issue40 [color=scarlet]今天不想放阿狗了~来一篇野鼠~大家帮忙掐阿~

kaventUID: 154493

40. Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem.


As the speaker asserts, scholars and researches will be better off if scholars concentrate on their individual interests rather than the contribution to the larger society. However, I do agree with this statement insofar that scholars should be more concerned with their interest, but an over emphasis on individual interest may sometimes have negative effects.


In the first place, whether a research will benefit the larger society is hard to be determined, and the over emphasis on the foreseen contributions will possibly undermine many researches which with potential benefit to the well-being of society and to discovering the very truth of natural world. How can we evaluate the contribution of a research to the larger society? This may be a question that worth thinking by any one who care about the relationship between science and the progress of civilization, but few of whom could have a perfect answer. Indeed, many of the scientific researches will be contributing the society in such a long period of time from now, which make us unable to predict the contributions. Just as the case that how can we judge the strength of a great man when he was only an infant baby? During in debut of the first car in the world, people laughed at that funny staff because it ran even slower than a carriage. After the advent of the first modern computer, some experts believed that it is useless due to its tremendous cost and weak calculating ability. But just take a look around the world we are living today. Modern transport make the earth much smaller than ever, and enable us to go to almost everywhere in the world. Modern science of communication supported by powerful computers network make all kinds of information we need so freely available, and take the progress of science into the speedy highway. All this significant convenience and facilities are made by the inventions used to be judged useless. Thus if we put too much emphasis on the contributions of research achievements to the current society, we would be repeating the mistakes of our ancestors.


In the second place, the individual interests will be the best motivation and courage of the scholars in their researches. Complex, difficult, and even dangerous as the scientific researches are, I cannot imagine how scientists could carry out their researches without a strong interest in the subject. The interest in the question and the curiosity to the answer will make the scholars much more positive in studying the extant theories and trying to find the way to the unknown truth. And their interest, acts as an impetus, may even make them more content about what they are studying, and turn the somewhat bald and difficult researches into joyful happiness.


Admittedly, if we lend too much reliance and put too much emphasis on individual interest of scholars, some of the researches may have deleterious consequences to the society. For example the research of clone technology on human body, if is processed, will be a great challenge to the ethical system of the entire mankind. The clone people could be “produced” in use of human-body experiments, underground trade of human organs, or even for some other more immoral purposes. Although this kind of study meets some scientists’ interest, it should not be allowed to proceed.


To sum up, rather than the contribution to the larger society, scholars should concentrate on their individual interests in their researches, which will encourage them when facing difficulties. However, people should try to limit their interests, by means of law and principle of science study, otherwise, the researches may harm others, ultimately the society.

Apr 3rd 21:31

needleUID: 158900

愤怒的占个座...(因为我老写不出来，555)

补：西西，改在下面了

lovebrianUID: 157127

视觉上看。body1偏大~~~~文章结构相应也就不太和谐 可以调整一下布局
今天心情极差~~~没办法帮你改了~~提出的意见也只能是垃圾~~~
所以先占个座位，明天来填

kaventUID: 154493

谢谢两位哦~
今天晚上偶头晕晕的，一会睡了

fishergirlUID: 152325

这么早就睡吗?
我也先占个座吧，感觉好像占了很多座，可是最后又没回去填上，真是不好意思。

apolloxpUID: 156355

好恐怖的的第一段
先挖坑明天填

发呆的小熊UID: 139071

40. Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem.


As the speaker asserts, scholars and researches will be better off if scholars concentrate on their individual interests rather than the contribution to the larger society. However, I do agree with this statement insofar that scholars should be more concerned with their interest, but an over emphasis on individual interest may sometimes have negative effects.


In the first place, whether a research will benefit the larger society is hard to be determined, and the over emphasis on the foreseen contributions will possibly undermine many researches which with 不对吧，这里是定从吗 potential benefit to the well-being of society and to discovering似乎和上面一样有问题 the very truth of natural world. How can we evaluate the contribution of a research to the larger society? This may be a question that worth thinking by any one who care about the relationship between science and the progress of civilization, but few of whom could have a perfect answer. Indeed, many of the scientific researches will be contributing the society in such a long period of time from now, which make  makes  us unable to predict the contributions. Just as the case that how can we judge the strength of a great man when he was only an infant baby是不是用一个就可以了? During in debut of the first car in the world, people laughed at that funny staff because it ran even slower than a carriage. After the advent of the first modern computer, some experts believed that it is useless due to its tremendous cost and weak calculating ability. But just take a look around the world we are living today. Modern transporttransports or transportation make the earth much smaller than ever, and enable us to go to almost everywhere in the world. Modern science of communication supported by powerful computers network makemakes all kinds of information we need so freely available, and taketakes the progress of science into the speedy highway. All this significant convenience and facilities are made by the inventions used to be judged useless. Thus if we put too much emphasis on the contributions of research achievements to the current society, we would be repeating the mistakes of our ancestors.这一段讲了很多例子，但没有点到科学家或者研究者。虽说不一定非要点到，但既然题目主要是谈这个，还是提到更合适一些吧


In the second place, the individual interests will be the best motivation and courage of the scholars in their researches. Complex, difficult, and even dangerous as the scientific researches are, I cannot imagine how scientists could carry out their researches without a strong interest in the subject. The interest in the question and the curiosity to the answer will make the scholars much more positive in studying the extant theories and trying to find the way to the unknown truth. And their interest, acts as an impetus, may even make them more content about what they are studying, and turn the somewhat bald and difficult researches into joyful happiness.


Admittedly, if we lend too much reliance and put too much emphasis on individual interest of scholars, some of the researches may have deleterious consequences to the society. For example , the research of clone technology on human body, if is processed, will be a great challenge to the ethical system of the entire mankind. The clone people could be “produced” in use of human-body experiments, underground trade of human organs, or even for some other more immoral purposes. Although this kind of study meets some scientists’ interest, it should not be allowed to proceed.这一段要是能点到题目里面所说的however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem.就更好啦



To sum up, rather than the contribution to the larger society, scholars should concentrate on their individual interests in their researches, which will encourage them when facing difficulties. However, people should try to limit their interests, by means of law and principle of science study, otherwise, the researches may harm others, ultimately the society.
写得不错，挑不出啥毛病，学了不少东西，呵呵

needleUID: 158900

40. Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem.


As the speaker asserts, scholars and researches [researchers] will be better off if scholars concentrate on their individual interests rather than the contribution to the larger society. However, I do agree with this statement insofar [这是个adv.不是perp.，这里缺conj.] that scholars should be more concerned with their interest, but an over emphasis on individual interest may sometimes have negative effects.


In the first place, whether a research will benefit the larger society is hard to be determined, and the over emphasis on the foreseen [是不是换成假设的或者想象中的要好一点，预见的是不是比较肯定以后会有贡献] contributions will possibly undermine many researches which [are] with potential benefit to the well-being [不要连字符吧？] of society and to discovering the very truth of natural world. How can we evaluate the contribution of a research to the larger society [这一句最好断开写两句吧，结构太复杂了而且容易弄混淆，我看了好几遍才大致看明白]? This may be a question that [加上is或者去掉that] worth thinking by any one who care [cares] about the relationship between science and the progress of civilization, but few of whom [如果这样用，我想前面的any one应该换成those，不然few无从说起] could have a perfect answer. Indeed, many of the scientific researches will be contributing [will have been contributing to] the society in such a long period of time from now, which make [makes] us unable to predict the [their] contributions. [主系结构可以这样省略吗?我不确定] Just as the case that how can we judge the strength of a great man when he was only an infant baby [infant和baby去掉一个，或者换成in infancy]? During in [?多了一个？][the] debut of the first car in the world, people laughed at that funny staff [汗ing…是一种俚语吗？没看懂] because it ran even slower than a carriage [really?]. After the advent of the first modern computer, some experts believed that it is [was] useless due to its tremendous cost and weak calculating ability [这个……有点疑问哦。不如说其巨大的体积。]. But just take a look around the world we are living [in] today. Modern transport [做交通工具时应该是可数的，用复数] make the earth much smaller than ever, and enable us to go to [去掉to] almost everywhere in the world. Modern science of communication supported by powerful computers network make makes all kinds of information we need so freely available, and take takes the progress of science into the speedy highway. All all this?  this significant convenience and facilities are made by the inventions used to be judged useless. Thus if we put too much emphasis on [用了3遍了，试试看换动词说法underline/accentuate] the contributions of research achievements to the current society, we would be repeating the mistakes of our ancestors.


In the second place, the individual interests will be the best motivation and courage [encouragement. Courage是勇气，encourage才是鼓励] of the scholars in their researches. Complex, difficult, and even dangerous as the scientific researches are, I cannot imagine how scientists could carry out their researches without a strong interest in the subject. The interest in the question and the curiosity to the answer will make the scholars much more positive in studying the extant theories and trying to find the way to the unknown truth. And their interest, acts [act] as an impetus, may even make them more content about what they are studying, and turn the somewhat bald and difficult [把the后面的定语后置] researches into joyful happiness.


Admittedly, if we lend too much reliance and put too much emphasis on [又来了，呵呵] individual interest of scholars, some of the researches may have deleterious consequences to the society [感觉因果说不通，应当有个中间衔接：过分强调兴趣—>学者们毫无顾忌的进行研究—>研究结果对社会有害。而不是说强调了兴趣，实验的结果就会有害。你说呢？]. For example the research of clone technology on human body, if is processed, will be a great challenge to the ethical system of the entire mankind. The clone people could be [太绝对了。克隆出来的“人”其实应该是和自然生产的人一样，是社会的一个单位，有同样的人权，不可能为了做人体实验之类而（合法）生产。当然，被控制生产并利用另当别论。加个限定词比较好。] “produced” in use of human-body experiments, underground trade of human organs, or even for some other more immoral purposes. Although this kind of study meets some scientists’ interest, it should not be allowed to proceed.


To sum up, rather than the contribution to the larger society, scholars should concentrate on their individual interests in their researches, which will encourage them when facing difficulties. However, people should try to limit their interests, by means of law and principle of science study, otherwise, the researches may harm others, [and] ultimately the society.

[Body1篇幅过长，尤其是Body1讲的是科学研究对于社会的贡献之不确定性，应该不是真正的中心内容（更多关注兴趣）。所以感觉失衡了。Body2应该多讲一点。]

kaventUID: 154493

In the first place, whether a research will benefit the larger society is hard to be determined, and the over emphasis on the foreseen contributions will possibly undermine many researches which with 不对吧，这里是定从吗恩，改成have potential benefit to the well-being of society and to discovering似乎和上面一样有问题 the very truth of natural world. How can we evaluate the contribution of a research to the larger society? This may be a question that worth thinking by any one who care about the relationship between science and the progress of civilization, but few of whom could have a perfect answer. Indeed, many of the scientific researches will be contributing the society in such a long period of time from now, which make makes us unable to predict the contributions. Just as the case that how can we judge the strength of a great man when he was only an infant baby是不是用一个就可以了? During in debut of the first car in the world, people laughed at that funny staff because it ran even slower than a carriage. After the advent of the first modern computer, some experts believed that it is useless due to its tremendous cost and weak calculating ability. But just take a look around the world we are living today. Modern transporttransports or transportation make the earth much smaller than ever, and enable us to go to almost everywhere in the world. Modern science of communication supported by powerful computers network makemakes all kinds of information we need so freely available, and taketakes the progress of science into the speedy highway. All this significant convenience and facilities are made by the inventions used to be judged useless. Thus if we put too much emphasis on the contributions of research achievements to the current society, we would be repeating the mistakes of our ancestors.这一段讲了很多例子，但没有点到科学家或者研究者。虽说不一定非要点到，但既然题目主要是谈这个，还是提到更合适一些吧有道理，最后还是应该回到主题


In the second place, the individual interests will be the best motivation and courage of the scholars in their researches. Complex, difficult, and even dangerous as the scientific researches are, I cannot imagine how scientists could carry out their researches without a strong interest in the subject. The interest in the question and the curiosity to the answer will make the scholars much more positive in studying the extant theories and trying to find the way to the unknown truth. And their interest, acts as an impetus, may even make them more content about what they are studying, and turn the somewhat bald and difficult researches into joyful happiness.


Admittedly, if we lend too much reliance and put too much emphasis on individual interest of scholars, some of the researches may have deleterious consequences to the society. For example , the research of clone technology on human body, if is processed, will be a great challenge to the ethical system of the entire mankind. The clone people could be “produced” in use of human-body experiments, underground trade of human organs, or even for some other more immoral purposes. Although this kind of study meets some scientists’ interest, it should not be allowed to proceed.这一段要是能点到题目里面所说的however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem.就更好啦其实我有这个意思，只是没有说明白，下次注意



To sum up, rather than the contribution to the larger society, scholars should concentrate on their individual interests in their researches, which will encourage them when facing difficulties. However, people should try to limit their interests, by means of law and principle of science study, otherwise, the researches may harm others, ultimately the society.
写得不错，挑不出啥毛病，学了不少东西，呵呵

谢谢小熊的批改~其实我的Issue还有挺多问题的，还得努力练~

kaventUID: 154493

As the speaker asserts, scholars and researches [researchers] will be better off if scholars concentrate on their individual interests rather than the contribution to the larger society. However, I do agree with this statement insofar [这是个adv.不是perp.，这里缺conj.] that scholars should be more concerned with their interest, but an over emphasis on individual interest这个interest我一直没弄明白，interests不是利益的意思吗？ may sometimes have negative effects.


In the first place, whether a research will benefit the larger society is hard to be determined, and the over emphasis on the foreseen [是不是换成假设的或者想象中的要好一点，预见的是不是比较肯定以后会有贡献恩，这个词时有问题换成foreseeable吧~] contributions will possibly undermine many researches which [are] with potential benefit to the well-being [不要连字符吧？] of society and to discovering the very truth of natural world. How can we evaluate the contribution of a research to the larger society [这一句最好断开写两句吧，结构太复杂了而且容易弄混淆，我看了好几遍才大致看明白好，我写的时候自己也有点糊涂了]? This may be a question that [加上is或者去掉that] worth thinking by any one who care [cares汗啊，我的单复数问题好像蛮严重……] about the relationship between science and the progress of civilization, but few of whom [如果这样用，我想前面的any one应该换成those，不然few无从说起] could have a perfect answer. Indeed, many of the scientific researches will be contributing [will have been contributing to] the society in such a long period of time from now, which make [makes] us unable to predict the [their] contributions. [主系结构可以这样省略吗?我不确定] Just as the case that how can we judge the strength of a great man when he was only an infant baby [infant和baby去掉一个，或者换成in infancy]? During in [?多了一个？][the] debut of the first car in the world, people laughed at that funny staff [汗ing…是一种俚语吗？没看懂本来想打stuff的……] because it ran even slower than a carriage [really?yes]. After the advent of the first modern computer, some experts believed that it is [was] useless due to its tremendous cost and weak calculating ability [这个……有点疑问哦。不如说其巨大的体积。]. But just take a look around the world we are living [in] today. Modern transport [做交通工具时应该是可数的，用复数恩，对] make the earth much smaller than ever, and enable us to go to [去掉to] almost everywhere in the world. Modern science of communication supported by powerful computers network make makes all kinds of information we need so freely available, and take takes the progress of science into the speedy highway. All all this? this significant convenience and facilities are made by the inventions used to be judged useless. Thus if we put too much emphasis on [用了3遍了，试试看换动词说法underline/accentuate] the contributions of research achievements to the current society, we would be repeating the mistakes of our ancestors.


In the second place, the individual interests will be the best motivation and courage [encouragement. Courage是勇气，encourage才是鼓励courage of scholar，我这里想用勇气的意思，不知道对不对] of the scholars in their researches. Complex, difficult, and even dangerous as the scientific researches are, I cannot imagine how scientists could carry out their researches without a strong interest in the subject. The interest in the question and the curiosity to the answer will make the scholars much more positive in studying the extant theories and trying to find the way to the unknown truth. And their interest, acts [act] as an impetus, may even make them more content about what they are studying, and turn the somewhat bald and difficult [把the后面的定语后置] researches into joyful happiness.


Admittedly, if we lend too much reliance and put too much emphasis on [又来了，呵呵汗啊……] individual interest of scholars, some of the researches may have deleterious consequences to the society [感觉因果说不通，应当有个中间衔接：过分强调兴趣—>学者们毫无顾忌的进行研究—>研究结果对社会有害。而不是说强调了兴趣，实验的结果就会有害。你说呢？这里说得太对了~小熊也提醒我这一点，不然就不能和主题挂上钩了]. For example the research of clone technology on human body, if is processed, will be a great challenge to the ethical system of the entire mankind. The clone people could be [太绝对了。克隆出来的“人”其实应该是和自然生产的人一样，是社会的一个单位，有同样的人权，不可能为了做人体实验之类而合法生产。当然，被控制生产并利用另当别论。加个限定词比较好。我这里想说的都是地下的非法活动，可能没表达好] “produced” in use of human-body experiments, underground trade of human organs, or even for some other more immoral purposes. Although this kind of study meets some scientists’ interest, it should not be allowed to proceed.


To sum up, rather than the contribution to the larger society, scholars should concentrate on their individual interests in their researches, which will encourage them when facing difficulties. However, people should try to limit their interests, by means of law and principle of science study, otherwise, the researches may harm others, [and] ultimately the society.

[Body1篇幅过长，尤其是Body1讲的是科学研究对于社会的贡献之不确定性，应该不是真正的中心内容更多关注兴趣。所以感觉失衡了。Body2应该多讲一点。]这个问题说的好~其实我也意识到了，只是写body1的时候有挺多话说，到了后面就没话说了……结果就写成了这个样子。
谢谢needle的修改~最后几天了，我打算多写些野鼠，看来还差得挺远呢…

needleUID: 158900

intersts我在这里理解的是兴趣。作利益，更多的表示银行的利息吧？

兴趣是“勇气”我觉得不太说得通，鼓励激励可能更好一点。

clone的那个，我的意思就是说你应该作限定，不然就太绝对了

我昨晚炮制了一篇跟你的看法相反的，有时间去看看。

https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=180037

注意身体。

kaventUID: 154493

最初由 needle 发布
[B]intersts我在这里理解的是兴趣。作利益，更多的表示银行的利息吧？

兴趣是“勇气”我觉得不太说得通，鼓励激励可能更好一点。

clone的那个，我的意思就是说你应该作?.

以下省略...... [/B]

嘿嘿，我先去占个座