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发表于 2006-7-21 23:39:29 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Argument要不要写thesis sentence呢?

是不是写一句there are several logical flaws in the argument, the argument suffers severl logical flaws这种evaluate题目论证的句子就算TS了呢?
还是说那种建议的句子作为TS,比如那种need more thorough information什么的.

到底什么样的叫thesis sentence呢?

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发表于 2006-7-21 23:45:18 |只看该作者

重述作者观点,指出逻辑错误就是主题句.
例如:
1.A2:TS:It is common that homeowners concern about their property values and selling their houses at an appropriate price is the most important factor in determining whether to sell and to whom they sell. But the experience from Brookville seven years ago may not be suitable and accurate for the author to make the recommendation that a similar policy should be promoted.
2.A4:TS:He makes a comparation of the two company concerning their agent number as well as their revenue last year, also he uses his a example of himself to substentiate his claim.It seems plausible at first glance but not logical after careful consideration.
3.A196:TS:In this argument, the author concludes that breifly television created negative images of people in the business world. To substantiate his point, he claims that business people are responsible for aroud one-fifth of the crime on TV shows, he also quoted a survey of television producers to support his claim.
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发表于 2006-7-21 23:57:43 |只看该作者

指出逻辑错误是具体指出还是泛泛地批评一下呢.
如果是具体指出逻辑错误那在开头段写thesis sentence还是比较麻烦的,要精炼又要指出具体的逻辑错误.
楼上同学提出的例子里象这样的一句好象不错:
But the experience from Brookville seven years ago may not be suitable and accurate for the author to make the recommendation that a similar policy should be promoted,
而不是泛泛地说there are several flaws in the argument.

我看以前的讨论,说restate原文的论证过程不算TS,也没什么意义:
这个帖子:范文与实例同分析：开头是否需要restate原题！（暨Thesis与TS的写法）
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;extra=&page=1

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发表于 2006-7-22 02:24:29 |只看该作者

原帖由 Psychocandy 于 2006-7-21 23:57 发表
指出逻辑错误是具体指出还是泛泛地批评一下呢.
如果是具体指出逻辑错误那在开头段写thesis sentence还是比较麻烦的,要精炼又要指出具体的逻辑错误.
楼上同学提出的例子里象这样的一句好象不错:
But the experi ...

这就是最需要的练习的地方.逻辑可以慢慢培养
语言不是一下就能做到一针见血的,呵呵

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