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发表于 2007-6-12 19:04:44 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

ISSUE155 - "Contemporary society offers so many ways of learning that reading books is no longer very important."

提纲:
1、读书仍然是一个重要的、不可替代学习方式。
2、其他学习方式的优势。
3、读书的优势及其他手段的劣势。
4、结论：重视书的价值，不排斥其他学习手段。

WORDS: 580 TIME: 00:45:00 DATE: 6/12/2007 6:30:32 PM

Thanks to the development of the science and technology we are provided with many means of learning. No matter which way to use when we learn the world as well as ourselves, television, newspaper, internet, or radio, magazine, etc, we are introduced in the sea of the knowledge. However, as the maxim states, a good book is a light to the soul, reading books is still and will continue to be an important way of learning which can not be replaced.

Admittedly, other means of learning have many superiorities over the book. Internet is convenient in searching whatever you want to know, but the information will not be very profound and most of the time the valuable information is available only to certain group of people. Besides, the long time users always have trouble with their eye sight and the health conditions. Let alone we can not carry a computer to wherever we go, that is it can not be portable. As to newspaper and magazine, they are good at informing readers with latest information, but the information remains little and sometimes not very accurate enough. Moreover, most of the information they provide are something related to entertainment. The price of certain magazine is too high to reach everyone's consumption. Let's look at television now. It is undoubted that television do play an important role in our life and in our education. In recent years, it is common for many adults to further their education through by taking part in TV university or by means of television. But on the other hand, the information they provide can not be used more than once. If we want to watch or review the material again, it almost impossible.

Book, our old friend, is still a preferable means of learning in modern society to some extent. Generally speaking, the information in books are always systematic and authoritative. Due to its unique characteristic, the creation time is longer, the content is more abundant, the quality is higher compared with other script resources, reading book is still the first choose of many people, no matter what purpose their reading is or what kind of book they read. Furthermore, if you are careful enough, you will find that the material of the newly published book are quite light. This change mend its defects that is not easy to take on to some degree. And nowadays you can order a book through the internet, the company will send the book to your home or office and wherever you like. Moreover, books can be used as many times as you like, the information can be checked any time. For its so many merits, the school education, no matter how advanced it is now, still choose books as their most important tool.

In summary, books will continue to serve our learning in many aspects in our life. They will accompany with us all our life, instructing our life journey and being our friends. At the same time, we should not ignore the other means to fulfill our education and other kinds of learning. After all every method has its own advantages and disadvantages. We can make full use of every tool in different situation. And I am confident to say that, with the rapid improvement of the technology, we can improve the book and make it a better servants. Maybe someday the book can be renewed very quickly and easily. And even its other disadvantage will be overcome someday.

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发表于 2007-7-1 00:08:34 |只看该作者

ISSUE155 - "Contemporary society offers so many ways of learning that reading books is no longer very important."

提纲:
1、读书仍然是一个重要的、不可替代学习方式。
2、其他学习方式的优势。
3、读书的优势及其他手段的劣势。
4、结论：重视书的价值，不排斥其他学习手段。

WORDS: 580 TIME: 00:45:00 DATE: 6/12/2007 6:30:32 PM

Thanks to the development of the science and technology we are provided with many means of learning. No matter which way to use when we learn the world as well as ourselves, television, newspaper, internet, or radio, magazine, etc, we are introduced in the sea of the knowledge. However, as the maxim states, a good book is a light to the soul, reading books is still and will continue to be an important way of learning which can not be replaced.这段开头写得超级棒，比我当时写的好多了啊，我得多多拜读一下 :loveliness: （划线的表述特别好啊）

Admittedly, other means of learning have many superiorities over the book.（这句作为TS，好像不太完整啊，因为你接下来举的例子都是先写它们的优点，然后再写它们的不足和缺陷的，所以建议把这句话补充一下） Internet is convenient in searching whatever you want to know, but the information will not be very profound and most of the time the valuable information is available only to certain group of people. Besides, the long time users always have trouble with their eye sight and the health conditions. Let alone we can not carry a computer to wherever we go, that is it can not be portable. As to newspaper and magazine, they are good at informing readers with latest information, but the information remains little and sometimes not very accurate enough. Moreover, most of the information they provide are something related to entertainment. The price of certain magazine is too high to reach （改为satisfy 是不是更好一些哦）everyone's consumption. Let's look at television now. It is undoubted that television do play an important role in our life and in our education. In recent years, it is common for many adults to further their education through by （把by去掉，因为和through好像重复了啊）taking part in TV university or by means of television. But on the other hand, the information they provide can not be used more than once. If we want to watch or review the material again, it almost impossible.

Book, our old friend, is still a preferable means of learning in modern society to some extent. Generally speaking, the information in books are always systematic and authoritative. Due to its unique characteristic, the creation time（这个词怎么理解啊？还希望liuyan姐姐指点一下哦） is longer, the content is more abundant, the quality is higher compared with other script resources, reading book is still the first choose of many people, no matter what purpose their reading is or what kind of book they read. Furthermore, if you are careful enough, you will find that the material of the newly published book are quite light. This change mend its defects that is not easy to take on to some degree. 这句表达很特别哦 And nowadays you can order a book through the internet, the company will send the book to your home or office and wherever you like. Moreover, books can be used as many times as you like, the information can be checked any time. For its so many merits, the school education, no matter how advanced it is now, still choose books as their most important tool.总体感觉这段论述书的优点挺完整的，比我写的好很多啊

In summary, books will continue to serve our learning in many aspects in our life. They will accompany with us all our life, instructing our life journey and being our friends.这句写得好棒哦 At the same time, we should not ignore the other means to fulfill our education and other kinds of learning. After all every method has its own advantages and disadvantages. We can make full use of every tool in different situation. And I am confident to say that, with the rapid improvement of the technology, we can improve the book and make it a better servants. Maybe someday the book can be renewed very quickly and easily. And even its other disadvantage will be overcome someday.结尾将前面的观点比较总结得很完整，赞一个:loveliness:
我的结尾通常都很死板，只是套用模板的几句话，跟你比起来，差距大大的啊
P.S. 你能在45分钟内写出这么棒的文章，真的很让我佩服啊:)

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