
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发表于 2005-8-23 09:53:19 |显示全部楼层
请把自己文章发在新帖里,再连接到这个帖子里
8.20T
9.16G作文
10.22G
拼了!!!

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发表于 2005-8-23 09:54:33 |显示全部楼层
补一篇 issue

51  education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the
      individual meeds and interests of each student
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发表于 2005-8-23 09:58:42 |显示全部楼层
argument:

145   A new study collected data that shows that people who snore are more likely to gain weight than are people who do not snore. It is well known that many people who snore also stop breathing frequently during the night for a few seconds, a condition called sleep apnea. The interruption of breathing wakes the person—often so briefly that the waking goes unnoticed—and can leave the person too tired during the day to exercise. Anyone who snores, therefore, should try to eat less than the average person and to exercise more.

147 The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine.

"Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey asked video-game players what features they thought were most important in a video game. According to the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers. Whirlwind has just introduced several such games with an extensive advertising campaign directed at people 10 to 25 years old, the age-group most likely to play video games. It follows, then, that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically in the next few months."
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发表于 2005-8-23 12:15:06 |显示全部楼层

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发表于 2005-8-23 12:22:08 |显示全部楼层

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发表于 2005-8-23 18:47:02 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2005-8-23 19:02:11 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2005-8-23 23:09:38 |显示全部楼层

回复 #8 cuilei_1985 的帖子

我作了一下稍微的改动,你可以去看一下
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发表于 2005-8-24 00:16:43 |显示全部楼层
来来来,算我一个,我9.8

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发表于 2005-8-24 10:34:06 |显示全部楼层
iuuse43 一个多小时才写完...

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=325515


argument147

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=325549

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加油哦
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