5.26的
先说说总体,楼主读音不错,是不是因为周围有人读的有点拘谨,感觉有些音都没读开,比如want to,for什么的,开始还以为你是故意说的伦敦腔。。。
TASK1 结构没有问题。20‘到24左右停顿时间太长,楼主可能没有想好,楼主建议你打个底稿吧。37’ amazed by beautiful scenes an friendly people there自然些。42‘是liked?应该用现在时吧。
TASK2 15’应该是are much more important,漏了一个are;26‘木有听懂。。。30’楼主说的是then I decided??楼主发th的时候试着卷个舌把。。其他的都挺好的。例子也比较清晰。这能说这么多了,渣渣一个,你参考着看把。
来的太晚太晚!
20140519
TASK1
前面说的都很好,内容组织的也很好,发音也不错。
但最后一句话:So my friend do so with a large amount of money,我认为前面加上一个I hope that...会更好。
TASK2
i think this is no point in doing so...
我觉得this换成there更好,so已经指代前面那件事了,this放在那里不合适.
I spend very little in clothing. 换成spend very little on clothes. 因为clothe作动词用的情况特别少见...至少对我来说,嘿嘿。
这么晚才来点评,很抱歉。
话题提示:Task 1 One of your friends has suddenly received a large amount of money and has asked you for advice on how to handle this money. What advice would you give to your friend? Give reasons for your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with this statement? People should dress according to the latest fashion.