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Most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity.
In the modern society, more and more改成large variety of或者换成其他更有档次的单词people go 用GET是否更好 on the way to persue economic success, so it seems a popular question—how can we get to climax 用得好 of economy? It’s good for them to find power in themselves which is individual exertion用得好, but conformity which mentioned in the claim is necessary too.
B1:Individuality对于个人成功的帮助creativity和responsibility。
It is true that nowadays more and more词汇多样性 people realize the importance of individuality through success gain by others as well as themselves. There are two factors lying under individuality which lead to personal economic success. in the eye-economy有这种说法? erea, businessmen win much more guests by inventing new sales methods. For example, Li jiacheng, a distinguished businessman, puts forward a new method to sell buildings by floor which is more convient for ???
Customs and more profitable for businessman. This method hits the great success which lays a crucial fundament to Li’s prosperity. Secondly, individuality means you have to make decisions on yourselves, take risks on yourselves and enjoy profits on yourselves. This is a strong inside motive名词which urges everyone to work hard in his own seak. Just like A student cannot gain academic success unless he realize his study will do himself good有这种说法?not his parents.The same reason lies in economical success.
As we all know,
B2:Conformity对于个人成功的帮助:内外部的collaboration和obedience相关法律、社会、行业规则。
Though it’s important to keep creative and responsible on the way persuing personal success, we still cannot omit the effect of conformity which means obedience and cooperation. Those who want to earn money by business exchanges breaking law have the greatest risk ofin更好 losing everything even their lives. Businessmen cheating or defalting in their promissaries and products always pay a heavy price for their unhonest behavior. Not onlyBisides obedience, cooperation is another rule everyone should follow, becausein the reason thatThe whole world now is a big unity. As for business, there seems有这种说法? an invisible thread linking different businessmen together, from producing, through advertising to saling. To focus ofon a certain business field it’s more often副词作了表语 for a businessman to play one role in this thread. Thus he has to cope with communicate with his partners.
平衡:极端的坏处
From analysis above, personal economical success requires indiviality as well as conformity, otherwise it would be a great mistake. It is alert to point out that these two factors are of the same necessary and they are not exclusive to each other, because more and more换2个词更精彩people go too far in the way of individuality. These persons only concentrate on their own affairs, which would limit their view of things and thus affect their decision-making. They don’t trust others’ ability and personality so that they are troubled by inspecting every details in business. They gain personal interests on the price of others as much as possible. Eventually, they find what they earn is less than what they lose 你觉得用what they have earned is less than what they have lost 是不是更好and they are 用would be是不是更好 far away from success.
Indiviality characterized by Independent decision and critic thoughts leads to creation and responsibility.Prospety of modern business rely on distribution of work and cooperation, and good business environment is based on obedience to law and principal用错了 social rules. With these things换一个 considered, we can conclude that individuality play as an inner reason while conformity an outside reason, both of which contribute to the personal economical success.
///我觉得你倒数第二段的叙述有些问题,我们说的individuality是个性的意思,和闭门造车有区别(你说的是闭门造车)。我觉得你应该从某些人追求个性而脱离了大众,着手辩论。而且我觉得你的论述和你的结论有距离,为什么失去的多?这个是关键。
不看倒数第二段,对全文思路做出评价:中心正确,立意鲜明,特别是最后一句话把论点描述得很清楚。从结构上看,用“拒绝站在任何一边的”思路,采用对照式行文,第三段最好把collaboration叙述多些,这样对照就更为鲜明。最后一段做总结。非常好,值得学习。
Main Entry:conformity
Pronunciation:k*n-*f*r-m*-t*
Function:noun
Inflected Form:plural -ties
Date:15th century
1 : correspondence in form, manner, or character : AGREEMENT *behaved in conformity with her beliefs*
2 : an act or instance of conforming
3 : action in accordance with some specified standard or authority *conformity to social custom*
不明白的词就查W-M,多条意思带到题目里面分析和前面individuality对应的是遵守,和他人一致的意思不要看中文翻译,很多翻译都是网站上相互抄来的,一错百错可以自己翻译题目,印象更深刻,出错的可能性也少一些 |
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