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TOPIC: ISSUE120 - "So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."
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TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-1-31 11:53:14
提纲：
开头：回顾历史不管从科学，教育还是政治上来说，都是很有必要的
主一：科学：回顾历史可以避免弯路，提高效率
主二：教育：总结以前教育体系的缺陷，改革
主三：政治：不仅可以避免严重的问题（战争）更可以通过和以前对比，找到希望
主四：但是在某些特定方面，过分的沉浸在历史中只会导致裹足不前：technology
结尾：我们一定要认真研究历史，但是又不能让历史束缚了我们自己的思维，还是应该创新
I agree with the speaker's contention that with soar development of our technology, so much is new and complex today. However, looking back of an understanding of the past really provides little guidance for living in the present? Absolutely not! No matter from science, education and politics, looking and researching history is pivotal and inevitable, if we desire to better our life and improve our society.

To begin with, history in science, in particular technology, provides valued treasure and premise in order current scientists to develop further latest technology. As Newton said that we could succeed because we stand on the shoulder of giants. If scientists only pursue into which they desire to research, but ignore the earlier experiences, they may take many mistakes and do some meaningless researches that previous scientists may also did. But if scientists could look back for an understanding of the past and built a system data based on the previous data about what they already research, they could effectively to achieve their destination and beyond others. Thus, researching history is much more vital for scientists to point out some advanced discovery or invention.

On the other perspective such as education, looking back history is also inevitable. Moreover, if we ignore the mistakes of previous education, the consequence is very huge-- influence the future of our society, because children actually are our future. For instance, the traditional teacher-centered educational system has a grave problem that it only provides knowledge which the school and teacher desire students to learn, but not the students truly prefer to study. That is to say, the traditional education ignores the personal interests of every student and fetters their future. Fortunately, education experts look back and realize that serious mistake, and then suggest a novel teacher-centered educational system. Thus, the quality of education throughly reformed for the reason that we look back and understand the mistake of the past.

Finally, in politics, looking back is also and even much more important than any other areas. How can our society, especially government improved from prehistory to modern society? That is based on the history events and previous politics. For example, from history, we all realize the importance of peace. Thus, we built UN to prevent war and preserve peace all over the world. Also, research history could also beg some mistakes. On the other hand, how can government encourage and promote the morale spirit of public? The effective way is compared with some historical events. For instance, America is suffering a huge financial crisis that almost tenth people lost their job. President Obama quoted many historical periods at his first State of the Union Address in order to encourage and promote the confidence of American. It is obviously have effect and indeed rebuild their confidence for the government. Thus, looking back for an understanding of the past history in politics not only can promote the confidence of public when they suffering difficult, but also could begs serious wrong and better our society.

While it would be tempting to concede that in some particular conditions, undue research history or straight use the previous experiences without any personal thinking is also problematic. For instance, many researches cannot find further breakthrough just because they tangle in the much more previous data and principles which fetter their own thinking and limited their personal idea. That is why some marvelous inventions just trigger from some occasional events, such as the invention of steam engine just based on the observation of boiling water jacking the pot lid.

In conclusion, we must emphasize the pivotal effect of looking back for an understanding of the past. They can guide us to better our society effectively. At the same time, we also cannot be fettered by so much previous data and experiences but without our personal opinion.

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发表于 2010-1-31 23:28:24 |只看该作者

2# hyq533
好人呢~刚下完~改得好认真啊~
先来说声谢谢~再慢慢研究~

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发表于 2010-1-31 23:48:38 |只看该作者

3# xiemeng2370
批改的真的好认真~太感动了~我记得你12号考吧~还能腾出宝贵的时间帮我改~
我还记得第一次银落帮我改的时候满篇飞红~基本上被拍的一无是处~
今天这是第二次被改，我惊喜的发现语法错误少多了（我的要求很低的。。。）
关于那个新和复杂，写之前我也想了，可是没思路，所以干脆就不提了~
关于例子一直是我的大问题，我没准备例子根本就。。。。。。
一个是网上不是爱因斯坦就是牛顿的，有点俗
最主要的还是因为我背不下来，尤其是人名。。。。。。
所以例子这块我也不知道咋办呢~你是咋准备例子的？

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