use computer to replace it, not sure "to replace it" is appropriate or not
pick one to ?
I think you don't nee to say"I will answer this question ...." you can just answer it, because 2min is too short to describe something, you'd better make better use of it
I do think you have a very good pronunciation, I should learn from you
I love your ending in part 2, however, I was thinking would it be better if you describe the story by using "I " instead "you"?
Sorry for the replying in English, I have some difficult in typing Chinese, or install a Chinese input .....
梦里找路 发表于 2014-8-27 00:30
827 a success your friend achieved
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD1or77
a junior/high school?
什么island没听清
In today's newspaper media,不用加newspaper,
wild(th) animal?
for a girl to do .. there are two "kind" in short distance, you know
a successful thing(no s)
I am not good at pronunciation....so I leave it blank...
But I think may be it is a better idea to point out what the success when you start talking, because I learned that the success is in your last sentence.
Sorry for the replying in English, right now, I have a problem in typing Chinese.....
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6JmVj0
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自评:
梅花音似乎有问题;however;Mr;live;first;what he said 后面的单复数不一致;需要改进语调
另外,到底是on internet 还是on the internet呢?