Andy,my brother who is 12 years old, does her homework after school until 20clock at night every day. There is no time to play with her friendseven for doing some household works. However,the(this) way of study have been supported by most teachers and parents. Themain goal of what most of them agree with the approach of learning isfor(感觉有点绕,可以写简明写) children to better to digest knowledge learning in class. But, formthe point of me, I think children should both study and play with otherpeople as well do some housework.
Firstof all, study is important to children. Learning, form the class taughtby teachers, make them know the normal(fundamental好些) knowledge, such as math,physics, geology and so on(有such as了这个要删去), which serve to children’s daily life. Myneighbor has a lively son, Mike, who is 6 yeas old. Last Sunday, theywent to Renmin park, when mike’s parents bought tickets for watchingperform where was in the south of park, took by animals. mike feltthirst. In that case, he walk alone to a shop which was located in thenorth of park without telling his parents. he should walk through somany trees and turned a lot of, but finally he bought a icecream andthe money he gave was correct. He remembered the way he went andcharacters of way, finally, he took icecream and came back to hisparents. At that point, his parents primarily got angry with him,however, they were pleased. The reason was that they knew theirchildren could took advantage of math knowledge and logic method toremember the way he walked and calculated the correct money bought foriceream.(这个例子不错) 0 Y# w s$ b8 k, Y: X- \
In addition, apart from studying, play is necessary to children. Psychologicalresearch has given rise to some interesting findings concerning withthe important of playing. The result have suggested that the children,who frequently play with other people, is more confident in study andalive than those do not. Mikeoften spend his spare time playing with his friends, thus,he is notafraid of talking to strangers and very self-trust. For instance, miketold me that his schoolmates, who is(删去) luca, rarely speak to others, whenteacher ask luca to stand up and answer questions in class, she alwayslower her head and not reply to the issue fluency.
However, afterchildren finish their homework, and have spent some certain times inplaying, no matter how the way of playing. I think it is necessary forthem to do some household chores. The reason is that it not onlyconduct to foster independent ability but also help parents. ; t/ G/ h8 p, u3 c
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Withthese advantages, we may conclude that the study and play experience aswell as doing housework which will guarantee a more comfortable lifefor children and cultivate the sense of confident as well independence.
论点很清晰,例子也很detail,但是把家务和学习、玩的比较部分比较少,可以深入讨论一下,显得结构更加完整。
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