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08MM好,fancy又来求教了。这个题目想了很久,没有想出直接支持的论点,所以分领域写了。不知这么写如何。请多指教。这题份领域写是个办法,不然很容易写得太抽象。
Do you agree or disagree the following statement?
Successful people take new things and take risks rather than the thing that they've done well
We often like to ask successful people about their secrets and knacks. However, we tend to ignore the simple answer that success is the old ABC - ability, breaks, and courage. So in my opinion, successful people, with their extraordinary courage and insight, gain their ability and prospering career by taking new things and risks. We can find the truth in different areas of human society.
In (缺the)scientific and technological realm, great inventions and progress always come from scientists’ continuously(形容词) trying(try in) new things. Without such spirit and endeavors, our society would cease to advance. For example, in the days when Darwinism was prevailing, Mendel, an ordinary monk, sought to figure out something “unchanged” while his peer scientists were interested in “change”.(这个变和不变指的是什么?没怎么看懂) In other scientists’ eyes, Mendel was risking wasting his time and run in the opposite direction. However, if he had not tried new approaches and thought out of the box, he could never lay the foundation of genetics. Such examples can be also found in the Wright brothers, Edison, Bill Gates, and so on. In a word, only in constantly tying new things and taking risks can scientists succeed in their careers, as well as pave a future for human beings.
In business realm, taking news things or risks can ensure businessmen or companies stand out of mediocre crowds. Facing fierce competitions, businessmen need be different and creative from other producers(creative from这个搭配不合适了;be creative and different from other producers) to make money. A good example is Amazon.com. Before Amazon 缺逗号 most books were sold in a bookshop, and there was a limited space to store those books and a limited radius of potential customers. As a result, no bookstore or company can stand out from this business. However, Amazon took a brand new method— to store their books in large warehouses and sell them on the Internet. So the problems of space and limitation are solved, and this creative idea gave Amazon advantage and made them a success in an already competitive market. In brief, innovation and adventure can bring unexpected success in business field.
In political realm, successful politics are never content with the exiting achievement and often searching for reform. Staying in a comfort zone sometimes can be the biggest danger. The case of Barrack Obama’s successful election of American president serves as a great example. When America was in the midst of crisis, Obama’s call for reform wined the favor of American people, and his bold and swift actions scattered people’s doubts and reaffirmed people’s faith. Obama’s success demonstrates that a great politics(politician?) should be equipped with the courage and insight to take something new, even if such things may be adventures(adventurous) sometimes.
In conclusion, from the examples and reasons above, I strongly agree that successful people seldom rest on their vested accomplishment and stand still. Only in pursuing for new things and areas lies the motivation and opportunities for success.
fancyww 发表于 2009-8-28 21:01 |
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