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发表于 2013-9-17 11:13:02 |只看该作者

blueskynoble 发表于 2013-9-9 10:41
2013年9 9-16
研究方向中国思想史（特别是史学思想史）或者宋史（特别是宋代笔记）
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二次修改完畢。
如果你根據意見修改完成，可以回帖留下最新的SOP哦~

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发表于 2013-9-18 02:05:18 |只看该作者

2013.9.17-24（註明是哪周）
自己的研究方向东亚
SOP/PS的前兩段（不足五行則前三段）
SOP/PS剩餘段落的大致內容
此SOP/PS的終稿日期

前两段
Jacob Grimm, a renowned jurist as well as a beloved editor of fairy tales, states that “Dasz recht und poesie miteinander aus einem bette aufgestanden waren, hält nicht schwer zu glauben(That law and poetry rise together from one bed is not difficult to believe)” (8). Law is a recurring subject in literature, largely because it is able to produce the quality of drama that the latter craves. Legal scenes, consistently tense, bring conflicts into focus and go to the core of any issue; therefore, when I intend to examine the social realities in late-imperial Chinese vernacular novels, I choose to adopt the legal approach.

Rejecting the simplistic views that either reduce law to a set of rules impervious to human interference, or equal it to a mirror of class interests, James Boyd White, in The Legal Imagination, sees law as “an enormously rich and complex system of thought and expression, of social definitions and practices…a language…[that] structures sensibility and vision” (xiii). As a result, he advises that legal plots in literary texts be analyzed, in that such endeavors will be able to reveal those unstated assumptions that underpin our society. While agreeing with him, I would take one step further and propose that it is even more enlightening and urgent to study the legal blunders in great literary works; the fact that, consciously or unconsciously, the author is willing to risk the authenticity and relatability of her work and the fact that such inaccuracies are at least tolerated suggest that those legal aberrations are consistent with deeply hidden social structures and can reveal previously unsuspected realities.

剩下的研究的大体方向一个小的literature review 然后自己的背景咯

我不知道截稿日期是神马--

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发表于 2013-9-18 18:13:12 |只看该作者

huimie 发表于 2013-9-17 11:13
二次修改完畢。
如果你根據意見修改完成，可以回帖留下最新的SOP哦~

恩好的正在修改第二遍改完一定发上来

谢谢斑竹

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发表于 2013-9-20 12:16:02 |只看该作者

Chengfucius 发表于 2013-9-18 02:05
2013.9.17-24（註明是哪周）
自己的研究方向东亚
SOP/PS的前兩段（不足五行則前三段）

Done~非常成熟的結構了。期待成熟的修改稿^ ^

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发表于 2013-9-20 12:18:01 |只看该作者

發現一種可能傾向，爲了顯示自己了解學界（和學界有聯繫），有時會列舉諸多書名人名。如果不是該校教授，可以適當刪減，或將之集中在1-2段（literature review），SOP最好多談談自己的想法、研究。

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Chengfucius 发表于 2013-9-18 02:05
2013.9.17-24（註明是哪周）
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別忘了及時上傳更新哦。

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blueskynoble 发表于 2013-9-18 18:13
恩好的正在修改第二遍改完一定发上来谢谢斑竹

期待ing~

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发表于 2013-10-3 11:22:54 |只看该作者

最新修改的

My love of Chinese literature extends back as far as I can remember. One of my most vivid memories from my high school days is of me simultaneously writing poetry in class while trying to hide it from my teachers. The poems that I scribed were undoubtedly immature in construction, but they were original. The feeling of pride that swells after creating something out of nothing but one’s own thoughts is incredibly rewarding.
It was my love of writing and of literature that led me into the fields of journalism and publishing during my undergraduate studies at *** University. I believe that one only gets into these fields for the purest love of vocation, as the world is constantly telling advocates of literature, history, and other realms in the arts how difficult it is becoming to make our way in this chosen profession.
My academic performance was rather humdrum, consistently finishing middle of the field in my subjects and achieving a GPA of 3.29. I strongly believe that this mediocrity was not due to a lack of knowledge or effort on my part but instead a shortage of inspiration. While the material covered in class was adequate, we were not challenged to question and debate, to analyze compositions to the fullest. What is the point of literature and the written word if not to generate healthy discussion?

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