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[i习作temp] issue212 虽然很水,也要坚持下去……求拍啦,留链回拍 [复制链接]

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发表于 2007-8-13 19:13:58 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
TOPIC: ISSUE212 - "If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."
WORDS: 507          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2007-8-12

The statement that "Worthy goals deserve any means" is somewhat exaggerated to extreme, for not only it is hard to determine which goal is worthy, but also to encourage everyone to try any method to reach his/her goal, this world will drop in chaos.

To begin with, worthy goals differs to every individual and each nation, generally speaking, the criterion is quite subjective. For someone who suffers from poverty all the childhood, to struggle for a great amount of property will be a worthy goal; For someone who never enjoys the happiness of family, to establish and maintain a sweet family is a worthy goal. For a country always undergoes great rate of unemployment, terrible famine, a worthy goal will be economic booming, while for a country lacks a potent government and the society is in a chaos, people may define the country's worthy goal as a strong authoritive institute. However, not all worthy goals are harmless to other people on the surface. Given a man who always dreams of his neighbor's beautiful wife sets the goal to win her back as a worthy goal, calamity will visit the harmonious family. Suppose a company aims to take the whole market, home and abroad, though it seems a worthy goal for itself, such goal is a disaster to other companies, even worse, the monopoly will damage the economy all over the world. What's more, a once worthy goal may falls into worthless. Since everything is changing and developing in this world, so do people's goals. In this sense, worthy goal is an ambiguous definition.


To urge people take any way to get the so-called worthy goal will damage the stable society, as well as the goal itself. For one thing, society consists of different people with various goals desirable to themselves. To maintain the order, every individual should consider other people's interest. Take a example to illustrate, anyone may dream to be rich, since money can smooth daily life. Nevertheless, when any method is justifiable, some may choose to rob the bank, steal other people's wallets, even commit murder. Then what the society will be? No one will work, as nothing is guaranteed and no rights are protected, therefore, money from work will be worthless. In this sense, individuals should confine their behaviors under law, no matter how worthy their goals are. To social groups, such as companies, laws and morals should also be took into consideration when deciding means for the suitable goals. For another, worthy goals may decay because of the means. Once the means bring more disaster than the supposed merits, worthy goals lose their original value. Take Nixon for example, as a successful American president, trying to win a reelect is reasonable and worthy not only him but also the USA. However, when he adopted the immoral way, his goal lost its potential value.

In sum, to get a orderly society, everyone should weigh his/her goal properly. More important, adopting the lawful and suitable way to realize the goal, thus, maintaining the merit .  
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TOPIC: ISSUE212 - "If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."

WORDS: 507          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2007-8-12

The statement that "Worthy goals deserve any means" is somewhat exaggerated to extreme, for not only it is hard to determine which goal is worthy, but also to encourage everyone to try any method to reach his/her goal, this world will drop in chaos.

To begin with, worthy goals differs to every individual and each nation, generally speaking, the criterion is quite subjective. For someone who suffers from poverty all the childhood, to struggle for a great amount of property will be a worthy goal; For someone who never enjoys the happiness of family, to establish and maintain a sweet family is a worthy goal. For a country always undergoes great rate of unemployment, terrible famine, a worthy goal will be economic booming, while for a country lacks a potent government and the society is in a chaos, people may define the country's worthy goal as a strong authoritiveauthoritarian?institute. However, not all worthy goals are harmless to other people on the surface. Given a man who always dreams of his neighbor's beautiful wife sets the goal to win her back as a worthy goal, calamity will visit the harmonious family. Suppose a company aims to take the whole market, home and abroad, though it seems a worthy goal for itself, such goal is a disaster to other companies, even worse, the monopoly will damage the economy all over the world. What's more, a once worthy goal may falls into worthless. (这一点很有意思,可以试着多说一点啦。什么情况下,有价值的变得没有意义了?) Since everything is changing and developing in this world, so do people's goals.In this sense, worthy goal is an ambiguous definition

不知道你所说的水是不是就是列举一大堆排比的事实啊?可能是有点分析不够的样子。我觉得就是价值是靠各自的标准衡量的,每个人的标准不一样,每个人的期待不一样,因此价值观也不同。但是,总是还有一些目标是可以被大多数人公认为有价值的,你似乎忽略了对这一点的论述。

To urge people take any way to get the so-called worthy goal will damage the stable society, as well as the goal itself. For one thing, society consists of different people with various goals desirable to themselves. To maintain the order, every individual should consider other people's interest. Take an example to illustrate, anyone may dream to be rich, since money can smooth daily life. Nevertheless, when any method is justifiable, some may choose to rob the bank, steal other people's wallets, even commit murder. Then what the society will be? No one will work, as nothing is guaranteed and no rights are protected, therefore, money from work will be worthless. In this sense, individuals should confine their behaviors under law, no matter how worthy their goals are. (我怎么感觉有点狡辩啊?实在不能认同这个叫做worthy goals, 还是我没有考虑到罪犯们的价值观?) To social groups, such as companies, laws and morals should also be took into consideration when deciding means for the suitable goals. For another, worthy goals may decay because of the means. Once the means bring more disaster than the supposed merits, worthy goals lose their original value. Take Nixon for example, as a successful American president, trying to win a reelect is reasonable and worthy not only him but also the USA. However, when he adopted the immoral way, his goal lost its potential value.这里好像又是时间不够了的样子。。。

In sum, to get an orderly society, everyone should weigh his/her goal properly. More important, adopting the lawful and suitable way to realize the goal, thus, maintaining the merit .  



我觉得你的worthy goals 主要是从个体的角度考虑的,而且举的例子都是一些比较坏的个人,但是似乎忘记了一些受到普遍承认worthy goals 如果能够论证这些普遍认为有价值的目标,也不能不择手段,我觉得文章会更好一些。

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发表于 2007-8-14 18:58:58 |只看该作者
哇噻,菲子也太尽心尽力了,一口气给我改了这么多,感动ing

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发表于 2007-8-15 19:55:43 |只看该作者
再做调整

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