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发表于 2010-7-2 12:33:50 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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Most people prefer others making decision for themthan making a decision for themselves.

Makinga decision, especially a right one, is pivotal yet not very easy in our life.Thus, some people prefer the decisions offered by others rather than making themby themselves. After a profound comparison, I consider that taking decisionsmade by others can be very harmful while making decisions by ourselves is mostappropriate.

Tobegin with, I concede the importance of consulting to others particularly thosewith abundant experience when making decisions. Advice from experienced peopleis absolutely meaningful. It can prevent us from going the wrong way as well asimprove the efficiency of achieving our goals. This also suggests why in somecountries such as the United States, teenagers are encouraged to visiting geracomiums.Not only can they help the older people, but themselves can learn a handful ofknowledge and experience beyond the textbooks about making their bestdecisions.

Althoughthe benefits of having experienced people’s advice when making decisions standundeniable, simply taking the decisions made by others is obviouslydetrimental. First, other people may not know us and our situations in depth. Consequently,decisions from them might turn out to be unable to cover all the aspects thatshould be taken into consideration so as to make sure the decisions are proper.Even parents may overlook some important facets about their children if theymake the decisions for them, not to mention others. What is worse, providingthat we were used to take the decisions made by others rather than ourselves,what would we do if at such circumstance of which we have no one to turn to fordecisions. Then we would have to make our own but awful decisions, which willput both ourselves and others in jeopardy, such as a crime.

Anotherreason why we should make our own decision instead of having someone else do itis because we can gain a large amount of benefits and avert the risks. On theone hand, making a right decision is not an easy job. It requires enoughknowledge, plenty of homework together with the personality of being resolute.These three requirements spur us to learn more knowledge, be more diligent andbecome more adaptable to society.
On theother hand, we are the ones who know ourselves and what we are confronted withmost precisely. In other words, it is ourselves who is going to suffer directlyfrom the consequences of the decisions, not anyone else. Therefore, we will bemuch cautious when making our minds. And then the consequence would be lesssevere, if not good at all.

BillGates made his own decision to drop out from Harvard and start the Microware sothat he is now the richest and one of the most successful people on earth; manycommon Jacks and Toms had their parents make the decision of going to collegeand study in the majors that they were not really interested in, and theresults turned out to be little pleasure, if not none at all. Apparent is thedifferent consequences of having decisions made by ourselves or others.Therefore, for better decisions and better life, one should make his/her owndeterminations.

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发表于 2010-7-4 01:37:53 |只看该作者

Most people prefer others making decision for themthan making a decision for themselves.

Making a decision, especially a right one, is pivotal yet not very easy in our life.Thus, some people prefer the decisions offered by others rather than making themby themselves. After a profound comparison, I consider that taking decisions made by others can be very harmful while making decisions by ourselves is most appropriate.

To begin with, I concede the importance of consulting to(去掉) others particularly those with abundant experience when making decisions. Advice from experienced people is absolutely meaningful. It can prevent us from going the wrong way as well as improve the efficiency of achieving our goals. This also suggests why in some countries such as the United States, teenagers are encouraged to visiting geracomiums.Not only can they help the older people, but themselves can learn a handful of knowledge and experience beyond the textbooks about making their best decisions.

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Although the benefits of having experienced people’s advice when making decisions stand undeniable, simply taking the decisions made by others is obviously detrimental. First, other people may not know us and our situations in depth. Consequently,decisions from them might turn out to be unable to cover all the aspects that should be taken into consideration so as to make sure the decisions are proper.Even parents may overlook some important facets about their children if they make the decisions for them, not to mention others. What is worse, providing that we were used to take the decisions made by others rather than ourselves,what would we do if at such circumstance of which we have no one to turn to for decisions. Then we would have to make our own but awful decisions, which wil lput both ourselves and others in jeopardy, such as a crime. 0 u2 m* K# ]  v0 ]5 J  t2 o) s2 o
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Another reason why we should make our own decision instead of having someone else do itis because we can gain a large amount of benefits and avert the risks. On the one hand, making a right decision is not an easy job. It requires enough knowledge, plenty of homework together with the personality of being resolute.These three requirements spur us to learn more knowledge, be more diligent and become more adaptable to society.

On the other hand, we are the ones who know ourselves and what we are confronted with most precisely. In other words, it is ourselves who is(are) going to suffer (不一定是坏决定，不全用suffer)directly from the consequences of the decisions, not anyone else. Therefore, we will be much cautious when making our minds. And then the consequence would be less severe(同上), if not good at all.

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Bill Gates made his own decision to drop out from Harvard and start the Microware so that he is now the richest and one of the most successful people on earth; manyc ommon Jacks and Toms had their parents make the decision of going to college and study in the majors that they were not really interested in, and the results turned out to be little pleasure, if not none at all. Apparent is the different consequences of having decisions made by ourselves or others.Therefore, for better decisions and better life, one should make his/her owndeterminations.

关于这个题目我有一个问题x想探讨，是让论述是不是大多数人都倾向依靠别人来做决定，还是论述应该依靠自己做决定还是依靠他人。因为我觉得二者是有区别的。你的见解很中肯，希望能和你交流下。

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