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发表于 2009-12-26 19:51:41 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue 11

In the times of globalization, people have paid attention to find out different methods to solve the most persistent social problems worldwide. Under these circumstances, the author points out that it is an effective solution to build a global university to develop students in the process of solving these problems. But I cannot entirely agree with the author, as maybe nobody can be sure that the students at such a university can really solve the enduring social problems, and even it is a truth, there is no need to support such a university, as we can accomplish this through global cooperation.

Admittedly, it is not doubtful that the scholars and students at such a global university can exchange their ideas about the worldwide social problems more freely and conveniently. Coming from different countries and dedicating in different areas, the academics can work together on the same global issue and give different kinds of advice from their own perspectives. Consequently, the students can be built well roundly and analyze the social problems more deeply with broad insights. If this is the case, of course the graduates from the university will benefit the world.

However, this is based on the assumption that all the social problems can be solved on campus, while actually there are so many serious social problems which also call the mutual understanding and cooperation among national governments. Nowadays, the persistent social problems cover the areas of resource, population, and environment, etc. Most of the problems can only be solved at the expense of economic development, which is a sensitive topic of all developed and developing countries. In this case, even if the scholars and students would find out theoretic perfect solutions, it will be less meaningful.

Furthermore, even if we believe the academic accomplishment of such the scholars will be very helpful to address the social problems and the students with well-rounded development will handle the problems easily, we may still wonder whether it is rewarding for the nations to support such a global university. Here my suggestion is there is no need, as modern internet technology has made the communication of long distance possible. The scholars can express their opinions about the same issue through email or internet meetings freely. And global seminars and forma do a good help to enhance the cooperation in academia. Thus, the development of a global university becomes meaningless, as we have already built numerous virtual global universities with the help of advanced communicational technology.

To sum up, although it may be helpful to develop a global university to address the tough worldwide social problems to some extent, it is not encouraged. Because scholars could communicate with the others conveniently, and besides the academic research, the national governments should also have mutual understanding and cooperation.

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发表于 2009-12-31 00:22:27 |只看该作者

Issue 11
In the times of globalization, people have paid attention to findout（把out去掉）different methods to solve the most persistent social problems worldwide. Underthese circumstances, the author points out that it is an effective solution tobuild a global university to develop students in the process of solving theseproblems. But I cannot entirely agree with the author, as maybe nobody can besure that the students at such a university can really solve the enduringsocial problems, and even it is a truth, there is no need to support such auniversity, as we can accomplish this through global cooperation.
Admittedly, it is not doubtful that the scholars and students atsuch a global university can exchange their ideas about the worldwide socialproblems more freely and conveniently. Coming from different countries anddedicating（dedicating在这里是什么意思?）in different areas, the academics can work together on the same global issueand give different kinds of advice from their own perspectives. Consequently, thestudents can be(be去掉)built well roundly and analyze the social problems moredeeply with broad insights. If this is the case, of course the graduates fromthe university will benefit the world.
However, this is based on the assumption that all the socialproblems can be solved on campus，（应该改成university吧？还有however后应是but的关系吧，但这里while似乎与前一句承接关系不是这样的哦）whileactually there are so many serious social problems which also call the mutualunderstanding and cooperation among national governments. Nowadays, the persistentsocial problems cover the areas of resource, population, and environment, etc.Most of the problems can only be solved at the expense of economic development,which is a sensitive topic（好像不是很敏感的话题吧？） of all developed anddeveloping countries. In this case, even if the scholars and students wouldfind out theoretic perfect solutions, it will be less meaningful.（这段是建立在社会问题能在大学里解决的基础上说的，但是社会问题真的能在大学里解决吗？给出的原因只有一个—已经济为代价，很不充分的理由，而且啊，个人认为这也不是一个很好的理由啊！）

Furthermore, even if we believe the academic accomplishment ofsuch the scholars will be very helpful to address the social problems and thestudents with well-rounded development will handle the problems easily, we maystill wonder whether it is rewarding for the nations to support such a globaluniversity. Here my suggestion is there is no need（这句不太通啊）,as modern internet technology has made the communication of long distancepossible. The scholars can express their opinions about the same issue throughemail or internet meetings freely. And global seminars and forma（forum）do a good help to enhance the cooperation in academia. Thus, the development ofa global university becomes meaningless, as we have already built（还没有建立呢，应该改成wecan built）
numerousvirtual global universities with the help of advanced communicationaltechnology.(这段论证很充分啊)

To sum up, although it may be helpful to develop a globaluniversity to address the tough worldwide social problems to some extent, it isnot encouraged. Because scholars could communicate with the others conveniently,and besides the academic research, the national governments should also havemutual understanding and cooperation.

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