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【IBT 学习小组100+】独立写作每天的作业在2楼

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由于小作文有听力文件的硬件要求，我会在组员找齐后和大家具体讨论联系方式。独立作文题目将以旧托185题和机井为主。
本组的作文形式是：由本人组长, 寻找题目，每天晚上(除周日)凌晨1点前交作业,次日14点上交批改的作文 综合与独立写作各开两个贴,分别为上交作业的贴,与批改作文的贴.第二个发作文的人给第一个修改，第三个给第二个修改，以此类推。第一个给最后一个修改。因为本人时间也有限，不可能追着组员要作业。帮助没有被修改的组员修改，一个两个也可以，多了就做不到了，所以，你可以不写，我也不会催，累计三次不交而不请假的自动退组。对于交了作业却不修改的，出现一次就勒令退组。
每次的作文帖请不要占楼不发作文。这样下面的人就不知道自己该改谁的了。也不要自己开帖发布练习。这样身为组长的我为了统计，会找得很辛苦。

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我把今天的作业题目修改下, 不好意思哈, 发现08北美机经独立写作重复性大, 我们靠机经练了.加油!

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Agree or disagree: it is important for families to regularly eat their meals together.

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Do you agree or disagree：Technology helps to make people's lives simpler or make people's lives more complicated.

11.25
To solve the problems present and future is it necessary to understand the past?

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People today spend too much time on their enjoyment --what they like to do --rather than what they should do?

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The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual. Do you agree or disagree?

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Agree or disagree: it is more important to have the rules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to work and school.　

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政府应该在医疗保障还是环境治理上花费更多精力.

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Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past

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政府是应该放更多的钱在access internet 上，而不是public transportation .同意否？

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The telephone has a greater effect on people's lives than the television do.

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(184)Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

The condition of study, which plays an important role in the process and outcome of study, often leads a hot debate among students. Some students consider study ing alone bebefits us more. However, others stand on the different ground. They belive studying with a group of people is better. As far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter opinion. In the following passages, I will use specific reasons to illustrate my my point of view.

First, to sudy with a group of students will do a great help for our study. Soppuse you have taken part in a study group, you can study together to discuss the problems you may meet in certain subjects.Three heads are better than one. The problems can be solved efficiently. And when the final exams are coming you can be clear about what you should review since you have discussed the problems with your group members. The scores of the exams will tell you the progress you have made. I do agree to study with a group of students.

Second, if we join a group of students to sudy, we will make more friends. For instance, my friend Lily once had few friends. But after she took part in a study group to pass the College Entrance Examination you can often see her talking with her friends happily on the campus. Lily told me that the students in her group were very kind and the always encouraged her and she did appreciate this kind of relationship.Now she not only has passed the big exam, but also has got some good freinds. We should study with a group of students, shouldn’t we?

Finally, attending a group of students to sudy, we can have a lot of fun. Suppose you meet a mathe problem in your study you may think it is so boring and lose your pacient to study. But if you study with a group of students you can make jokes with each other and you may forget the bad mood because of the laughters. Or you feel happy to study just because one of your group members says you look great today. There are so many examples. Can studying with a group of students benefit us more? The answer is definitely “positive.”

Taking into account all the factors above, we may safely arrive the conslusion that studying with a group of students is a wise option. It can help us study, bring more friends for us and make a lot of fun in our daily life.However, we can also see the problems that we may meet if we study together, and for example, sometimes it will take a long time for us to discuss and we may be disturbed by other members when we sutdy at one room. But compared with the benefits we can get from it I will also hold the opinion that it is a wise, rational and sensible option to study with a group of students.

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Some people hold the opinion that they like to study with a group of students in many ways. Others, however, point out they want to study alone. Personally, I would prefer to study alone because I think this choice has more advantages.
There are numerous reasons why I like to study alone, here I explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that I like to study in a quiet environment. As for me, the study environment is essential for my study efficiency. For example, when I was reading a book in the library, there were a lot of students here too, I was disturbed by their talk and discussion badly, however, when I went out in the classroom, where is cold, so few of students like to study there, I can concentrate on my reading now and just finish a 200 pages book in half days. So I really think to study alone make me more efficient than to study with others.
Another reason why I advocate the positive attitude toward studying alone is that learning is a process for oneself, so how much you have learnt is depended on yourselves but not others. In our daily life, when you want to learn a skill, such as computer operation, however, others maybe do not want to study it, they want to improve their oral English so they can not study with you, in this situation, you must focus on your objects and study it by yourselves, so you should find a book alone, and slove some problems by reading some manuals on your own. when you master that skill, you may be also agree the argument that to study alone really make you to learn true knowledges.
Of course, choosing to study in a group also has advantage to some extent, one is that you can asks someone for help when you can not figure it out; or some talented student can share their notes or understanding on a problem with you etc. but if you just depend on others, you may not grap other knowledge for a long time.
When all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of studying alone carry more weight on those of studing with others. From what has been discussed above, I firmly believe that studying alone is better choice for me.
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People seldom agree with each other with such trivial issues as whether study alone or with a group of students, some people prefer to study alone as they do not want to be bothered by others. As far as I am concerned, although learning with others might be disrupted, I still prefer learning with others.

Admittedly, learning alone indeed has some merits; one of the most important would certainly be avoid disruption from others. By learning alone, we can totally put all the concentrations on books rather than discussing problems with others which wastes us so much time. For example, we you are devoting to solving a difficult math problems, you are likely to be interrupted by your classmate who is asking you an unrelated question, therefore you have to stop your thinking and help him/her solving the question. However, when you have helped your classmate and come back to your study, you can hardly remember where are you have been thinking. In this way, studying in a group may waste more time and energy.

However, it is still questionable to assert that group learning is not working. As a matter of fact, group study has much more benefits than drawbacks. By learning with others, students have an excellent opportunity to learn the strong points from others; we all know, different people have different ways to study, some way are difficult and complex while some way are easy and simple. If we learn about the best way of learning from others and drop out the old way of thinking, it can definitely develop our study efficiency. For example, I often use an old fashioned way to solve an easy physical question which spend me half an hour to solve it, but after discussing the question with other teammates, we conclude a better way to achieve the answer which only consumes 10 minutes to fix. In a sense, group thinking can result in a more efficient way of study.

Another advantage of learning with other is that it can help students develop their thinking ability and sense of cooperation which is quite important to their future career. When discussing a tough problem, students are free to give different opinions and ideas, which will certainly enlighten others’ thinking ability and help to create better and fresher solution. Consequently, this way of discussing will bring everyone’s talent to the full play. Moreover, since study together can not only find better solutions to problems but also develop their thinking ability, students will become more willing to cooperate with each other and form a good sense of teamwork, which cannot be achieved by learning alone.

To wrap up in a nutshell, although learning with others may sometimes wastes much time and lower the study efficiency, the advantages of group learning far outweigh the disadvantages. It creates better environment for students to learn from others, enlightens their thoughts and teaches them the true meaning of team spirits. Therefore, studying with others would be better than studying alone.

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When we stroll around compus , we always can see that some students are siting in the grass and talking happyly together, sometimes they discuss fiercely ,sometimes they debate a questiom enthusiastically.In contrast,someone who is siting on a chair under the trees,it looks like he thinks a problem deeply but he hasn’t got the answers for a longtime. In spite of studying alone would give you a quiet enviorment,I prefre to study with a group.

Previously I decided to practice my speeking English skills by own myself,but even since I had learned that it was hard to make a progress no matter how diligent I was,I turned the way of just imitating from movies’lips and talkshows to make a learning group. After that,we designed a schedul that members in the group prepared a topic and relevant materials before we were meeting on Sunday every week.As a result,I used the speeking tips which I learned from the English class and spoke them loudly to the group members. Finally,I had got a lot of advice from the members and did well in the speeking English.

Another advantage of studying with a group is that sharing members’ unique experiments.As we known,members in a group may be from different place all over country as well as they would have various backgrounds.Therefore,we can experience all kinds of culture and different opinions about life.If a person study alone,he just gets the knowledge from books and limits to know the pleasure of something funny such as making friends,working for each other and so on.

In conclusion,studying with a group not only makes us remarkable in the field of we search but also widens our minds about the world.Today,it is hard to imagine a student can solve all the problems he meets without the other’s help in a group.Regardless,I would like to choose studying with my friends other than studying alone.

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It can not be denied that study alone has many advantages, such as high efficiency to learn things, an idealized quiet study place and independence. However, study with a group could learn how to deal with others and how to cooperate with a team appropriately. Also encourage self, learn from others,. That’s why I prefer to study with a group.

Study with a group could help us learn how to deal with others and be cooperate with a team. We are able to get the chance to discuss together, solve problems together, seeing the strength of cooperation. I remember there was a polity class on my high school, and our policy teacher told us to discuss in groups. I was in my four-student group, we discussed enthusiastic and got lots of good ideas. When we got ideas in different ways, we doesn’t like individuals that only think on their own ways, we knew it’s a teamwork, so we learned to combine the ideas, and be cooperative, thought more about others. That makes a big different because our ideas are more strong and reasonable, since we conclude all the ideas of us. And we made a high opinion on that class. We realized that being cooperative can make our work more spectacular.

Of course, study alone could be more concentrate on one subject. But do we really need such kind of “concentration”? If I got a chance to choose go to dorm to finish my assignment alone or go to classroom, I prefer to go to think study with a team is superior, we could learn more things in a team, classroom to do my work. Because study in the classroom could give us the atmosphere of learning and study with classmates together, we may try harder on study. We may have motivate to study, since we see us study together, and someone may even learn better than us, so we will not be bored and feel tedious like when we learn alone.

I believed that study alone could have a high efficiency on learn things. But I because we could learn from others, broaden our horizons. Each person in the group has their own strongpoint and weakness, by study in a group, we not only could see others advantage and get a good use of it to make it become ours but could see ourselves weakness then correct it. It will benefits us as a whole.

Study alone could be helpful in some ways. However, study in a group got more advantages. And I think it is the best way to see us clear and make efforts on our shortages.

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08.01.12. Government should focus more on natural environment problems and less on economic development.

Some people hold that goverment should pay more attention to natural environment problems than economic ones. as far as I am concerned, I totally agree with this opinion.

First and for the most, the natural environment is very important for the development of the whole country. In ancient time, all of the countries are agricultural ones, and they were dependent on the natural environment to survive; even in morden time, our progresses are more related to industry, but we can not deny the true that the environment still play an inportant role in our economic and social development. For example, the main resources for the fuel are almost from natural environment; our cars are dependent on ptroluem to run, the common using energy – electricity, which is also come rom coal or water. So it is hard to image how the human beings will be if there is no natural environment in our earth anymore. Therefore, the government can not ignore the importance of natural environment.

Moreover, the natural environment is the fundamental base for economic development. For example, if a city want to attract some investors to their city, but their natural environment is heavyly damaged; there are some dead fish floating in the river, and some terrible semlls in the air, it is not difficult to image that the investors will come to this city. On the other hand, if the city’s natural environment is well preserved or improved, their street is clear, and parks are beautiful and attactive, apparently, it is more likely that they may get some investment from others. Maybe it is true that when the government focus on the economic develpoment, we can make some profits easily, while the natural enviroment can not provide so much interests quickly, but in the long run, the fate of our economic, even our country is decided by our naturel environment.

Last but not least, there is a good criteria to judge wether a government is qualified or not, that is the living condition of the citizens. According to our experience, the natural environment is cruical to our health, the beautiful park provide a good place for us to relax, the fresh air make us breathe freely. In contrast, the ceonomy sometimes bring stress or presure to us, maybe your boss ask you to finish 100 contracts in a month, but in fact you can not complete half of it, so it really cause some mental presure on you.

In sum, the natural environment does offer us a lot of benefit, it is our backbone for our economic and social development,and it is also essential for everyone’s health. Hence, the government should try to improve the natural environment, which play more inportant role than economic development.

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167. Schould school buy computers or books?

There are many difficult decisions that school supervisors must make . If school has extra funds, should school purchase computers or books? This is one of the descisions that school should make. Different people may have different answers. Personally speaking, I consider that buying computers for students can benefit us more. In the following passages I will use specific reasons to introduce my point of view.

Providing computers for students, it will offer students a better condition to study. As we konw, computers can record mountains of information. Students can easily get what they want through using computer at dormitery instead of staying at crowded library. At the end of a semester we can always see students waiting in long queue in library to borrow some books for the finals. If we have computers to get e-books, this situation will be improved. So why not to buy computers for students?

If we shtudents have computers, we can surf the internet to know more about world which can offer us a wider window towards the world. We have walked into an information world, and the world is changing fast every day. We need to make full use of computers to step by step to realize the modernazation, globalization and civilization and make a stable foundation before we enter the workforce. For example, in two thousand and eight Beijing held the Olymlic games. Through copmuters students can surf the internet to watch the big game at home, and the Chinese students can also know more about other contries in internet. I do think students need computers.

To offer computers for students, students can make a better communication with others. Teachers, parents and friends can contact with us at any time. Students can send emails to ask teachers some questions after class. And parents can know us more if we don’t live with them. By using the computers we can even talk to friends who are far aways from us on the internet. I can continue to give examples. Should school provide conputers for students? The answer is definitely “positive.”

Taking into account all the factors above, we may safely arrive the conclusion that it is a wise, rational and senible option to purchase computers for students. With the help of computers students are more convinient to study, which they can also open their mind and keep touch with others. There are so many advantages, and I do agree to buy computers for students

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Governments should focus more on natural environment problems and less on economic developments.
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Nowadays, citizens enjoy the convenience resulted from economic dewelopment,but they always ignore the naturall environment problems around them.For instance, they walk along the dirty street and drink polluted water everyday.Gradually,the poor circumstance wiil do harm to their health.In my opinion,government should pay more attention to natural environment ploblems and less on economic developments.

On one hand,natural environment closely relates to every aspect in our life.If there are no fresh air,clean water and unpolluted foods,it can’t imagine that people are still keeping healthy and working as normal.However,a group of people would argue that they live in the “boxes” all day and have no relationship with environment.,for example,they are sleeping in their apartments, going to work by their cars, working in company’s buildings and returning their homes after being off work by their cars day after day . Yet the advanced life style brought by ecinomic development can’t cover the reality that natural environment is destroyed by human beings.There are lack of clean rivers and lakes and resources for our offspring in our natural.Therefor,government should focus more on natural environment.

On the other hand,beautiful natual environment would promotes the economic develpments as well.Take my hometown for example,recently,local government closed many factories which produced a great number of pollutants.Furthermore,large sums of money were invested in the improvement of the environment,such as the treatment of wast water,trash recycling and so on.As a result,more and more tourists from all over world take vacations at my hometown,and then local economis have a sharp development.

In conclusion,it is the responsibility of the government,representive of the people,to spare no efforts to deal with the environment problems.Only by doing this,does the economic development have great meanings to people.

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Do u agree or disagree? Governments should focus more on natural environment problems and less on economic developments?
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We all know that natural environment plays an important roll in our economic developments, a good nature condition could make our life more easy and happier. We could have less time to go to see doctors, and more time to enjoy our life. So it has to be a significant influence to a country. However, I do not agree that governments should focus more on natural environment problems and less on economic developments.

Economic development is a fundamental requirement for having a good nature environment. Good economy could help improve people’s life condition, satisfy the needs of our people. If people became to live in a better life, the whole level of the society would be improved. Until an appropriate situation, the government could then encourage the whole community to protect the environment together. For instance, the small town called HuiLongguan located near BeiJing, it was just an old town living on agriculture at the beginning, and since the government claimed to improve the whole city by improving the economy of countries first, HuiLongguan began its first change. Just in short three years, it turned to a city with people live in high quality of life. And since they have fully strength of economy, they made the city with a fine scenery. And I can not believe the environment changed up side down without improve the economy first.

Also, improve economy also help people to become unity. I believe the economy improvement could also have positive effect on people’s sense about environment protection. Hangzhou is my hometown, people live in the city have high consciousness about the protecting our living condition. It is also rare to see citizens throw trash somewhere. A good economy makes people to seek for a better life. And they would consider improving nature condition as their own duty. Even people do not see the trash cash, and throw the garbage somewhere, others who see will still pick up the trash, and throw it to the cash. As a result, economy could unified the community as a whole.

Government focus on the nature condition could help a city in some ways, but take all the results into account, I prefer to stand on the side which government put the economy at first.

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Nowadays the impact of economic developments on our daily life is undeniable, but it also comes with a great environmental cost. Therefore there is a raising debate on whether the government should spend more money on natural environmental protection or economy development, many people support economic development as it exerts great benefits to our human beings. However, I believe protecting the environment is more essential considering the current situation.

Admittedly, economic development indeed gives rise to some merits to the society. One of the most important is that it helps improve our basic living conditions. When our parents were young, they often suffer from the hardship of grave economy; they did not have enough food to eat or good place to live. However, nowadays due to the economic development, our basic living conditions have been greatly improved; we have opportunity to eat all kinds of food from all over the world, we can buy any fancy clothes we want to wear and we also live in a big house with a happy family like a prince or princess. We can hardly imagine what our lives would be if the economy has never been developed.

However, it is still questionable to assert that economy development is a blessing, as a matter of fact; it brings about a variety of environmental problems which jeopardize our living conditions. The most obvious environmental problem is brought by factories. Since the factory can not only bring a number of jobs but also makes a great contribution to national economy, it has been a major source of economy. However, at the same time, it also brings pollution to the environment; For instance, the chimney of a smelting plant spread out smokes to the air without an end. The smokes, which contain carbon dioxide and sulfur dioxide, are extremely harmful to both the environment and human beings. If people take in too much these kind of smoke, they are more likely to die from some related disease, such as cancer which cannot be cured easily.

Another significant problem to note is that the damage of environment caused by the economic development also endangers other species and human beings. By producing products and making profits, the factory often pours waste water into river and strings without purification, which harms the lives of animal and plants, such as fish, lobsters and waterweeds. What is worse, it may also affect the lives of local people who live on the river. For example, the local people are likely to drink the water or eat the fishes in the river which contains some mineral elements from waste water, such as lead. If that happens, millions of lives would be in danger due to the economy development.

As the reasons mentioned above, although economic development are beneficial to the society, we cannot the harmful effects brought by such improvement. As long as the government pay attention to the problems and take measure to solve the issues, I am sure we can benefit from both the environment and economy.

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08-01-18.people are happier when they finish a challege or difficult job than they do an easy one.

Some people hold that people will be happier when they finish a challenge or difficult job.On the contrary, others believe that they feel much happier when they crack an easier one. as far as I am concerned, I think people will be happier when they complete a more tough one. There are several reasons for it.

First and for the most, from the birth of human beings, we were struggleing with nature for better living, so human like the challenge, and we will feel very proud and successful when we overcome them. It can be given a concrete example as follows. When I was a child in the high school, I did very badly in my maths, and in the first two semesters, I even did not pass the month test of maths for one time, so the maths had been the a big challenge for me. In order to make some progress on it, I often stayed up until 12 PM. What’s more, I would turn to the teacher for help after I spent several days on a singal problem without any results. Three months later, I eventually passed the final maths exam, I was very excited, because I had get over the challenge which perplexed me for the past year.

Another reason why I advocate the attitude is that challenge or risks can give us opportunity to make progress, even promote our civilization, so we will be much happier. Take the invention of lamp for an example, in the past, we did not have electrical lamp in the evening, even we can make electrity, people did not find a good material to keep lamp lit for a long time, so lots of scientist attempted to look for some methods to solve it. Edsion, one of the greatest inventors in our human history, he had try many kinds of materials to find the properest one, even the human’s hair has been his specimen, so when he got the best one, he not only lit out the lamp, but more importantly, he lit out the modern development of our society.

Of course, when we finish the easy things we may be also very happy, one example is that the teacher ask us to write an essay in English, I finish it in 10 mintues, in this condition, I also feel happy, because I will spend the rest of time for watching movies, but that is not as crucial as other challenge ones.

When all these factors are comtemplated, the happiness we gain for finishing the challenge or risks will be more than finishing an easy one. From what has been discussed above, we may reach the conclusion that people will be happier when they overcome a challenge.

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Nowadays an expanding number of people tend to choose a easy and relaxed job as they prefer a easy-going working style. However, other people hold view point that a challenging job is better for it can make you feel happier when you accomplish it. Although a challenging job is rather difficult to handle, I still believe that the benefits from this job far outweigh its disadvantages.

Admittedly, a challenging job indeed gives rise to some problems. One of the most significant is that it exerts great pressure on people. In order to achieve the difficult goals, people always have to figure out the best solution to the problem. As we all know, everything has two sides, if we do not compare the both sides carefully and consider the things in the long run as well as those in current situations, we cannot make the right choice at the right time. For example, since there are many ways to promotes sales, such as television, internet and catalogs, the salesmen have to consider which means is the best to make the most profits. However, if they made an unwise decision, it may put the company profits in danger. In this way, the challenging job usually makes a great pressure on salesmen.

However, it is still questionable to assert that taking challenging job is a curse, as a matter of fact; the profits it brings about are far more obvious. Just as the old saying goes,”pressure engenders impetus.” When we undertake such tough task, we are in an ideal environment to do the best of ourselves which help to dig out our potential talents. Still taking the promotion sales for example, if we never work under such stress, we might make the decision without thinking. Yet, since the task is directly related to the future profits of company, we will take all the energy and efforts to finish this task which we never think we can handle. Once we succeed, it can not only help us realize our potential but also increases the opportunity of promotion.

Another benefit worth mentioning is that the challenging task enriches our working experience which helps us work better and faster. If we are used to the easy-going working style, we will learn nothing in the end as we always doing the tedious and common work, which cannot prepare us for the future development. On the contrary, in a challenging job, there is always something different and new to see and experience which greatly increase our working experience. This can be best illustrated in a leader, who has to communicate with the subordinates as well as his team members, who also have to deal with the physical and psychological problems of the companies and employees. If we have handled all the problems properly, this accumulated experience will make us never be afraid taking other kinds of harder work.

Since the promotion and the accumulated working experience are the best to satisfy our needs for the future development, we can enjoy the greatest happiness and sense of achievement by working a challenging job. Therefore, people feel much happier when they finishing a challenging job than accomplishing an easy job.

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Some people share the opinion that people are happier when they finish a challenge or difficult job than they do an easy job. Though others argue that this statement is partially, I totally recommend that overcome the difficulties of a job could bring much happier to a person. Because I consider happy is consisted of confidence and satisfaction.

Overcome difficulties and finish a challenge makes people feel confident which could contribute to a happy life. When people finish a challenge, they share the same feeling that they have got a great achievement then they become more confident and happier. Compared with the easy job, challenge is more likely make people feel frustrated. Hence, finished the challenge could be happier in the contract of an easy one.

Go through the difficulties leads to a sense of satisfy. To the people who are struggling with the difficulties, this kind of satisfaction means happy. Some people could argue that the easy job can also lead to satisfaction. I would like to say that only the difficulties could make people feel great satisfaction because of the effort they devoted before. Moreover, going through the difficulties means that the working is meaningful to the people. So, people could always feel more happier when they finished the challenge.

Of course, easy job can make people happy. The working people paid and then they gain. However, when comes to the situation that we must compared which one could make people happier, I would like to say that the achievement through hard working must make people feel happier. Easy job could hardly fulfilled people’s ambitions to reach a great confidence and satisfaction.

All in all, I am greatly support the opinion that happiness comes more when compared with a challenge and difficult job to an easy one. Confidence and the sense of satisfy construct the happiness.

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