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发表于 2009-12-18 17:44:46 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

题目：Do you agree or disagree: people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place.
   How many cities or countries have you been lived in since you were born? How many differences are there among these places? What is the settlement you are in now like? And are you going to still keep staying in the place you live at present all life or going to another place to be you next settlement? Maybe some people respond that they love their present living city deeply and never leave it forever, and other people hold the view that it is impossible and inconceivable to spend all life in one place. In my point of view, i deem that people should live in the same city all life instead of moving to another place.
First and foremost, the life will become much easier if you live in the same place. And this advantages are much more obvious and strong when people are in trouble because we have more and more friends in the living city. For instance, when I was admitted by university five years ago, all family members and friends were proud of me. But a highly intractable problem was put forth that I could not afford the big sum of tuition fees. As the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. At last I went to university with the help of my friend in my living city through lending me the money. There is on doubt that it is easier to live when we have many friends around us since they are willing to give you hands. Supposing a man who just moves house to another new and strange city, meets some serious troubles such as illness and accident and so on, but he gets to know few friends there, what should he do? Can we imagine how poor and hard the man will be? Of course we can.
   Secondly, it is pretty harmful for career and family to often move house from one place to another. When moving to a strange and new city, you have to prepare for greatly large amount of things again such as job, house, and education for children. At present, unemployment rate is more and more higher due to the negative effect of global economics crisis. So it is extremely difficult to find a job. What's more, we never imagine how soaringly and frenziedly the house price is going up, housing problem is becoming much more scabrous for most of people. Furthermore, children will feel lonely because they seldom have friends or playmates in the new place, and even they have to adjust to a new teaching style which is completely different from the former one, maybe with which it is difficult for them to deal. In contrast, people who spend his all life in the same place, will never worry about the troublesome problems mentioned above.
   Admittedly, people will meet fresh things if they move house to another city or country, and they can feel different custom and life style from the previous one and get to know new friends. But these advantages can not compete with the benefits that living in the same place brings about when your family and career and even you life are taken into consideration.
   In a word, from what we have discussed above, we can draw safely a conclusion that it is better to live in the city all life than move to another place.