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发表于 2005-6-5 20:52:10 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

issue147
"Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
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提纲：
tradition和modernization之间的相关性和共性决定了它们能够和谐共存，并指导人们的行为和思想。
B1 放到整个人类社会的进程上来看，modernization是由tradition基础之上deprive而来的，严格说来是tradition的一个延伸。因此两者之间有很大的共性和相似性。
B2 tradition能为modernization提供丰富的经验性理论，对其进行丰富和修改，必要时刻阻截一些越过人类德道底线的行为和思想。
B3 尽管两者存在一定差异性，但这仅仅是由时间和地域上的差异造成，它们无疑都是对它们各自存在的时代最成功的诠释，因此这对两者互相参照和完善更具价值。
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Tradition and modernization are characterized as two contradictory concepts of social definition according to their differences on representation of civilized process. However, their common characteristics determine that both of the two significant exiting forms interacting and communicating compatibly with each other in human society.

Both tradition and modernization are two relative and flexible definitions when confined by the whole process of civilization as a whole. Tradition is an assembly of categorization and summarization about human culture, economy, experience, consciousness, virtue and so on, which forms and transforms during long-term human history. While modernization should be more precisely described as direct representation of modern civilization, including contemporary politics, economy, moral standard, law system and so on, and a conclusion of full range of modern society. Although there is no restrictive connection between them, even with some opposite point on interpretation of world and society by considering their external formations, modernization should be recognized as a product derived from tradition by putting them on the whole process of human civilization. Similar and substantial characteristics that exist in both tradition and modernization have determined dispensable and natural connection between them. For instance, modern architectures, inquiring into ancient styles of construction and taking advantage of aesthetic principle in history, gather innovative method of technology and traditional elements to create new and common acceptable styles of architecture. The perfect compatibleness of tradition and modernization create new definition of human's attitude and perspective toward contemporary world and become one of the effective ways to improve pluralism and maintain prosperity of social diversity.

Besides, tradition provides abundant empirical theories and evidences for the adjustment and assimilation of modernization. The adjustment of existing form of modernization is not only depended on the addition of human's practice but also the contrast with that of tradition. For instance, the technique of human clone is a tremendous challenge toward human's traditional morality. The availability of technical aspect reflecting highly advanced modernization means not the possibility of obtaining common agreement and acceptance by considering tradition in modern society. At this point, the practice of new techniques cannot fly in the face of traditional human moral standard. Meanwhile, the compatibility of them provides people relative complete options to retrospect and promote by analyzing things from different perspectives and angles. Tradition and modernization are both uniform and paradoxical on expression and interpretation of human behaviors and attitudes in contemporary society.

Admittedly, the differences of these two concepts indicate the contradiction between them. We should still realize the significant similar factors connecting them. For the different factors are resulted from the difference of time and regions, or more exactly, the separation of traditional perspectives and the modern ones. However, both of them succeed in establishing complete system of human attitudes and morality during their contemporary periods. Considering the development of human society as a whole, these values of tradition and modernization are more precious for the contrast with each other.

In sum, we can conclude that the compatibleness of tradition and modernization exists objectively and dispensable. People should take advantage of absorbing their common benefits and excellent factors by comparing both of them. Thus, the more compatible connection between these two concepts will bring in more stable and precise description of human society and effective guidance in human morality and attitude.

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发表于 2005-6-5 21:18:28 |只看该作者

issue147
"Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
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提纲：
tradition和modernization之间的相关性和共性决定了它们能够和谐共存，并指导人们的行为和思想。
B1 放到整个人类社会的进程上来看，modernization是由tradition基础之上deprive而来的，严格说来是tradition的一个延伸。因此两者之间有很大的共性和相似性。
B2 tradition能为modernization提供丰富的经验性理论，对其进行丰富和修改，必要时刻阻截一些越过人类德道底线的行为和思想。
B3 尽管两者存在一定差异性，但这仅仅是由时间和地域上的差异造成，它们无疑都是对它们各自存在的时代最成功的诠释，因此这对两者互相参照和完善更具价值。
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Tradition and modernization are characterized as two contradictory concepts of social definition according to their differences on representation of civilized process. However, their common characteristics determine that both of the two significant exiting forms interacting and communicating （这句话没有谓语）compatibly with each other in human society.（观点，两者和谐共生）

Both tradition and modernization are two relative and flexible definitions when confined by the whole process of civilization as a whole. Tradition is an assembly of categorization and summarization about human culture, economy, experience, consciousness, virtue and so on, which forms and transforms during long-term human history. While modernization should be more precisely described as direct representation of modern civilization, including contemporary politics, economy, moral standard, law system and so on, and a conclusion of full range of modern society. （对于modern的定义，觉得很好，也很有必要，可以做到有的放矢，但是看了下文，很不明白为什么要写那么多的定义在这里，本来以为是要对于他们定义的部分作不同的阐述的，呵呵，不过也没什么不可以了，凑字数和显示文笔的很好的机会：））Although there is no restrictive connection between them, even with some opposite point on interpretation of world and society by considering their external formations, modernization should be recognized as a product derived from tradition by putting them on the whole process of human civilization. Similar and substantial characteristics that exist in both tradition and modernization have determined dispensable and natural connection between them. For instance, modern architectures, inquiring into ancient styles of construction and taking advantage of aesthetic principle in history, gather innovative method of technology and traditional elements to create new and common acceptable styles of architecture. The perfect compatibleness of tradition and modernization create new definition of human's attitude and perspective toward contemporary world and become one of the effective ways to improve pluralism and maintain prosperity of social diversity.（论证不错，我喜欢：），听深入的）

Besides, tradition provides abundant empirical theories and evidences for the adjustment and assimilation of modernization. The adjustment of existing form of modernization is not only depended on the addition of human's practice but also the contrast with that of tradition. For instance, the technique of human clone is a tremendous challenge toward human's traditional morality. The availability of technical aspect reflecting highly advanced modernization means not the possibility of obtaining common agreement and acceptance by considering tradition in modern society. At this point, the practice of new techniques cannot fly in the face of traditional human moral standard. Meanwhile, the compatibility of them provides people relative complete options to retrospect and promote by analyzing things from different perspectives and angles. 可不可以具体点，克隆技术是怎么从与传统的对照中改变了人们的思想的，这里好像看不出来。Tradition and modernization are both uniform and paradoxical on expression and interpretation of human behaviors and attitudes in contemporary society.

Admittedly, the differences of these two concepts indicate the contradiction between them. We should still realize the significant similar factors connecting them. （这句话可否挪到后面去说）For the different factors are resulted from the difference of time and regions, or more exactly, the separation of traditional perspectives and the modern ones. However, both of them succeed in establishing complete system of human attitudes and morality during their contemporary periods. Considering the development of human society as a whole, these values of tradition and modernization are more precious for the contrast with each other.（说明现代和传统的让步来源于地区和时间的不同，这一点论证的有点弱，但是好像本段的重点在于论证即使有不同，但是还是有很多相同的地方，也就是对错误思想的反驳，所以这样也许是可以的）

In sum, we can conclude that the compatibleness of tradition and modernization exists objectively and dispensable. People should take advantage of absorbing their common benefits and excellent factors by comparing both of them. Thus, the more compatible connection between these two concepts will bring in more stable and precise description of human society and effective guidance in human morality and attitude.

总的来说还是不错的，：），特别是语言挺好的，但是对于“One must choose between them”没有进行说明，实际上只说了前半句

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发表于 2005-6-5 22:10:48 |只看该作者

谢谢~~~
偶有个疑问，那就是当题意中从现前后两个逻缉关系时，能不能通过对前面的逻辑进行深入分析而自然推出对后面的选择。
像这道题，前部分说两者不可和谐，而导致个人在选择的时候只可选其一。而通过论证后，偶的观点重于两者能和谐，那么还有没有必要再强调个人在选择的时候所面对的问题？以偶的想，似乎这应该是个水到渠成的逻辑关系。那么有没有必要再强调一下？

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